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(2) Wild lands - Melee 1v1 Map

Submitted by TPE.YelloW
This bundle is marked as approved. It works and satisfies the submission rules.
Wild lands
Wild lands full of terrible creatures and bandits.


Wild lands is a melee map for two players with middle contest areas and near spawns.

Try to creep the orange camps or attack you enemy while he is doing it.

  • 4 Gold mines
    2 Goblin labolatories
    1 Random Heal/Mana Fountain
    2 Taverns
    4 Red camps
    5 Orange camps
    4 Easy camps
  • [2017.04.14] First upload of this map.
    [2017-04-15] Small terrain update.
    [2017-04-19] Added Tavers.
  • Special thanks to everyone that are helping me with new ideas or advices.
    Also thanks to Rufus for pallete. If there are any troubles for using it ill remove it.
  • TPE.Yellou(jellou)
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(2) Wild lands (Map)

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PrinceYaser
Hello, man! Just some reviews: Firstly about the terrain as always: Well, cannot debate much on the terrain, just some points: 1. Try to use terrain itself(I mean raise and other height tools) to make rivers and terrain of the map. That is the way...
Paillan
Both description and screenshots were added, the map looks quite good, I don't agree that the terrain looks that flat, it actually looks quite good, one note though, it's weird how the map is called wild lands and there are towns :P nevertheless, Set...
  1. Paillan

    Paillan

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    Description is extremely lacking, it doesn't even tell what kind of map it is. I am assuming it's a melee.
    There's no screenshots what so ever.
    The map preview image does not help in identifying the map (as it's just TFT CD box image)
    Set to Awaiting Update.

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    Fixup the screenshots this is a gorgeous map!
    Go to Scenario->Map preferences and set the sky, the generic white sky is kinda ugly.

    Other than that, it's a good map.
    The random building in the middle is a cool concept, keeps the map varied.
     
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    Thanks. I will try different sky variabilities.
     
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    Hello, man! Just some reviews:

    Firstly about the terrain as always:
    • Well, cannot debate much on the terrain, just some points: 1. Try to use terrain itself(I mean raise and other height tools) to make rivers and terrain of the map. That is the way to look much more better. 2. The mixing of the tiles is not true(or not enough). You should almost have a terrainer's look. The designing of terrain is an important point. You should look the map from distant in every designing of terrain. Look to the map from a far distance and you'll understand what should be fixed and what should be mixed correctly. Try it, this is an efficient solution. 3. Well, some areas look ugly, sharp and angular while the terrain should not be like that. And you can easily fix it. Like here:
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    4. Some areas were hollow and black. You should fix it. Like here:
    [​IMG]

    5. You can also use cobble path tiles to make the map's terrain better. And please put grass under all of tress. Some of them have stone paths!
    6. The terrain is almost jagged. Please make it more smooth.

    Secondly about the generic and other materials of the map:
    • I like the placing of players and gold mines. You could put more gold mines and more creep units.
    • Placing of trees is also OK.
    I completely agree with @Paillan and @LordDz!

    Overall, for a melee map, this is not bad! I rate this map 3/5. And +2 rep for effort. Hope you fix these points I said and points of other members.
    Just believe yourself to make great maps! (Well, that's my slogan in every reviews of me!) :p

    This was just a review and a constructive criticism. If you are dissatisfied and unhappy of this comment, just tell me and I'll remove it as fast as possible!
     
    Last edited: Apr 15, 2017
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    You might as well reduce the size of the words in your description. As now it seems a bit violent or oversized if you prefer.
     
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    Very much thanks for the support i added some more trees and fixed start locations now ill try to improve the look of the map like u said take the close look and make it prettier, i will also try some stuff with doodads etc. again thanks for all the support it feels good to be new member in this community :)
     
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    Yeah! Practice!
    Supporting new members makes me happy too! ;) (Well, you are not newbie because you joined us from Jul 14 , 2016, though)

    Edit:
    Well, I've downloaded the new updated map but still these issues stand:
    Use Rough Dirt on side of Cobble Paths to make the mixing better.
    Anyways, the rating goes to 4/5.
     
    Last edited: Apr 16, 2017
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    I understand ill add screenshots, tiles should be easy task now that you told me an interesting idea, but the terrain :( im thinking of letting it flat cuz when i try to make it better it looks more ugly :/
     
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    Both description and screenshots were added, the map looks quite good, I don't agree that the terrain looks that flat, it actually looks quite good, one note though, it's weird how the map is called wild lands and there are towns :p nevertheless,
    Set to Approved.

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    Thanks for approving my map and for all suggestions :)