(2) Mercenary Retreat

[Panda]

- The terrain looks nice it could be cleaned up in places, and neutral buildings seem to be placed well accept for the mercenary camps, I wouldn't put them close together like that since people can purchase the higher level creep from the bottom one and then go right up towards the top building and buy another one. I would separate those farther apart. Also, there are 4 mercenary camps on your map, I would just leave it at 2 instead.
- The shape of the map is nice its just too simple, maybe add more doodads or stuff like that to bring it to life, maybe some tall grass or something.

 

[deepstrasz]

It's a good melee map which might spawn controversial strategies with multiple mercenaries, that if players decide to spend resources on them.

Approved.

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[mafe]

- The terrain looks nice it could be cleaned up in places, and neutral buildings seem to be placed well accept for the mercenary camps, I wouldn't put them close together like that since people can purchase the higher level creep from the bottom one and then go right up towards the top building and buy another one. I would separate those farther apart. Also, there are 4 mercenary camps on your map, I would just leave it at 2 instead.
- The shape of the map is nice its just too simple, maybe add more doodads or stuff like that to bring it to life, maybe some tall grass or something.

Thanks! Having several and different mercenary camps is the basic concept I wanted to apply to a map. Nevertheless you are right that I could and should put the middle camps further apart from each other.
-About the terrain, at some point I usually lose my patience to add further doodads

It's a good melee map which might spawn controversial strategies with multiple mercenaries, that if players decide to spend resources on them.

Approved.

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[RFWH]

Wow mafe, Im not sure about the dead trees but it looks like an excellent map, really glad to see it. I'll have to give it a test run sometime soon. ~~~~