While I agree with JesusHipster's and HappyCockroach's comments, I think this is still of overall approvable quality, except for a few technical issues. If you can fix these, I can approve, but it would still be nice if you worked on the animations.
-Number of sequence extents does not match number of sequences (fix in Magos: Edit > Calculate Extents)
-Two duplicate geoset animations (multiple geoset animations referencing the same geoset)
-Several unused animation tracks
-Duplicate Origin Ref
-Fix the Event Objects, some are out of place, some are still like the footman's...
-Portrait has an unused material
See
Sanity Test | HIVE for more details.
Edit: since you made a much better Danath Trollbane, maybe rename this one to something more generic if you update it? E.g. "Veteran Footman" or something like that.