-=Unforgettable World RPG=-

[Spoontoobig]

Unforgettable World

Hello my friends, at the moment I'm working on project called -=Unforgettable World RPG=-

-=Map-Information=-
Map Dimension: 352x352 - Playable 340x340!

STATUS:ABORTED


THE STORY

In ancient times long before we humans first set foot on lands of Atry, there existed an almost immortal race, with a technology and magic far beyond our understanding. These creatures spent mosts of their days ironically plotting their own death and this death looming was the very cause for their downfall.
Tradition was that from the day one of these creatures turned ten, it was to prepare for its death - Its funeral ceremony to be exact. This was due to the very short lifespan of this race, they did at most only live for twenty years. Now one would tend to believe that such a race would never have reached the peak of advancement it did, but that was indeed true that they did - And all thanks to the Ways of Rebirth. A holy ritual that stored the dying bodies memories in containers to be used for the next generation, meaning that every time a new generation began, the collected knowledge and intelligence of the previous would be to their disposal. But then one day, after the death of the king, which was always chosen because of his or her wisdom, the ritual which the king had planned went horribly wrong.. It did not just take away the dying memories of the king, it took every single life, memory and soul of every creature on the entire island - including animals - and as the spell was designed for, it stored all of this in every possible container it could.. spreading the hidden knowledge everywhere around the city.

Now 400 years later, we humans have stepped upon this land of long forgotten tragic. We seek power as most humans do and we are ready to go to great lengths to achieve it. It didn't take long for us to discover just how useful the item containing for instance; a bear soul, could be against a normal opponent.
And when that discovery was made, the hunt for these containers and the war of memories began, in order to use all of this unforgettable world in War!

HEROES
Each Hero has 4 spells.
Mutineer: Primary Attribute: Agility
Spells:
1. Treachery
2. Anger
3. Power Slash
4. Oath Breaker

Canonist: Primary Attribute: Agility
Spells:
1. Canned explosives
2. Beaming Confidence
3. Precision Attack
4. Broadside Strike

Archaeologist: Primary Attribute: Intelligence
Spells:
1. Pure Earth
2. Earth Shield
3. Nature Knowledge
4. Underground Shock

Arcanist: Primary Attribute: Intelligence
Spells:
1. Knowledgeable Surge
2. Frivolous Mist
3. Fiery Cage
4. Star Gazing

Brawler: Primary Attribute: Strength
Spells:
1: Fainting Tactics
2: Coward Punch
3: Grim Labor
4: Drunken Spite

NEED TO DO
Finish & Fix All Classes
Finish Terrain
Finish enemy units.
Finish Villages, Citys, Camps.
Fix some bugs.
Start Beta Version.

SYSTEMS
Save/Load System (CodeGen 0.5)
Custom Experience and Gold System (Thanks to ap0calipse for gold system)
Some Quests
Item Class System (1 Item per type and hero something like that my english is bad!)
Rage System
PvP System
Event System

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CREDITS
Norinrad - Good Job of Priest and Priest Icon
debode - Good Job of Arcanist and Arcanist Icon
Devine - Good Job of Warrior
Juan Ann - Good Job of Warrior Icon
Nasrudin - For great tree model
Ap0calypse - Gold system :>
TriggerHappy - Save System (CodeGen 0.5 - Best)
Special Credit:
RED BARON for Loading screen and Map prieview, Awesome story , awesome hero titles and spells titles ;> <3 !!! Thank you!
Unknown models:
Some Grass Models: Don't know who made this if it's your model, then send me message.

TEAM
Project Leader: Spoontoobig
Main Triggerer: .Talon
Other Triggerers: Spoontoobig
Terrainer: Dragonson
Modeler: - Still Looking for!
Icon Maker: - Still Looking for!

If you good and want to join PM ME ...

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NEWS

Mount system added.


Screenshots

More Comming Soon!

 

[Kettle]

FEATURES
Finish Defender Class.
Finish and Fix Terrain.
Finish enemy units.
Finish Villages, Citys, Camps.
Fix some bugs.
Start Beta Version.

That's not features. That's to-do list.
This RPG does not seem to have anything original? Usual classes, usual spells. You may want something to make the map stand out of the crowd.
As for ideas, you could think of more original spell names. All of arcanist's spells contain word ''Arcane'', which is bad imo.

 

[Spoontoobig]

Yes sorry My english is bad :>! Thanks :< +REP Ofc I need your Ideas ;>

 

[Spoontoobig]

Any Ideas ?!

 

[ap0calypse]

The map dimension is... pretty huge

I would change the name of the classes: Warrior, Ranger, ... - these are all a bit too standard and often not fun to play with.
Only the Arcanist has a good name, but then the name of his spells are too standard :/

Normally the story comes before creating the map (then you know what classes/creeps to add, how the terrain and overall feeling of the map should be).

When I think of "Unforgettable World", I think of a world where danger lurks behind every corner and a lot of people have been killed because they entered that world, yet those who survived got addicted to it and only wished to return, the players would be those people who survived the world and wanted to return, but they got stuck because of [something] and need to do [something] to leave once again.
(Loosely based off the anime "Gantz" :3 ).

Good luck with the project and if you need any help, there's a help section for a reason ^^

 

[RED BARON]

Well lets see:

Story:

In ancient times long before we humans first set foot on lands of Atry, there existed an almost immortal race, with a technology and magic far beyond our understanding. These creatures spent mosts of their days ironically plotting their own death and this death looming was the very cause for their downfall.
Tradition was that from the day one of these creatures turned ten, it was to prepare for its death - Its funeral ceremony to be exact. This was due to the very short lifespan of this race, they did at most only live for twenty years. Now one would tend to believe that such a race would never have reached the peak of advancement it did, but that was indeed true that they did - And all thanks to the Ways of Rebirth. A holy ritual that stored the dying bodies memories in containers to be used for the next generation, meaning that every time a new generation began, the collected knowledge and intelligence of the previous would be to their disposal. But then one day, after the death of the king, which was always chosen because of his or her wisdom, the ritual which the king had planned went horribly wrong.. It did not just take away the dying memories of the king, it took every single life, memory and soul of every creature on the entire island - including animals - and as the spell was designed for, it stored all of this in every possible container it could.. spreading the hidden knowledge everywhere around the city.

Now 400 years later, we humans have stepped upon this land of long forgotten tragic. We seek power as most humans do and we are ready to go to great lengths to achieve it. It didn't take long for us to discover just how useful the item containing for instance; a bear soul, could be against a normal opponent.
And when that discovery was made, the hunt for these containers and the war of memories began, in order to use all of this unforgettable world in War!

Heroes

Mutineer: Primary Attribute: Agility
Spells:
1. Treachery
2. Anger
3. Power Slash
4. Oath Breaker

Canonist: Primary Attribute: Agility
Spells:
1. Canned explosives
2. Beaming Confidence
3. Precision Attack
4. Broadside Strike

Archaeologist: Primary Attribute: Intelligence
Spells:
1. Search
2. Pressure of a decade
3. Whithering knowledge
4. Repenter of the past

Arcanist: Primary Attribute: Intelligence
Spells:
1. Knowledgeable Surge
2. Frivolous Mist
3. Fiery Cage
4. Star Gazing

Brawler: Primary Attribute: Strength
Spells:
1: Fainting Tactics
2: Coward Punch
3: Grim Labor
4: Drunken Spite

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I won't suggest anymore.. this should do. I made the heroes like this in order to fit the story, so their names fit what could have come to an unknown island, be it sailors or people in search of knowledge. If your not going to use these ideas, do tell and I will post them somewhere else.. as they turned out rather well for 5 minutes of plotting

 

[Spoontoobig]

WoW... :> Story is awesome ;]

 

[RED BARON]

WoW... :> Story is awesome ;]

No problem - Now I just hope you can get something useful for the map out of it. You forgot to add to credits that I also suggested hero titles and such

Oh and dude:

Made a new version of your signature, where the text can actually be read

I would have liked if I could get it blueish in text color, but that was too hard to read.

 

[BrutalDarkChaos]

this look CoOl

 

[Spoontoobig]

Yes... Thank you very much!

 

[LsK_LaDyGaGa]

I'm up for joining the team as a brainstormer =D

 

[Spoontoobig]

what...? :<

 

[LsK_LaDyGaGa]

someone who htinks up exact details.... a thinker...

 

[Spoontoobig]

don't understand...? u mean someone who make Ideas ?.. :<

 

[BrutalDarkChaos]

cant wait to its done

 

[Klingo]

Create New Spells

I'm decent for making spell but I don't want to be alone if you wanted me in your team.

 

[Dragonson]

I'm signing up as terrainer!
I'm in a terraining frenzy atm, i just love the stuff ^^

(Terraining Examples)

Edit:
Oh and, if you need spellmaking, i can do Advanced GUI, though no Jass.

 

[RED BARON]

don't understand...? u mean someone who make Ideas ?.. :<

Thats what a brainstormer is.. To be exact its one that comes up with a ton of ideas which are then sorted out by someone else or the person himself.

A brainstormer is used for two things mainly:

Getting new concepts or testing ideas meaning that he'll try to come up with something different one could do..

A little similar to what I did for you, though I acted more like a plot writer.

Good to see some people on it

 

[Dragonson]

That's a good decription of a Brainstormer.
To say it quick though, just call it a Idea-Generator

 

[LsK_LaDyGaGa]

Thanks red baron for clearing that up. Basically I help think up minor and SOME major details. For example:
Hero spells
Terrain Ideas
Boss Ideas
What model To Use
Hero Tooltips
Balance Ideas etc.

 

[RED BARON]

Thanks red baron for clearing that up. Basically I help think up minor and SOME magor details. For example:

No problem. And I believe you meant to write: major

Oh and a small thing Spoontoobig, if you have any questions (in regards to the story mainly), as before feel free to ask.

 

[LsK_LaDyGaGa]

I'm Aus i think its maGor here but ill check that

 

[Dragonson]

You actually think that it's Magor? O.ô
It is major. Magor means something else, completely off topic

 

[LsK_LaDyGaGa]

Yes my mistake =D. Sorry ill edit that.

 

[Spoontoobig]

Thanks for commenting :> And I really need Terrainer! :>

 

[Dragonson]

Well, we already talked about it in the PMS, but i guess that i am now official terrainer for this?

 

[RED BARON]

Well, we already talked about it in the PMS, but I guess that I am now official terrain for this?

Hehe, well could be he wants to have two Seems a good choice, as your screenshots showed that you do have some terrain skills, which would fit a map like this. (Meaning that you seem to create good multiplayer terrain)

Spoontoobig: Feel free to consider me as a outside consultant, as I (as always) feel a bit of a connection to the stories I write. Meaning that I'll check for the integration of the story

 

[DanThanh]

I know VJass, i can terrain and also make spells. pm me if you want any help !
Edit: but i stick to Dusk's damage and buff, Vex's xe system so i wonder if i can import those or not, maybe you use some other systems which do not compatible !

About spell ideas, if you find someone skilled at this, it's good, if not, well, i think we can take some from MMORPGS like Rohan, Runes of Magic...

Here is a small example of my work !
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XW8-C6QTVFY

 

[RED BARON]

I know VJass, i can terrain and also make spells.

Here is a small example of my work !
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XW8-C6QTVFY

Those spell examples are great. Lets hope he'll accept (Else I might have some work for you later)

 

[Dragonson]

Those are good spells INDEED! +rep for that!

 

[Spoontoobig]

WoW Nice... But one problem :> I Don't Understand JASS!!! :> But I want you! +REP!!! If u want yo join pm me ;>

 

[DanThanh]

Ok, then i'm glad yo join, i love RPG, i love fantasy world

 

[RED BARON]

But one problem :> I Don't Understand JASS!!!

That you don't understand JASS is not really a problem, when you got a spell maker. Though of course you can't check it for leaks then.

 

[DanThanh]

Don't worry about leaks

 

[Spoontoobig]

DanThanh when you will be ready work pm me ;> I will give you list of spells

 

[DanThanh]

I'm ready, pm me what i need to do !

 

[Dragonson]

Ehh... i'm currently having small problems with the JNGP, so the terrain is kindof delayed

 

[DeftheLynn]

i've got an idea.
what if 1 hero can choose diferent type of style?
such as knight with full agi, or mage with full str ?
but you have to add skill tree for that ...

 

[RED BARON]

I've got an idea.
What if 1 hero can choose different type of style? Such as knight with full agility, or mage with full strength? But you have to add skill tree for that ...

And just how much sense would that make... Having a mage with full strength and no mana? Kinda spoils the idea of a mage, not to mention that there isn't even mages or knights in this map.

You did read the text right?

If you meant to say that one hero should be able to change between different classes then it would make more sense, but also allow for a lot of overpowering not to mention the fact that it would ruin the idea of having multiple heroes.

 

[DeftheLynn]

no, what i mean is, there's a skill that mage can deal bonus magic damage based on it's str etc.
so it choose the path of templar.
and if it full int, it will choose the path of wizard.
something like that.

 

[RED BARON]

There's a skill that mage can deal bonus magic damage based on it's str etc.
so it choose the path of templar.
and if it full int, it will choose the path of wizard.

Hmm I see the point in that. Something could arise from it, though it would have to be in an altered form to fit the story.

Btw: He would more likely be a Arcane Warrior than a Templer in your example.

 

[DeftheLynn]

sure thanks !
when you will finish this map ?
i can't wait till it's done !

btw, i forgot that templar is from priest

 

[Spoontoobig]

Ah... Trying to work on some triggers... And there is no news from Dragonson about the terrain... :<... I hope if Dragonson finish about ~50% of terrain maybe we can start beta map this week :>...

EDIT: Also got big bug... Don't know what's happened... Tryed little beta version in battle.net with friends(6 friends) And when game started all players shared in two sides... There was a ''Server split'' 1 side with 1 host and other side with other host... Don't know what's the problem.... :///

 

[Dragonson]

Okay... the terrain is coming along nicely.
I've given the first zone(s) a island-style, so that the crossing from one region to another is by bridge.
I am NOT using UTM trees right now, cause i seriously don't like them
But if really needed i can do a make-over with UTM trees later.
I'l post a screenie of the little starting village later.

 

[Spoontoobig]

Okey

 

[Dragonson]

Allright.... here's the beta terrain.
It contains:
-Cute little starting village.
-Forest Region.
-Mountain/River Region.
-Sound Effects.
-A waterfall. (Darned hard to make look good...)

I hope it's big enough, wich it would be in my experiance.
There is loads of empty green space wich you can fill up with creeps and such stuff.
IF it needs to be bigger, it is easily possible due to the island layout, and please take a stroll in it before you judge it (i placed a paladin in it which i used to walk around and test it.)

Here's the map.
A Truly Unforgettable World

 

[LsK_LaDyGaGa]

2 things. Its to circular and weird... Try adding random small "beaches" across the outside. Looks more natural. Also change the terrain for the waters lining to more sandy. Darkg rass in water doesnt work???

 

[Dragonson]

true. It is a beta version though, remember that
I cannot say i have any experiance with terraining beaches, so that might be improvable.

 

[Spoontoobig]

I only see
-Cute little starting village.
But only that island...?! where the other terrain ..? Btw.. I like the village ...
-Forest Region.
-Mountain/River Region.
-Sound Effects.
-A waterfall. (Darned hard to make look good...)
No these things...

 

[Dragonson]

wat? lemme see...
EDIT: ARRGH! Sorry i uploaded wrong version.