Marine On Mummies v1.3

Moderator · Feb 15, 2014

10:22, 15th Mar 2014
Hell_Master: See here one of the mini-mod's review:

eubz;2499076 said:
The Hive Workshop Official

Map Reviewer: eubz
Map Name: Marine On Mummies v1.3
Map Author: Yatsuo Us East
Map Uploader: Yatsuo

Originality
I like the idea. This is a AoS kind of map but with a twist. You select your hero and use units to attack enemy base.

Score: 50/100

Presentation
I like it that you used templates to present your map. You have the needed info like map info, screenshots, credit list and some notes. Very Good indeed.

Score: 65/100

Terrain
The terrain is well made, the cliffs are somewhat used wisely. You used the tile variations. Have enough environmental Doodads, structures and such. You have just missed to add some neutral units to spice up your map.

Score: 54/100

Triggers
You did not care to re-name all your triggers and there are so many location leaks.

Score: 20/100
Critical Error -> Vote for Rejection!

Object Data
Nice that you have imported files but there are things that you must consider: 1.) You forgot to change the sound sets of some buildings. 2.) You didn't care about the button positions of buildings to be built by some workers. 3.) Use Mana Regeneration(neutral) instead of Replenish as your repower ability. And also, use Life Regeneration Aura(neutral) instead of heal because it's kind of awkward for buildings to use replenish and heal.

Score: 20/100
Critical Error -> Vote for Rejection!

Gameplay
I like the idea of purchasing units to attack enemy base. You can use them in your strategy for victory. I am surprized that I can attack my own units and I don't like this.I noticed that gold is increasing at some unknown time intervals and so I looked for a unit harvesting some golds but I haven't found any so what's the use of the goldmines but decorations. TCA still requires a mechanic even I already have 2 or more, what kind of Mechanic is it looking for? One thing more, I like the idea of the 2 side war (Placing units on the northern part of the map as reinforcements(if I am right)).

Score: 22/100
Critical Error -> Vote for Rejection!

NOTE: You still need to develop this map. I see great potential into this. As I have said, I like this map but this hasn't passed yet to the hive standards for approval.

Site Rules
Map still in development? Make a thread in the Map Development Section for feedback.
Need help with triggers/memory leaks? Make a thread in the Triggers & Scripts Section.

Final Score: 38.500/100
1/5 Vote for Rejection

Contact: (Visitor Message) / (Private Message) / (Map Reviewers)

PlankingWolf · Feb 15, 2014

Simple but very fun map to play on. Terrain doesn't look that good, don't use too much cliffs and use more variation on the tiles. That's all I can say for now.

Yatsuo · Feb 15, 2014

I didn't focus much on the terrain would look on this map so much, I focused more on the strategic placement. But I agree with your terrain suggestion for variation and cliffs, once I have more time ill replace it. Blizzard cliff is a faster version to make playable terrain. Although I do prefer constructive criticism, all feedback are welcomed. This is a beta version and I will updates this frequently, so report if you find a bug. Tyvm

Chen · Feb 15, 2014

Looks fun! @Planky, He can use cliffs, but you need to make it not straight but make it curve or what it is called. @Yatsuo, This can be improved, like the terrain.

Yatsuo · Feb 15, 2014

Thanks, I do feel the cliffs are not as natural as they can be , but it more convenient for towers.

Yatsuo · Feb 24, 2014

Going to update this map soon. Sorry for double-post, I want to split content of another topic onto a different post. Also hopefully I can get some attention on this map after 1.2, made huge changes, tier for specific roles and some bug fixes.

PlankingWolf · Feb 26, 2014

It looks better now. You've added a lot of improvement. Good job.

Yatsuo · Feb 26, 2014

Almost missed a credit. Also uploaded a new overview picture of the map. Once I get this finished or something I'll start working on my RPG or RTS. Would 256x256 pixel be better then 128x128. Open for criticism or any idea that will help me improve the map. Ill fixes tiny error in between and re upload frequently.

On the otherhand I've been tweaking and fixing this map frequently to rebalance it. Also i have a wide ass screen so I apologize for screenshot's size

eubz · Mar 14, 2014

Seems like a very nice map. Downloading...
EDIT:
Gonna play this later. I'm sure I'm gonna love this.
Good luck, dude.

Yatsuo · Mar 14, 2014

Thanks man
Holy shit, i just replaced a player slot with Computer, created a new bug. The computer started playing on it own and pressed skills at incredibly fast speed. I removed all inital trigger or any Ai intelligence.

eubz · Mar 14, 2014

The Hive Workshop Official

Map Reviewer: eubz
Map Name: Marine On Mummies v1.3
Map Author: Yatsuo Us East
Map Uploader: Yatsuo

Originality
I like the idea. This is a AoS kind of map but with a twist. You select your hero and use units to attack enemy base.

Score: 50/100

Presentation
I like it that you used templates to present your map. You have the needed info like map info, screenshots, credit list and some notes. Very Good indeed.

Score: 65/100

Terrain
The terrain is well made, the cliffs are somewhat used wisely. You used the tile variations. Have enough environmental Doodads, structures and such. You have just missed to add some neutral units to spice up your map.

Score: 54/100

Triggers
You did not care to re-name all your triggers and there are so many location leaks.

Score: 20/100
Critical Error -> Vote for Rejection!

Object Data
Nice that you have imported files but there are things that you must consider: 1.) You forgot to change the sound sets of some buildings. 2.) You didn't care about the button positions of buildings to be built by some workers. 3.) Use Mana Regeneration(neutral) instead of Replenish as your repower ability. And also, use Life Regeneration Aura(neutral) instead of heal because it's kind of awkward for buildings to use replenish and heal.

Score: 20/100
Critical Error -> Vote for Rejection!

Gameplay
I like the idea of purchasing units to attack enemy base. You can use them in your strategy for victory. I am surprized that I can attack my own units and I don't like this.I noticed that gold is increasing at some unknown time intervals and so I looked for a unit harvesting some golds but I haven't found any so what's the use of the goldmines but decorations. TCA still requires a mechanic even I already have 2 or more, what kind of Mechanic is it looking for? One thing more, I like the idea of the 2 side war (Placing units on the northern part of the map as reinforcements(if I am right)).

Score: 22/100
Critical Error -> Vote for Rejection!

NOTE: You still need to develop this map. I see great potential into this. As I have said, I like this map but this hasn't passed yet to the hive standards for approval.

Site Rules
Map still in development? Make a thread in the Map Development Section for feedback.
Need help with triggers/memory leaks? Make a thread in the Triggers & Scripts Section.

Final Score: 38.500/100
1/5 Vote for Rejection

Contact: (Visitor Message) / (Private Message) / (Map Reviewers)

Marine On Mummies v1.3

Marine On Mummies v1.3 (Map)

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