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15:30, 18th Oct 2010
shiiK: Filesize fixed, more shading and suggested changes applied. There's still a lot of room for improvement, though, and I think the shading still is a little subtle.
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shiiK: Filesize fixed, more shading and suggested changes applied. There's still a lot of room for improvement, though, and I think the shading still is a little subtle.
shiiK: The shading is my primary concern with this work, there's only local shading. You need to make sure parts that are naturally hidden from the sun, due to the model's pose, are darker, while parts that are exposed to sunlight should be highlighted. The eyes could use some work to differentiate them from the rest of the head. Lastly, try to convert to a lower quality .BLP to reduce the filesize.