ZombieLand v.1.2C

[Moderator]

ap0calypse: Rejected

09:30, 12th Oct 2010
Cweener: Rejected (until updated)

 

[NoMoreChallenge]

-Poor description
-Bad Terrain

Please put more effort and work on your map. Uploading the map early while it is not finished, you will only receive the REJECTION message instead of feedback.

 

[Crave.]

Agreed NoMoreChallenge.

 

[Lebsoljah]

I also agree :/

 

[light bolt30]

Vote for rejection;
-Terrain is poorly made
-Description doesn't tell us anything about the map (not enough detail)
-Doesn't seem completed
This map doesn't fit for approval any time soon. More effort and work needs to be put into this. Even though it'll have no chance of approval.
RATING: N/A REJECTION

 

[Ironside]

Vote for rejection;
-Terrain is poorly made
-Description doesn't tell us anything about the map (not enough detail)
-Doesn't seem completed
This map doesn't fit for approval any time soon. More effort and work needs to be put into this. Even though it'll have no chance of approval.
RATING: N/A REJECTION

Review Marked.

 

[Pourquoi]

Rejection.

 

[Eldubs]

I would say, REJECTED!

 

[Goosebearslug]

Ok to start off it seems as though u spent half an hour creating this map -_-. This requires alot of changes if you want it to be uploaded on the Hive. You spelt Rifleman Rifelman on all the buildings and units in the rifleman base. At the moment it is way to simple and there are only 3 spells for your hero. The game only takes 5-10 minutes and for the whole game you are just basicly killing the same zombies.

 

[Marcin013]

Added map Preview

 

[light bolt30]

Fix those grammar mistakes in your description please.

 

[Marcin013]

Fix those grammar mistakes in your description please.

Ok

Sorry for me English Im Polish.

 

[light bolt30]

Rifelmans should be riflemen. Baze should be base. Inteligence should be intelligent. Strenght should be strength. Frendly should be friendly. Some parts don't make sense or could be improved but I'll leave that to the other users to help you.

 

[Marcin013]

Rifelmans should be riflemen. Baze should be base. Inteligence should be intelligent. Strenght should be strength. Frendly should be friendly. Some parts don't make sense or could be improved but I'll leave that to the other users to help you.

Thank you I will fix this
I can't English so good

 

[Titania]

So if your english is not good,you did not read the rules I guess

 

[Marcin013]

So if your english is not good,you did not read the rules I guess

I have read some rules

 

[Titania]

So you were unaware of other rules that you did not read,right?

 

[Marcin013]

New version coming !!!!!!!!!!

 

[Eldubs]

New version coming !!!!!!!!!!

You need to read the rules.

 

[Titania]

You need to read the rules.

Either this guy have a brother or his just rep abusing,look at his rep

 

[Marcin013]

Ok I have read rules

 

[Eldubs]

Either this guy have a brother or his just rep abusing,look at his rep

Are you talking to me? If you are can you tell me what this means

 

[Titania]

Are you talking to me? If you are can you tell me what this means

Go to his profile page,scroll down and see his recent reps

 

[DoctorGester]

Omg, i have a map with same name and preview -_-

 

[Presley0402]

Rejection. This map doesn't even reach basic level.

 

[Marcin013]

Rejection. This map doesn't even reach basic level.

Lol , than show me your map ?

 

[lux19]

I vote for a rejection for the following reasons:
1) Poor Originality.
2) Smallest rpg map i've ever seen. o.o
3) Terrain should be reworked.
4) I suppose that Detheroc (Don't know if i'm spelling him correctly) is a mini-boss, but he's stronger than the zombie king.
5) Rpg maps are not supposed to have only one dialog.
6) I seen that somme triggers are broken.
7) You should take your time. :/

If you want good comments you should work harder :/

 

[ap0calypse]

I wanted to give a proper review, but basically it comes down to this:

Poorly edited zombies en masse, a huge amount of leaks (bad triggering), poor terrain and very short.
On top of that, it's really easy to finish, there's only one item which can never be bought (costs too much), the objects are clearly very lacking (for one, the damage is incorrect because the dice values were never used and the projectile speed is too slow for the marines), etc.

I could continue, but I believe I made my point: 1/5, rejected.