World of Champions V9.0

[Daffa]

A better designed description helps getting audience.

Anyway, where's the credit list in the description?

 

[KNEZ95]

A better designed description helps getting audience.

Anyway, where's the credit list in the description?

When you open the map press F9 and then go to Credits

 

[Daffa]

I'm referring to the Hive description actually. I'm certain the map already do credits well

Though getting a better design for description should be done, that is for a better initial view for users.

I'll leave the rest to everyone else. Pretty much late here.

Hope to see approval of this, good luck.

 

[KNEZ95]

I'm referring to the Hive description actually. I'm certain the map already do credits well

Though getting a better design for description should be done, that is for a better initial view for users.

I'll leave the rest to everyone else. Pretty much late here.

Hope to see approval of this, good luck.

Good night bro sleep well i hope it will be approved also

 

[Deleted member 247165]

I see your AoS on Epicwar almost each day. I tried the latest update and I liked it. I don't like though the terrain and the items you made. They kinda don't build on the role of the heroes. You might work a bit more on them. Aside from that, the heroes are interesting. I also found spelling errors on some tooltips.
Fix your description also! 4/5 from me

 

[Michael the Boombringer]

Please give your map a more original title, like: The Day of Heroes/Champions, A Dance of Glory, The Fated Day, The Swords of Destiny, When Legends Come True etc.

 

[Thing_I]

Hey there!

Please give your map a more original title

I think that the title is fine. World of Champions isn't a bad name. Possibly generic, but there's nothing wrong with generic. Defense of the Ancients? League of Legends? They aren't exactly inspiring names.

A better designed description helps getting audience.
Anyway, where's the credit list in the description?

Daffa is correct, put a credit list! And if you want help looking for a template for your map, check HERE. Hopefully I helped

 

[KNEZ95]

My native language is Serbian so if I made some spelling mistakes do not take it too seriously
Also I am bad at making description like REALLY bad any help about that would be precious

Also guys, if you would like to play this map with my friends and me and many other people that are fans of the map you can add me on Tunngle i host the map there every day at least 2-3 times per day, my username is "KNEZ95"

 

[deepstrasz]

Please avoid uploading your map multiple times instead of editing the main post and updating it there.

 

[KNEZ95]

Please avoid uploading your map multiple times instead of editing the main post and updating it there.

I dont know how to do that? Is there even option for that?

 

[deepstrasz]

I dont know how to do that? Is there even option for that?

First post, where the map is. Go to the bottom of it and click the green Edit.

 

[KNEZ95]

First post, where the map is. Go to the bottom of it and click the green Edit.

Got it bro, thanks, I am new at doing this stuff

 

[deepstrasz]

Well, you'll have to delete the other ones to avoid map spamming.

 

[KNEZ95]

Well, you'll have to delete the other ones to avoid map spamming.

I deleted all the older versions, thanks bro on advice it should be better now

 

[Deleted member 247165]

I found some annoying bugs after trying out more heroes. Blademaster for example. His skills are good but their tooltips have no sense at all. Bladestorm has 5 levels, while the Sidestep has 3 and in its tootip says that "teleports the Warden" while the hero is an orcish Blademaster. His ultimate also, no level description in the tooltip. Only how it works is described. I have to lower my rating to 3/5 . As I said, your AoS has great potential but you gotta fix those bugs. Also, fix your description on Hive. Look at mine if you want inspiration.

 

[KNEZ95]

I found some annoying bugs after trying out more heroes. Blademaster for example. His skills are good but their tooltips have no sense at all. Bladestorm has 5 levels, while the Sidestep has 3 and in its tootip says that "teleports the Warden" while the hero is an orcish Blademaster. His ultimate also, no level description in the tooltip. Only how it works is described. I have to lower my rating to 3/5 . As I said, your AoS has great potential but you gotta fix those bugs. Also, fix your description on Hive. Look at mine if you want inspiration.

Blademaster have no tolltips on all of his spells, as i said earlier not all of the heroes have their tooltips finished

 

[Deleted member 247165]

Then finish it properly before uploading it here.

 

[KNEZ95]

Then finish it properly before uploading it here.

Next version will have all tooltips needed. This one is just to present the map it is not finished yet but it is playable.

 

[Deleted member 247165]

Also, some cooldowns described in the tooltips aren't the ones that really occur. Again the Blademaster. His ultimate is described as having 12 seconds cooldown at level 1, but it recharges after 1 or 2 minutes. Balance it and fix the basic issues for your next update.

 

[KNEZ95]

Also, some cooldowns described in the tooltips aren't the ones that really occur. Again the Blademaster. His ultimate is described as having 12 seconds cooldown at level 1, but it recharges after 1 or 2 minutes. Balance it and fix the basic issues for your next update.

Blademasters tooltips are not yet finished, all spells of heroes are balanced but some of them do not have tooltips finished

 

[Deleted member 247165]

All spells balanced? I found critical strike passives that can deal 4 times the damage of a hero. That is kinda abnormal since in late game when that hero has a lot of dmg and attack rate, 3 or 4 critical hits from it will instakill the opponent. The Vampire Lord second and third skills do the same as the ones of the Blademaster.

 

[KNEZ95]

All spells balanced. I found critical strike passives that can deal 4 times the damage of a hero. That is kinda abnormal since in late game when that hero has a lot of dmg and attack rate, 3 or 4 critical hits from it will instakill the opponent. The Vampire Lord second and third skills do the same as the ones of the Blademaster.

There is no such things you talk about in the map, max crit is 2/2,4/3x it is ulty of night hunter.

 

[Deleted member 247165]

I just played the Vampire Lord (that's his name in the Tavern) and his Dark Affinity passive gives him 15% chance to do 4 times his current damage. (That at level 3 of the spell) his ultimate is Fear of the Dark which is basically the normal Soul Burn from Warcraft 3 just with different effects.

 

[deepstrasz]

Always check/recheck the Map Submission Rules! (Map Submission Rules)

These will help make a better description:

Map description threads

Description Guide - Melee Maps
Description Guide - Maps
Map Description - Templates
Melee Map Description Generator v1.3
Map Description Generator [1.2]
Describing Your Melee Map
BB Codes | HIVE

Screenshots could attract more players to download your work. Make the best of them.

A credits list is required where the names of the resource (models, skins, icons, spells, sound etc.) authors are mentioned along with the specific resource. It would be a luxury to have links leading to the used resources. Credits in the Quest Log would be appreciated.

To make your work run smoother, fix the so called leaks: Triggers - Memory Leaks and Custom Scripts

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