Wolfrider on Foot

[Moderator]

20:05, 4th Apr 2011
anarchianbedlam: Permission received.

As for the model itself. it still needs a lot of work. the proportions are completely off since you basically frankensteined the upper and lower half of two models together. legs are too big compared to his torso/head/arms. also an orc warrior wearing cargo shorts?
the animations are messy. he's leaning too far forward in all the animations, like he's going to fall over. and his feet aren't making very good contact with the ground. Like he's being supported by puppet strings instead of by his own feet on the ground.
Stand2 animation, sword is randomly behind his back and arm is cocked at an awkward angle.

EDIT: switched out the cargo shorts for a thong? interesting. The ribbon emitter on the sword needs to be rotated 90 degrees. ingame it's perpendicular to the blade. i guess ill approve it after that.... even though you havent touched the animations.

EDIT2: Now the ribbon emitter is angled correctly, but its not centered on the sword (see picture in comments)

 

[Hardtime]

dude! awsome model! 5/5!

 

[Skipper]

Lol, I´m Drunken or he has clown boots ?

 

[Arisaitou]

lol clown boots, i'll replace them later

 

[SpasMaster]

Nice one! I am surprised that noone ever made one before.

 

[supertoinkz]

Let's see....
There is no Dissipate animation, no blood splats, and a bit lame death animation. 3/5 from me.

/@ spasorc : Someone already did,

 

[Arisaitou]

Oh...
Okay
dissipate is easy
i'm online with my phone so..
Cant do it now
he meant first in hive'

 

[-Peper-]

The sword looks familiar to me...
Anyway, you can add some things that aren't there on the original model.

 

[Wazzz]

Nice one! I am surprised that noone ever made one before.

They have

 

[Maximum_Evil]

Looks nice but his boots are kinda weird xD

 

[Arisaitou]

Thx alot :|

 

[Marcos DAB]

Try creating a new weapon, more exclusive. To make your model more unique.

 

[13L4M3]

You gotta love those boots ! but ey... not sure they're are giving the right expresion though!
Right now they're like "Wow awesome! gray super mario boots!" but i'd try make something more rough for a warrior .
Anyway i'd just make your "own" sword!
Because that one doesn't fit that much .
Aaazum

 

[Orcnet]

"Who Seyz we Orkses do wer dem clawn bots! of courz we use 'em them gits, we uzz dem for stompin some hummies!"

ehem.. okay on topic, that orc is amazing! although it would be nice if the boots can have some spiky armor like thingy stuck on the front part of the shoes, and that orc is kinda thin, and with the big sword, he looks like cloud strife in orkish version, can you atleast make him more muscle or fatty and make the sword crude. that would be great

 

[Goldendemon]

Damn hes awesome .)
Just the shoes should be fixxed like the others said

 

[MiniMage]

Personally, I'd recommend that you work on the arms because they look tiny and weak. He's swinging that monster sword, he need more muscles. Also, clown boots doesn't really fit orcs imo. XD

 

[Misha]

..looks kind of smooshed together..

 

[CeDiL]

animations look a bit crappy, the legs look like some anime stuff, 3/5

 

[Archangel678]

...tooked a random model in my pc and used it's legs

That... was a bad idea. I'd suggest you change that, and quickly...

 

[rcshaggy]

"What's that smell? OH BAD DOG!!! *Wolf whines*"
LOL....
You got to love Raiders and I enjoyed them in Warcraft III, so I'm bringing them back into my project.

 

[Arisaitou]

Okay ill pick other legs :|

 

[-Grendel]

you should connect the vertices on the horns and helmet it has holes, but i think it won't be that noticeable in-game. but i do recommend connecting it. and why is he not holding his weapon in his stand anim?
but i do like the fact that you made your own mesh.

 

[Kuritany]

That's very impresive. Very nice attack animations, fits well with the way I'd weld a sword.
It needs a portrait, a better death animation, and maybe a new texture (guess it's very inportant for the botton side and the sword. seriously, it doesn't look well.)
I guess it diserve a 3.50/5.00, a and +rep

 

[Arisaitou]

Thanks but its rejected

 

[Cavman]

Them be some looooooooooong legs.

 

[-Grendel]

the sword's sheathe is in an awkward position. that's not how a warrior will position its sword. it needs to be something diagonal to his body

(nevermind the arm holding it just the position of the sword)
also you could add a strap to his torso that holds the sword.

 

[Arisaitou]

i see, tommorow it'll be done

what's a strap

 

[-Grendel]

i suggest using this texture for it: UI\Glues\SinglePlayer\OrcCampaign3D\CampaignOrcSash.blp

 

[Arisaitou]

okay, but i'll make it hold it's sword like cloud

 

[Holy Crusader]

Nice Model dude +rep for this Orc

 

[dragonade311]

It's Very Cooll!!!!!!!!!!

it's 100% Cool but .. the only problem is in the picture his sword is on his butt oh?!!? i didn't seen butt holding sword! but i didn't download it

 

[Fuzzyfury]

just give him Grunt's animations and scale his body parts to grunt's... I think that would do just fine... Good idea tho...

 

[Maximum_Evil]

nice, the shoes are much better

 

[Marcos DAB]

I think, much better now.

 

[CeDiL]

animations till do look crappy!

 

[Arisaitou]

i'll reanimate it . wait

 

[JokeMaster]

Ahh as for me it looks creepy. 3/5 beside its Wolfrider not Wolfryder

 

[Arisaitou]

it's wolfryder when i googled it

 

[-Peper-]

Ryder is a undershirt merk.

 

[MiniMage]

The new legs looks a tad large. at least in comparison with his now tiny little arms.

 

[Arisaitou]

it is the size of a grunt tho..(legs)

 

[MiniMage]

it is the size of a grunt tho..(legs)

I'd either resize the arms or resize the legs. whichever is up to you. XD

 

[Arisaitou]

You guys are free to edit its mesh
not its anim

 

[Zaljinzoo]

you are my savior XD, with a few tweaks this model will be exactly what I need for my project, ty

 

[Arisato]

just give me credits IF you edit, if you don't i don't mind

 

[anarchianbedlam]

that thin blue line is your ribbon emitter

 

[Arisato]

bad info,he left hive
also how can your War3ModelEditor view ribbon emitters

 

[anarchianbedlam]

also how can your War3ModelEditor view ribbon emitters

you cant, you have to test it ingame. you SHOULD be testing any model you upload here ingame first to make sure it works anyway.

 

[Arisato]

oh i see ,