WitchHunter

[Moderator]

11:30, 10th Mar 2016
Ralle:

20:29, 24th Mar 2016
HappyCockroach:
Looks fine, and can be useful. The wow anims are looking alright and still the filesize isn't something out of hand. The cons at the moment are the excessive clipping going on with the cloak. Some animation tweaking would be necessary to prevent that. And Decay Flesh doesn't make the corpse sink in the ground appropriately, it is about the same as Decay Bone. If you come to fix that the rating might be raised.

 

[Heinvers]

Interesting choice of bones. The animations work, BUT have u looked at the textures? Did u made more than half of them 100% transparent? It looks weird that way!

 

[Footman16]

I think that's just the model viewer.

 

[Heinvers]

Let me check it. Yep it's this crappy viewer
Anyway critics. Some vertex-es clip trough eachother.
Notably, the belt part and the cape near the bots!
Other than that it seems good

 

[Edge45]

The hat looks good
you better behead some witches

 

[GreeN!X]

This is great but these things should be fixed:

• The Decay bone and decay flesh are the same
• Animate the cape a little bit so that it won't look like it's glued to the woman's leg
• A lot of vertices are clipping with each other. Like the boots and the cape, pants and the belt, this part of the hat, and this part near the shoulder pads.
• Imo, the TC should only be on the top part of the shoulder pads. So I suggest removing the TC on the bottom of the shoulder pads.
• Cover this part of the model. It's visible ingame.

I think I forgot 1 thing. Anyway, that's my crit. I'd rate it 3/5

 

[MiniMage]

If you nudged the lower portion of the cloak back like 20, I think you'd eliminate almost all clipping with the legs and the cloak.
Enlarging the belt and rigging it with the bone of the chest, it would probably look better.

Also, I think you need to lower the crotch area, the proportions need to be corrected for her to even be considered human.

 

[NhazUl]

You need to fix the knee joints. The bones are too low down the calves and make it look like she's breaking her tibiae every time she takes a step. Centering those nodes at the knee joints will solve it.

 

[Kyrbi0]

Aside from all the changes real modelers talk about above, I'd say you've got a pretty schweet base model, man. : )

 

[Warseeker]

Nice Work

 

[JesusHipster]

The mesh is nice but the rigging (gosh just look at her arms) and proportions (she resembles a dwarf just a tiny bit) are realy needed here.

If you take your time and work on it this will eventualy turn out great.

 

[Aleister]

Yes, needs better proportions.
Great job anyway!

 

[Zartyzzo]

Fantastic model. Would you ever make a version with hero glow? (And maybe a gun, she would be great as a female counterpart to this.)