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[WiP] City

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The terrrain that is one month old here in my folder, im not able to post it here , so here it is.

I know it lack details and contrast. It is more on constructions and atmosphere.

Ideas to improve this terrain?

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Background is almost done , now working on the foreground , suggestions? :)
 

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I actually quite like it.

Two things jump out.
1. It's lifeless.
2. There's not much to look at/it's not framed well.

For 2, you could either make it a larger terrain, or just try cropping it so it's framed better. The former would be a lot better, but the latter is obviously the easy way.
 
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There's something about this terrain that makes me feel like it's cramped, or lacking in
depth, or something. Maybe you should zoom a little more out? Add some close-up
doodads in front of the screen to make the rest of the terrain seem like it's further
away than we know it is? I'm not sure, but yeah, you certainly need some sort of CoF.
 

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I like the terrain, but its a tad bit empty.
Could you help me with those trees you used they look intresting nd useful?
 
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