Elvish City (entry WIP)

[Mr.Goblin]

here's a wip of my entry.... if you have any idea to improve it, i will listen, or i will read your ideas..

 

[Traxamillion]

Wow..

Thats fucking awesome.

 

[Karouk]

where do u get these? UTM or something?

 

[Mr.Goblin]

inspiration = from my head..
Technique = from my hand
models = from the Utm

 

[~Void~]

Hmmm... I like it, but it's got a lot of rough edges. The canopy is too flat, the models on the ground are kinda meh, the light needs to be made smoother, and the light clips in some places.

 

[Acvong]

Looks good, you could add some branches and trees on those huge ones lol, good luck in the contest.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

Hmmm... I like it, but it's got a lot of rough edges.

i can't see it

The canopy is too flat

What are you refering to ?

the models on the ground are kinda meh

Will try to work on it and improve it

the light needs to be made smoother

i'm not as good as you void , teach me?

and the light clips in some places.

I know ><.. don't know how to get rid of it

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thanks for this comments , but i will appreciate it more after you answer me back

 

[~Void~]

Best way to make the light smoother is to make it bigger, and dimmer. Placing 1 huge light is better than placing 3 smaller lights, and placing ten lights with a tinting of 010/010/010 is better than placing one light with a tinting of 255/255/255.

Also, look at the left hand side. There is a big blob of solid color and then a little black hole.

 

[Oziris]

The shrubs in front of the pictures look really ugly, get rid of them at once and what void said.

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[Gilles]

So green! I'd try and add more color.

 

[Naze]

An overused theme, but nice execution anyways.

Also, you placed the shrubs on the ground in an artificial way, they aren't like that in nature. They grow in custers, in a way that you can see the dirt of the ground (mainly in this kind of vegetation).

 

[NinjasDontFight]

The angle of size is epic, but I get a weird feeling that the canopy is filled with water :/

 

[Sabertooth]

With Oziris. The bushes and such in the foreground don't look to good compared to the rest of piece, I'd try some other technique.

 

[Belgarath]

Ashen bushes at the front are ugly, the rest is pretty damn good tbh. sucks that your leaf-canopy is that flat, but thats not really your fault, nor can you fix it very well. all I can say atm is that maybe you should fix the foreground.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

thanks alot for your comments , i hope i could finish it for the competition..

i have 3 exames in the next 2 days ><

 

[leet.firefox]

Hmmmmm, tsk tsk on the World Trees. But I guess it would have been hard to make a tree-village with most other trees.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

those tree rocks you can't deny

 

[leet.firefox]

Yes, but ~Void~:

I'm going to let you all know that if I see a world tree terrain it will not get a very high score

 

[Mr.Goblin]

ah shit....

 

[leet.firefox]

But he also said:

unless it's absolutely brilliant.