Walking Dead

[Moderator]

17:52, 16th Nov 2014
StoPCampinGn00b: See my short review.

 

[bear_369]

Please improve your description and add a screenshot. Let me know if you're new here.

 

[Uklabokalala]

I am new here, and I will need help to change or add a screenshot. Btw your maps look awesome!

 

[bear_369]

Thx. There's a map submission rules here. If you wanna see it then Click here.
There's missing you didn't follow the rules.

Rules

1.A valid author:
If the author's name is different from the uploader's name, please tell us if it's just another one of your usernames.
If you are simply uploading the map of another user to share it with people, without the author's permission, then the map will be rejected.

2. Protected/Open Source? Let the community know in the Hive description.

3. The Quest Log should contain the essential information about the map's gameplay.

Also, you can improve your description by using this without a BBCode skills.
Gonna test your map soon and send some feedbacks if I can.
EDITED
I have played your map and here's the feedback
Good Points
1. The terrain aren't flat so that's good.
2. Shops and fountains. Good for survivors.

Bad Points
1. The tiles in buttom-left of the map doesn't fit too much. :l
2. Why does each units required 51 Foods to train if I only have 100 Food Max.
3. The stone token's icon looks weird and doesn't fit for the item.
4. Why there's a footman hiding in the forest near the area where players start.

Bugs
1. When my trained unit died, My food max will set to 0 so I can't able to train units anymore.

Suggestions

Suggestions

1. Change the terrain in buttom-left of the map.
2. Change the required food of the units to 50.
3. Change the icon of the stone token or something.
4. Fix the bug I found.

I ignored about the footman. It's like an easter egg or something.

 

[Uklabokalala]

In the game your suppose to have one life, and the footman is jut for fun, ill change the stone token right now, and your only suppose to have one character unless you use a squad or you get marines or summon animals. and the tiles in the corner is just to show where the city is. And how do you add a loading screen, I was suggested that. And thank you for helping me, I appreciate it!

 

[bear_369]

In the game your suppose to have one life, and the footman is jut for fun, ill change the stone token right now, and your only suppose to have one character unless you use a squad or you get marines or summon animals. and the tiles in the corner is just to show where the city is. And how do you add a loading screen, I was suggested that. And thank you for helping me, I appreciate it!

Alright and for adding loading screen, just go to "Scenario >> Map Loading Screen" and your welcome

 

[Uklabokalala]

Thank you for helping me and I've updated it to have a loading screen, but its from the game, I'll fix it later.

 

[bear_369]

Your welcome and when you updated your map, Some people will didn't know what you have added. I recommended that you should add a changelog to let us know what will be added, changed, ect in each version.

 

[StoPCampinGn00b]

I'm sorry to say, but this is a very poorly made map. I don't exactly know what to do because there is no quest log. The units to choose from have missing tool tips for their abilities, mismatching icons, and little to no abilities. The zombies are just spammed across the whole map, causing repetitive gameplay. The terrain can definitely be worked on more, the flatness is the worst part about it. Tile usage is plain as well.

I highly suggest you look at the approved maps to see what can be accepted. Read a variety of mapping tutorials. Rules not followed in this map are:
- No screenshots
- no quests log
- bad gameplay (& terrain).

Because of these three reasons, the map is rejected.