[Campaign] Tides of War

[IamFootman061]

I take a look again at your Project, Forsaken.

First, The story, It's really nice though it's from a book.

The character is unfamilliar for me actually, So i don't have much to say about this.

Second, Your making your project so fast. Job well done for that!

I tested your map. Some of the grammars is too bad. The terrain too could be improve a bit like the second screenshot, the water terrain is quite empty. Try to put some small rocks to make it look better. And some river rushes too.

This is a campaign project. Many people is waiting for this like me and i'm one of it. Good luck and have a nice day, Forsaken.

 

[Go'el]

i maybe can put some pig farm nearby, but about the color, no, the Thrall's Horde that attack the city will be red, and as Warsong warrior at the gates and into the city, they will be purple,maybe i add some other Garrosh forces as Red,anyway thanks

It's the Siege to Orgrimmar already??? lol I'm impressed!!

 

[Forsaken]

I take a look again at your Project, Forsaken.

First, The story, It's really nice though it's from a book.

The character is unfamilliar for me actually, So i don't have much to say about this.

Second, Your making your project so fast. Job well done for that!

I tested your map. Some of the grammars is too bad. The terrain too could be improve a bit like the second screenshot, the water terrain is quite empty. Try to put some small rocks to make it look better. And some river rushes too.

This is a campaign project. Many people is waiting for this like me and i'm one of it. Good luck and have a nice day, Forsaken.

Thanks, i'm glad that u liked, and u don't know this characters ? lol
For me i'm not working fast, one year of the project already, the grammar yousef has improved, and heinvers is help me too, the terrain, hmm i will improve a little in this map.

It's the Siege to Orgrimmar already??? lol I'm impressed!!

Just the terrain xD

 

[Heinvers]

Hey Forsaken i'm just the grammar fixer, soo not that much of a helper. Anyway i want this campaign done so i would play it

 

[Go'el]

Hey Forsaken, all the factions of the Alliance and the Horde will participate of this map?

 

[tomoraider]

New Screenshot, how i don't have the campaign for work in triggers, and post gameplay screenshot, so i post terrain xD

screenshot

Looks really nice, though I think the terrain is a bit flat, and you could also put some additional doodads around.

And could you also tell me where you got the Orgrimmar gate doodad? It looks pretty awesome, and I could use it in my Forsaken campaign.

 

[Forsaken]

Hey Forsaken, all the factions of the Alliance and the Horde will participate of this map?

I think yes, all the Alliance and Horde races. If i don't put some race will be Worgen and Gnome.

Looks really nice, though I think the terrain is a bit flat, and you could also put some additional doodads around.

And could you also tell me where you got the Orgrimmar gate doodad? It looks pretty awesome, and I could use it in my Forsaken campaign.

Thank you, i think this too, but how i will add a base at the front, i still don't put all the doodads.
Of course, here it's, all the doodads that i will use:Orgrimmar Doodads(Pag 34-35)

 

[Forsaken]

Btw, just some more Orgrimmar Screenshots:
Also, chapter 2: Trace of Hope is finish xD


Credits for Heinvers that help me do this terrain.

Screenshots

The Front Gate,a little better.

 

[Aragon2014]

I like so much when people's have new projects.

 

[Go'el]

OH MY GOD, that's AWESOME!! Congratulations Forsaken and Heinvers!!

 

[Heinvers]

It was a pleasure to co-work with Forsaken on the terrain for Orgrimmar

 

[Footman16]

Yes the terrain is very impressive but a bit more tile variation would make it perfect. Is the Orgrimmar terrain playable, or in cinematics or both?

 

[Forsaken]

I like so much when people's have new projects.

OH MY GOD, that's AWESOME!! Congratulations Forsaken and Heinvers!!

Thanks

Yes the terrain is very impressive but a bit more tile variation would make it perfect. Is the Orgrimmar terrain playable, or in cinematics or both?

Thanks, well the tile variation for me is good enought, and the map will have cines and gameplay as well.

 

[Footman16]

It's generally on the inside I'm referring to based on the screenshots.

 

[Edge45]

whooahhh.... Very impressive
what chapter is that?

 

[Forsaken]

whooahhh.... Very impressive
what chapter is that?

It's "Chapter 11 - Storm, Earth and Fire".

 

[Atshiel]

I guess there isn't work for me nothing more to wait for the news goods

 

[StormWarriors2]

Looks very awesome

Makes me want to go back into terraining.

But anyway, if you increased the size of the smaller orc towers (i know they are units), but they seem out of place, like if you increased their size slightly they will probably fit in better.

 

[Forsaken]

The interlude Misconceptions is completed xD

Screenshot

 

[Go'el]

Ooh, the Council of Six looks great! I just reconize Modera (her models is great), Aethas and Rhonin.

 

[Heinvers]

The correct form would have been: "We are aware of the situation Lady Proudmoore, but you don't need to tell us how to do our work."
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Apart from that it looks OK. The chamber of air i suppose?

 

[Yousef]

Yes, this is the Chamber of Air.

 

[Forsaken]

Ooh, the Council of Six looks great! I just reconize Modera (her models is great), Aethas and Rhonin.

The others are, Karlain(the foot mage) Khadgar (normal achmage) and Ansirem Runeweaver (the other mounted mage)

The chamber of air i suppose?

Yes, this is the Chamber of Air.

Correct, it's chamber of Air

 

[Chen]

Wow! Their models are fitting. Good Job Forsaken!

 

[Edge45]

Their models are completely fitting, did you make this models

 

[davidandre28]

7 More Chapters Cant Wait I want to play tides of war right now Cant wait :3

 

[Forsaken]

Wow! Their models are fitting. Good Job Forsaken!

Their models are completely fitting, did you make this models

7 More Chapters Cant Wait I want to play tides of war right now Cant wait :3

Thanks, and no, it isn't me who do, it was Heinvers.

 

[Binsu]

The terrain looks good though I do know that chamber of air has some pillars, am I right? Maybe it could be better if you will add a pillar enclosing the thrones. It'll make it much more grand.

For the grammar on the screenshot: I would look into Heinvers's suggestion. The first statement looks fine but the way you told the second one which is: "you don't need learn us how to make our work" is weird.
It can be changed either to:

"You don't need to teach us how to make our work"
"You don't need to tell us how we'll do our work"

Anyway, best of luck here, Forsaken!

 

[Forsaken]

The terrain looks good though I do know that chamber of air has some pillars, am I right? Maybe it could be better if you will add a pillar enclosing the thrones. It'll make it much more grand.

For the grammar on the screenshot: I would look into Heinvers's suggestion. The first statement looks fine but the way you told the second one which is: "you don't need learn us how to make our work" is weird.
It can be changed either to:

"You don't need to teach us how to make our work"
"You don't need to tell us how we'll do our work"

Anyway, best of luck here, Forsaken!

Well, nobody could have seen the chamber of air, because it has no place in wow or War lol, but i like the ideia to add more pillar around,
After i will send for Heinvers, now he is my grammar fixer, thank you for the suggestion xD

 

[Heinvers]

That chamber looks ok. good suggestion HellMaster! Will fix those grammars later. Good luck Forsaken

 

[Forsaken]

Good news;

The first day of the next month, I will post a beta version of the campaign until Chapter 4 - Withdrawal of Bloody, but, will have a totally new chapter and cinematic;Chapter 2 - Trace of Hope and Interlude - Misconceptions, and heroes with new spell, save/load working correctly now, and grammar totally fixed!

 

[Go'el]

Great

 

[Edge45]

Wonderful,
I'll be waiting

 

[Binsu]

That is great to hear, Forsaken. The last testing phase of the map is quite fine but the story as I've said is like cut off or misses something but it's good to know that this has been handled now.

Looking forward for the next testing phase then!

 

[tomoraider]

The screenshot looks really nice, Forsaken, I really like the atmosphere of the area. And I can't wait for the new beta release, it seems like it'll be much better now, I'll post another review once you release it as well.

 

[Theoden of KoMe]

So i will my freind.Just have it ready.

 

[7oda]

I liked the screenshots and the models are fitting their characters, and really good news i can't wait till i play the 1st 4 chapters.

 

[Forsaken]

And as promise, the beta version: Tides of War

Hope all you like, and if find bugs or have some suggestion, please, tell me xD

 

[Go'el]

Great

 

[Yousef]

Great, let's see what is new there!

 

[tomoraider]

Ooh, nice, I'll test it and post my thoughts. Perhaps tomorrow, but probably in a couple of days.

 

[7oda]

OMG i'll play it now

 

[Yousef]

Here is my report:
Chapter one:
Bugs:
Nothing!
Suggestions:
Nothing!
Chapter two:
Bugs:
In all the cinematics (except the first) Kalec doesn't appear in the screen neither his portrait.
Suggestions:
The first quest should be named "Help the outpost!" or other name as you wish.
You can make it only 1 quest but updating it while finishing the missions.
Chapter Three (cine):
Bugs:
Nothing!
Suggestions:
Nothing!
Chapter Four:
Bugs:
All the 3 heroes together can handle a whole army.
Suggestions:
Nerf the heroes more, or close the portal between the bases, you can make an optional quest that after I get a gem or an item and bring it to the portal it opens the paths between the 2 bases.

NOTE: The campaign was too easy for me so I finished it very fast.

Vote for 4,5/5.
If you can fix these bugs I will give it 5/5

 

[Atshiel]

I have already tested the campaign and here is my inform:

Chapter 1:Nothing bug it was dificult for me xd
Chapter 2:Kalecgos in all the cinecmatics doesn't appear in his "portrait"
Suggestion:When i kill the monsters instantly appears a dialogue between the captain and Kalecgos why it was first appear like "quest update talk or go back with the captain" and then he give you the secondary quest ;D
Chapter 3:Nothing to report everything fine and now is more insteresting the gameplay of that chapter
Chapter 4:The place was great!I would have like Modera like ally in that chapter and after this she would become hero of the player but it's fine

Good luck with this ;D

 

[Edge45]

Heres my review

Well, this are all minor i think

Campaign Suggestion: Can you make the "Long Unit Transmission" ending seconds longer because while im still reading, it already ends
and the short unit transmissions ending seconds shorter, because they still keep talking while on another Camera
And also, can you work with the Fade IN/OUT

Interlude One
Bugs: N/A
Wrong Spellings: 10% not sure because I forgot
Suggestions: Those Fade In and Out, looks ugly, it instantly black,

Chapter One
Bugs: N/A
Wrong Spellings: Kalecgos says Deathwig, You miss "n" in Deathwing, "Deathwig"
The Blue Dragon Spawn says "stange", heres a screeny

1

Kalecgos says "sos" (..lol..), heres a screeny

2

Suggestions: Can you work with those Fade IN/OUT

Chapter Two:
Bugs: (When I go to where the Quilboars before going to south base and kill the cheiften, it shows quest update (sort of). Anyway, can you put path blockers just like putting the north base and then remove that blocker when on south base, or hide the Quilboars. (Yeah, i didn't follow the hint hehe),
(When in cine, Kalecgos has no portrait),
((Southbase) Make Kalecgos Instantly move and face the captain when talking to him, screeny

3

,
When I kill the Chieften and Harpy Queen, it didn't instant move to the captain in Southbase,
when I destroyed the beams, in cine, the captain is talking and Kalecgos is not there, even Jaina is talking and he's not there,
Wrong Spellings: Captain says "simbol" (symbol) (Southbase)
Captain says "brigde" (symbol) (Southbase(when camera is in the bridge))
Archmage in Northbase says "thanks" you" when i deliver the pack horse
From Quest Button, it says "Kobald" Mines" (Its a little hard killing the Taskmaster and the Tunnelers)

Interlude 2
Bugs: N/A
Wrong Spellings: (When Jaina is talking to Rhonin), He destroyed Northwath Hold,
Suggestion: N/A

Chapter Three:
Bugs: When the first Cine is complete, the camera stays like the camera where Garrosh is talking
Wrong Spellings: N/A (20% not sure)
Suggestions: The terrains need some improvements, but its still ok

Since im tired, the others will take care of the other chapters

The total is 4/5

 

[Forsaken]

Thanks for the review! i really appreciate the report

Also, i would like in the next feedback, you talk about the difficult levels, cause some people talk that is difficult, others that is easy, so i need a media for see, if i change the gameplay difficult or not.

 

[7oda]

I found some bugs
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Chapter 1:Kalec says Deathwig(xD)and it should be deathwing-when the other hero(i forgot her name) reach the site of dead dragons the cinematic didn't begin.You should fix some triggers.
Chapter 2:When the cinemtic begins and kalec talks his portrait doesn't appear
Chapter 3:you shoud fix the portrait of karlain
Chapter 4:Exellent but when the horde heroes begin thier talk the horde spawn begins suddenly
Major and the Common bug in all Chapters:they talk very fast that i cant complete reading D:
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This campaign is very exciting but it needs more work it will be the best campaign good luck

 

[Chen]

I haven't tested it, but I'm sure It will be fun to play!

 

[Forsaken]

All the bugs that happen in chapter 2 happen because i forget to run the trigger that active the save/load of Kalecgos, and the variable was created with the save/load function, because of this, he don't appear correctly in the cines! I already fix this, thanks for report xD

7oda, i can't do nothing about Karlain portrait, it's from the model, and how he isn't a major character, don't need change it,
anyway thanks

Yousef, i really liked you suggestion about the quest for chapter 2

 

[7oda]

I forgot i noticed that in some chapters "Troops" are written trops