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| Map Review: Tides of War (Beta Version) Terrain and Doodads: The terrain is really great, with a good tiles variation, and the doodads are also good, and with the terrain, it causes a great effect in that island. 4/5 Dialog: The dialog is very good, it's kind of casual but with important matters, and also, that's really great because don't is every thing write by the correct way, in some parts of the conversation, I saw some slangs and abbreviations. 4/5 Custom Resources: I loved Go'el's model, it's very different and somehow equal to WOW's model. Jaina's model is also great, her coat is awesome and the hair makes the model awesome. 4.5/5 Bugs Found: I didn't found any bug in the Epilogue. Great! 5/5 Suggestions: I have no suggestion to give you, because the map is awesome! 5/5 Total Map Review: 4 + 4 + 4.5 + 5 + 5 / 5 = 4.5/5 Terrain and Doodads: The terrain is simply awesome in the Nexus (I think that the start zone is the Nexus, if is not, please correct me), inside the Necropolis, in the Dalaran Outpost... anyway, in ALL the map. And the Doodads, they are also great, the Power Generators on the floor, the Crystals, the "broken stuff" inside the Necropolis, everything looks perfect. 5/5 Dialog: The dialog is very good, in the first dialog, I could feel Kalecgos consurm, and after that, in his meeting with Rhonin, I could see that he was desperate to find the Iris. However I found some errors, the two errors that Edge45 spoke in his Review, and in the final, Kirygosa is asking Rhonin where they could find Jaina, but soon after this, Kalecgos says that he goes there soon has possible, but Rhonin didn't say where's Jaina. 4/5 Custom Resources: I really liked of that Crystals flying in the Nexus, and also i liked of that 'purple stuff' in Dalaran Outpost, that reminds me of Tomoraider's campaign, because he use it has a Mana Dome. The Battle Mage's model is great, and it's becomes great in the Kirin Tor Army, Kalecgos model are also beautiful, but Kirygosa's model is not so amaizing, that's "just a Jaina" with a black/gray hair, and Rhonin's model is not so amaizing aswell, but is good. And that Abomination Hero in the Necropolis is amaizing! 4/5 Bugs Found: I didn't found any bug in this chapter, just the grammar mistakes mentioned above. 4/5 Suggestions: Well, I don't now if the start zone is the Nexus, but if was, you could add some flying rocks, like the Outland Ones, but with a Dark Blue color. In the last dialog, Rhonin says that Jaina is the most powerful Archmage, you could simply replace "Archmage" by "Sorceress". 4/5 Total Map Review: 5 + 4 + 4 + 4 + 4 / 5 = 4.5/5 (4.2/5) Terrain and Doodads: The terrain is good, but not so good as the other maps above, but is kinda tricky to work with Barrens because everything looks ugly (in my opinion), but the Doodads are great, they succeeded in making the terrain earn a great look. 4/5 Dialog: Kalecgos doesn't appear in any cinecmatics, just appers he talking, but not his portrait, and the dialog itself have many grammar mistakes, for example, the Archmage says "Thanks You". 3/5 Custom Resources: The footman is lovely, I like of his armor, the emblem in his shield, his tabard... I already talk about Jaina and Kalecgos. 5/5 Bugs Found: Just that ones mentioned in "Dialogs". 3/5 Suggestions: You could change the Capitain's model, put a "Stormwindnish" style. 4/5 Total Map Review: 4 + 3 + 5 + 3 + 4 / 5 = 4/5 (3.8/5) Terrain and Doodads: I really loved the effect that ypu caused, looks like the heroes are inside Jaina's Tower, the lumber's floor is great, the carpet is cute and the furnitures are fantastic! I also loved the Chamber of Air and of Dalaran. Everything looks amaizing! 5/5 Dialog: The dialog is very great, the heroes have a nice conversation, Jaina proves to be a good leader, Kalecgos proves to be a good friend, Pained proves to be a loyal company, the Archmages of Dalaran (the Council of Six) proves to be righteous and the Taurens proves to be honest race, I really like it. 5/5 Custom Resources: I like of Pained's model, and tervosh's model aswell. and as I sey above, the furnitures are great, and The Council of Six are really awesome. Bugs Found:I didn't found any bug in this Cinematic. 5/5 Suggestions: I have no suggestion to give you, because the map is awesome! 5/5 Total Map Review: 5 + 5 + 5 + 5 + 5 / 5 = 5/5 Terrain and Doodads: You could improve the terrain and the doodads on outside of Theramore, and don't make a ground path to the isle, put a Bridge or something. Inside Theramore, everything is good, both terrain and doodads. 3/5 Dialog: The dialog are really good, I became sad when Rhonin sacrifices himself to save Jaina, and he says "Vereesa", that's really, really sad, and before that, Jaina remembering of when Thrall and the Horde invaded Theramore to kill her father. The dialog is awesome and sad. 5/5 Custom Resources: I like of Garrosh's model, and that Blood Elf hero's model aswell. The warriors are good too. 5/5 Bugs Found: I didn't found any bug in this chapter. 5/5 Suggestions: I liked the Dark Champion, but you could change his name to Dreadguard or something, because... there's a lot of champions don't you think? 4/5 Total Map Review: 3 + 5 + 5 + 5 + 4 / 5 = 4.5/5 (4.4/5) Terrain and Doodads: the terrain is good in all the parts, Arthas's encampament (Stratholme memories), Dalaran, that Island (I belive that island is Maelstrom os Sunken Ruins)... the doodads are also great. And I really liked of the combination that you made in the map, you put Lordaeron, Dalaran, an island, and that terrain where happend that strange battle. 5/5 Dialog: I liked of the dialog, it shows that Jaina also have a "dark side" inside her. Also, the prophecy is awesome, I know that you take you take it from the book (I think), but you fix it in the campaign, so that become awesome, and Go'el and Kalecgos trying to convince Jaina to don't attack Orgrimmar. I love it! 5/5 Custom Resources: Well, the only new thing in this map was Arthas model. And I love it. 5/5 Bugs Found:I didn't found any bug in this Cinematic. 5/5 Suggestions: I have no suggestion to give you. 5/5 Total Map Review: 5 + 5 + 5 + 5 + 5 / 5 = 5/5 Terrain and Doodads: the terrain is awesome, a great tiles variation, and a magi effect. The doodads are also awesome, that "purple flying stuff" in the Violet Hold, in that area where the Dalaran Fountain stay and on Lord Tolyryn area. Everytinhg is great! 5/5 Dialog: the dialog are fine, Jaina once again with rage against the Sunreavers, and Aethas proving to be a good leader, Modera showing her loyaty and Vereesa finaly attacking the Sin'dorei. 5/5 Custom Resources: I like of that crystals, the Elvish Buildings, the Purple Council's heroes, the Banner, that green flying crystals, the chairs, the carpets... 5/5 Bugs Found:I didn't found any bug in this Map. 5/5 Suggestions: Remove that Way Gate. 4/5 Total Map Review: 5 + 5 + 5 + 5 + 4 / 5 = 5/5 (4.8/5) 4.6/5 for Approval! |
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