[Campaign] Tides of War

[Atshiel]

So...how ya been?its something new?:'3

 

[Forsaken]

So...how ya been?its something new?:'3

I don't make many things this days, i was resting :3
But today i'm back to work, i have finish the changes in chapter 3, a new screenhot.

Screenhot

 

[Binsu]

Nice screenshot right there though you should fix as always the grammar. I can say that you improved a bit on it though you should really take the advice I and the others told you on our last posts.

Just a tip, you got a typo at the Hidden: It is Screenshot not Screenhot. Anyways, good luck!

 

[Amargaard]

Just a tip, you got a typo at the Hidden: It is Screehnshot not Screenhot. Anyways, good luck!

Neither is it spelled screehnshot, it is spelled "Screenshot" :b

 

[Atshiel]

I don't make many things this days, i was resting :3
But today i'm back to work, i have finish the changes in chapter 3, a new screenhot.

Screenhot

Is that Kalecgos?he dont dissapear after reacquiring the focusing iris?

 

[Footman16]

This time it should be:
"Lady Proudmoore, Lady Modera wants to talk to you about a letter she received from the Kirin Tor; it came from Stormwind, and strictly private! No outside ears or eyes allowed!"

 

[joaquim98]

I've been following this proyect for a long time, and now I finally have my account. I wanted to say that this looks great, the models, the skins, the whole idea of the proyect really really good job. btw, I'd really like to help you with the Terrain, doodads, those things if you want.

 

[Forsaken]

Is that Kalecgos?he dont dissapear after reacquiring the focusing iris?

Yea, it's is him, hmm, he will be expand a little, but he will stop to appear at this chapter

This time it should be:
"Lady Proudmoore, Lady Modera wants to talk to you about a letter she received from the Kirin Tor; it came from Stormwind, and strictly private! No outside ears or eyes allowed!"

I will think about it ...

I've been following this proyect for a long time, and now I finally have my account. I wanted to say that this looks great, the models, the skins, the whole idea of the proyect really really good job. btw, I'd really like to help you with the Terrain, doodads, those things if you want.

I'm glad that you liked, but i don't know, this part that you want do is the best and fun part of the campaign :3

 

[Heinvers]

'm glad that you liked, but i don't know, this part that you want do is the best and fun part of the campaign :3

Then it's worth every sweat! I love the new screenshot man!

 

[Forsaken]

I'm finish the interlude "Retribution", just need something to fix
Two new Screenshots.

screenshot

 

[Atshiel]

I'm finish the interlude "Retribution", just need something to fix
Two new Screenshots.

screenshot

What an amazing screenshot!:'3

 

[Yousef]

Amazing, I really can't wait for the release.

 

[Heinvers]

I like your Interlude! Looks good; and i see the grammar is correct! Your doing great Forsaken
I hope that when you'll finish the campaign it will bring joy to my heart as i play it

 

[Footman16]

The first one should be:
"You returned to Theramore: you saw what's left of our soldiers; our friends. Sand, that's what's left of them, sand!"

The second:
"The council welcomes Kalecgos of the blue dragonflight, and the gra... lady Jaina Proudmoore, what brings you and your friend here?

 

[Heinvers]

Oh come on Footman16! Why are you pointing out every little misspelling he made???
I for one appreciate the effort to make as little typos as possible

 

[Chaosy]

I agree that grammar is important in a map. But it's quite annoying when people point out things like that. (atleast that's how I feel during english lesson)

@yousef anyway, that signature is pretty good

 

[Footman16]

Oh come on Footman16! Why are you pointing out every little misspelling he made???
I for one appreciate the effort to make as little typos as possible

I'm merely trying to be helpful. Grammar and spelling are important; the reason I point out mistakes is so that there are no mistakes. I'm not doing it to be pretentious or because I want to seem smarter than anyone but I think that a campaign should have good dialogue.

EDIT: If Forsaken wants, he can send me all the dialogue and I can fix it all as a favour to save me having to constantly point them out. Perhaps that would be more appropriate.

 

[Yousef]

@yousef anyway, that signature is pretty good

You should thank Forsaken, he made it for me.

 

[Forsaken]

Thanks for the comments, and i appreciate your help Footman16, just in the first dialogue that i don't see any difference LOL
And perhaps i do this, send for you the all the dialogues for you fix, i still will think about it... anyway, thanks for help

 

[Footman16]

just in the first dialogue that i don't see any difference LOL

In the first one it's mainly punctuation that needed changing. I'm not bothered if you turn my offer down but I'd be more than happy to do it for all the dialogue.

 

[Heinvers]

I'm not bothered if you turn my offer down but I'd be more than happy to do it for all the dialogue.

That's very kind of you

 

[Amargaard]

It'd be kewl if all quotes matched the real ones from the book!

 

[Forsaken]

It'd be kewl if all quotes matched the real ones from the book!

I'm trying to do this now, but sometimes i need remove some speeches, just do not become sooo long the cines, and some do not make sense for the campaign.

 

[Heinvers]

I'm trying to do this now, but sometimes i need remove some speeches, just do not become sooo long the cines, and some do not make sense for the campaign.

Keep it shorter to have no boring stuff in it! I like that

 

[youness]

the screenhots i great but thr grammar need more and i hope you finished this campaigne very soo, thanks

 

[Forsaken]

Well, i decided add a new chapter and an interlude for the campaign, for explain better about Kalec, the Iris, how Jaina knows about the Siege and how he gather the Alliance and the Forces of the Kirin Tor.

A new Screenshot of the chapter 2 " Trace of Hope"

screenshot

 

[Binsu]

Looking great there and actually, your grammar here looks improved and all. The terrain looks good though I would be removing those Barren themed rocks on the waters and replace them with normal Rocks because they look unnatural and maybe they also dont blend that well. You could also put some decorations on water like putting some broken ships, ships, fishes, and anything that is a water related doodads.

Good luck and great work on this. Reps for this!

 

[Go'el]

Well, i decided add a new chapter and an interlude for the campaign, for explain better about Kalec, the Iris, how Jaina knows about the Siege and how he gather the Alliance and the Forces of the Kirin Tor.

A new Screenshot of the chapter 2 " Trace of Hope"

screenshot

Very great, that walls behind is Theramore?

 

[Heinvers]

Hey! Looking great so far Language improved, another plus for u' It's good that you decided to further Kalecgos' story!

 

[Forsaken]

Looking great there and actually, your grammar here looks improved and all. The terrain looks good though I would be removing those Barren themed rocks on the waters and replace them with normal Rocks because they look unnatural and maybe they also dont blend that well. You could also put some decorations on water like putting some broken ships, ships, fishes, and anything that is a water related doodads.

Good luck and great work on this. Reps for this!

Thanks, i will change this part a litte yet, the terrain is a kind undone.

Very great, that walls behind is Theramore?

Thanks, and no ... this is the outpost Northwatch Hold in Southern Barrens.

Hey! Looking great so far Language improved, another plus for u' It's good that you decided to further Kalecgos' story!

Thanks, and his story will go more deeply, and will be explain better, and i'm thinking in add him as some major characters, for the lasts levels of the campaign, but i'm in double, him or modera ...

 

[Heinvers]

You know Modera too could use some side-story! She was quite ignored by Blizzard (just saying) And Kalecgos is quite interesting as a character

 

[Forsaken]

You know Modera too could use some side-story! She was quite ignored by Blizzard (just saying) And Kalecgos is quite interesting as a character

I think better and i will make both major characters xD

 

[Atshiel]

So...the main caracthers will be Jaina , Vereesa , Modera , Kalecgos and Dollunar right?:3

 

[Forsaken]

So...the main caracthers will be Jaina , Vereesa , Modera , Kalecgos and Dollunar right?:3

Yes, They will be
And a new about the grammar, as yousef help me with triggers, and i was needed of help in some parts, he will help me to improve and fix all the grammar of the campaign too, an good new, aren't ?

 

[Yousef]

Yes, They will be
And a new about the grammar, as yousef help me with triggers, and i was needed of help in some parts, he will help me to improve and fix all the grammar of the campaign too, an good new, aren't ?

My Pleasure, I wont fail you.

 

[Heinvers]

A helpful friend indeed! Good luck yousef

 

[Yousef]

A helpful friend indeed! Good luck yousef

Thank you.

 

[Binsu]

Good luck yousef and to others. I like the strong teamwork in this project, it's what makes this project standout. Just show us some screenshots and we, your supporters will try to help you.

 

[Chen]

Tomorrow is the First Year Anniversary of this Popular Thread!

 

[Atshiel]

if i have more experience in creating campaign i would help more but i do not know much :s

 

[Pyraeus]

I am still following this topic. I wish you the best at completing it.

 

[IamFootman061]

I'm very excited in this one.

 

[Forsaken]

if i have more experience in creating campaign i would help more but i do not know much :s

No problem, you help givi me feedback, they help me a lot

I am still following this topic. I wish you the best at completing it.

I'm very excited in this one.

Thanks :v

Tomorrow is the First Year Anniversary of this Popular Thread!

Yes, today is a year since I started the campaign, learn things in the year, changing my mind, making maps and stuff, if I were to write here, I'll stay here all day, but one thing I can say, if I did not have all of you, this project perhaps have died without his help, your criticism, your opinons and advices, it would mean nothing, this project would be nothing without all of you, all of you get this project became better, I just do with my team (that are the best one), thank you, really thank you <3

 

[Heinvers]

I wish you all the best to you and your team Forsaken Happy Anniversary for Tides of War! And please do continue this project:> I cannot wait for it's release XD

 

[Go'el]

Happy Anniversary, Tides of War!

 

[Chen]

Happy Anniversary!

(Haha! Even I'm late. I also used violet/purple because It's the theme color of ToW!)

 

[7oda]

So how are things in your project?

 

[Atshiel]

So there are isn't nothing new? , how will be the spells for Modera?

 

[Forsaken]

So how are things in your project?

So there are isn't nothing new? , how will be the spells for Modera?

Sorry for the late reply, when, for now yoused has finish fixed the grammar,and now he is doing something in the campaign.

For Modera spells, i thought --> Aerial Shackles (i will change the name) - "need some idea "- Polymorph - and the ultimate Arcane Explosion.

 

[7oda]

Nets of fire or fire prison or Prison of flames?