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Third Cinematic (march of the tower)

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Just finished watching it and I got a few things to say/ask:
-the terrain was a bit empty at some spots (mostly the forest at the beginning). I'm no pro-terrainer but I'd suggest adding maybe something like flowers,rocks or shrubs
-was it normal that the narrator was the only character to have no voice acting?
-there's a spelling mistake in the last lines (weight spelled wieght)

Anyway this probably way better then any crappy cinematic I could make and overall I liked it :).

*BTW:I noticed you used imports, would be a good idea to give credits to the authors
 
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