[Cinematic] Cinematic - Want your opinions (Deathwish)

[DeathRaider(MMT]

Hey guys, this is the first complete cinematic i've done.
Before you guys watch this, just nevermind the voice acting part i have yet to get my mic and add that stuff in.
Also its not completely polished so i hope you don't mind the errors in the cinematic. I just want your guys' opinion on where the cinematic is going.
Also btw Warden = Not nightelf, i can give the backstory to what happened before but i was going to add that into a future part of the cinematic.
Anyways enjoy.

 

[DeathRaider(MMT]

Wow seriously no replys? I thought this forum was dead two years ago....... now its "The dead horse just called, it says quit beating the shit out of me"

 

[Exum]

Hello, nice job
You should correct when camera goes thaught doodads and so, and it is sometimes too close to the objects. The last thing i could tell is about lags, but i realy don't know how to avoid it in a cinematic :/
Anyway, this cinematic looks nice

Ps : I bet you're french no ? At a moment you used "commence" or something like this instead of start

 

[DeathRaider(MMT]

ROFL! My dad is pure french thats fucking hilarious dude nice job.
Anyways yeah like i said its not quite polished, i'll have to adjust the cameras at a point in time, and thanks for the comment.