The Siege of Barad-dûr V.1.1.c

[Lag_Reviews]

Map Broken?

Yo its an alright cinematic, not the best that I have seen nor is the storyline the best, its basically just a few units fighting and then it ends.

Please make the story line deeper and it might be better, idk if I saw the whole cinematic to be honest as I had to stuff around in the world editor so that the cinematic would even play.

Now onto my error:

The cinematic started with the credits and then said thank-you for watching and ended which made me sad.

But wait there is a way around this.

How to fix the error:

1. Open world editor
   
2. Open your map with world editor
   
3. Go module
   
4. Click trigger editor
   
5. Go to the trigger Movie xD
   
6. Go down the trigger functions on the right until you see Trigger - Run Camera 19 <gen> (ignoring conditions)
   
7. Then double click that trigger
   
8. Then where it says run camera 19 <gen> in blue text click that
   
9. Then in the variable change it to camera 1 <gen>
   
10. Then save your map and you can watch the cinematic fully without starting at the credits.

*Note If the owners do not re-upload the cinematic with this error fixed, You can initially do it yourself and watch the cinematic*

So, fix the error and make the story line deeper and stand out more.
At the moment for the people who can not watch the cinematic they see credits only and for the people who can watch the map just see a bunch of fight scenes. Overall fix the error and make the fight scenes have a reason.

Thanks for everything,
Lag_Reviews

PS: This is Rejected as it does not work properly

 

[Vuormalainen]

After starting it, credits came.
In your Map initialization trigger you had this action Trigger - Run Camera 19 <gen> (ignoring conditions)
Shouldnt it be Trigger - Run Camera 1 <gen> (ignoring conditions)?

 

[Jack_Sparrow93]

Omg, forgot to fix that, again, I was watching the credits after editing it

Edit: Fixed now...

 

[Vuormalainen]

Omg, forgot to fix that, again, I was watching the credits after editing it

Edit: Fixed now...

The cinematic was kinda nice overall, don't know how you can make it better (unless getting a real actor voice xD)

 

[Chewii]

Jack Sparrow Youre from sweden right ?

 

[Vengeancekael]

Reviews:
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/1297497-post24.html
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/1304694-post30.html
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/1292679-post7.html

Rating: (2+2+2)/3 = 2/5

 

[dsl13]

Problem

I can't view it and why is that? I put it in my download section and it's not there. HELP

 

[deepstrasz]

2/5.
Not really worth watching. It's too short and unconvincing. Without knowing what's it's about from external sources, it's bland.