The Risen

[Orcnet]

Can I,, become one of yahr beta testing team?

 

[MrStormyZ]

I'm on a mission (yea it sounds so formal) to help the maps that i think have potentials by making banners for the project. So The Risen is the 2nd map i've helped. hooray~ here it is.

p/s: for some reason, my "manage attachment" button won't show at all. so i cant upload it in this post.

wow.. Looks Awesome

 

[Hiude]

By Idea Helper, waddya mean?

 

[indomitable1319]

I'm on a mission (yea it sounds so formal) to help the maps that i think have potentials by making banners for the project. So The Risen is the 2nd map i've helped. hooray~ here it is.

p/s: for some reason, my "manage attachment" button won't show at all. so i cant upload it in this post.

AL0NE, I love you. Thanks! It looks beautiful! +Rep!
Would you like to apply for any slot in the team?

Can I,, become one of yahr beta testing team?

Sure, just fill up the application form on the first page.

By Idea Helper, waddya mean?

I mean the person that helps me give ideas in each mission to spice it up and make it more interesting.

 

[AL0NE]

AL0NE, I love you. Thanks! It looks beautiful! +Rep!
Would you like to apply for any slot in the team?

I'm not sure. perhaps the loading screen creator? but i'm afraid that i don't have time to do it. How about AFTER i made it(i hope i really able to do it), then i'll apply for the spot. =)

 

[Orcnet]

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Username: Orcnet
WE Skill: Terrainer, Story Maker, Monster Visualizer
WE Weakness: Triggers/Jass
What I can provide as a member of the team: [rainbow]BETA[/rainbow] testing
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[indomitable1319]

I'm not sure. perhaps the loading screen creator? but i'm afraid that i don't have time to do it. How about AFTER i made it(i hope i really able to do it), then i'll apply for the spot. =)

Awesome! Thanks.

Username: Orcnet
WE Skill: Terrainer, Story Maker, Monster Visualizer
WE Weakness: Triggers/Jass
What I can provide as a member of the team: [rainbow]BETA[/rainbow] testing
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I'll add you in soon.

 

[Samurai_Gal666]

Well, alot has been going on since I was inactive.. @indomitable1419, how's the project coming along?

 

[indomitable1319]

Remember the beta I sent you? Nothing's happened since that.

 

[Samurai_Gal666]

Shucks!
Well, you still interested on this or not?
I wanting to help!! Work on it NOW!!! XD XD

 

[indomitable1319]

Yelling won't stop me from playing Final Fantasy Tactics. :>
They just make my CT fill faster each turn. I'll just keep on Accumulating with Ramza and...

I'll get on it.
And besides, summer's started for me here.
I'll try to work on it.

Oh, and to all members, please paste the 'The Risen' sig image onto your signature that AL0NE made for us.

 

[MrStormyZ]

Oh, and to all members, please paste the 'The Risen' sig image onto your signature that AL0NE made for us.

I'll need 1 for every project I work with at this point otherwise it's gona look HeLL unprofessional

 

[Cryophoenix]

Nice Map, But use one of this for Shea..

Night Elf Archer by 67chrome

Night Elf Ranger Hero by Darkholme

My suggestions...
+I don't really like Raven's model. maybe you could change it?
+Try to make a new race called The Risen with night elf units with custom skins or custom models
+Some new skills will be appreciated.

Skill Suggestions for Raven

Stealth:
Passive:
Allows Raven to meld in with the environment, rendering her invisible while not moving. Invisiblity fades if a enemy hero comes with 300 range of Raven
Fade time decreases with every level.
(Like a passive Shadowmeld)

Maiming Dagger:
Active
Throws a deadly dagger at an enemy target, causing it to bleed profusely and causes any action done by the target to make it bleed, causing damage.
Deals XX damage when Killer Instincts successfully deals a critical strike in the last X seconds.
(Like BS's Rupture but takes damage if it attacks, casts spells or moves)

Killer Instincts:
Passive
Each of Raven's attacks are very precise, giving her a % chance to deal critical damage.
Deals XX bonus damage when breaking Stealth
(Critical Strike with bonuses)

Dance of the Blade:
Active:
Raven starts spinning and releases thousands of knives around her, shredding nearby units to pieces.
Deals XX damage per knife.
If a hit unit has been hit with a Maiming Dagger, it takes XX bonus damage.
(Combination of Fan of Knives and Bladestorm except t's channeling)

Skill Suggestions for Shea

Marksmanship:
Passive:
Shea has mastered the art of the bow, making her attacks pierce through.
Gives a % chance to release a Piercing Arrow that deals damage in a line
(No Comment)

Deadly Shot:
Active
Shea readies her bow for X seconds for a deadly shot. The arrow travels forward, if any unit comes in contact with the arrow, it deals X damage and causes 5 arrows to go in all directions.
Lesser arrows deal 50% damage
(Like PotM's Elune's Arrow that splits after it hits)

Rain of Arrows:
Active
Shoots X volleys of arrows at a target area, dealing X damage per volley.
If cast at night, enchants each arrow with Starstrike, which causes units to miss their attacks % of the time.
(Cluster of Rockets + Blizzard + BLind)

Elune's Arrow:
Active:
Shoots a magical arrow blessed with the power of Elune, dealing X damage to enemy units in a line. Units hit with Elune's Arrow also get Starstrucked, making them miss on % of their attacks
If cast at night, hits units with a Star, dealing X damage.
(Line damage + Miss + Starfall?)

Hope you implement them!
All in all great campaign! Can't wait to see it all..

 

[indomitable1319]

Sorry for the inactivity, but I got a fever over the past day. I'm all better now.

Nice Map, But use one of this for Shea..

Night Elf Archer by 67chrome

Night Elf Ranger Hero by Darkholme

I'm planning to use an import for Shea in the later models, you'll just see when. She'll play a huge-ass role near the end.

+I don't really like Raven's model. maybe you could change it?

Sorry, no. But that model is also planned for something.

+Try to make a new race called The Risen with night elf units with custom skins or custom models

Yes, I'm still going to make that. It's not like the Night Elven Resistance led by Oghma was part of The Risen.

+Some new skills will be appreciated.

No, I am very sorry. This is a suggestion that I cannot change. At least for Raven's spells. GT had such rich and... epic ideas on her spells. For Shea, I'll stick with the (improvised; since I'm not that good with triggering MUI spells and certain spell effects) versions that I had considered back then. Sorry.

so any updates kabayan? so I can start my beta testings for yah

Hmm, I guess I'll send it to you now.

 

[Cryophoenix]

Username: Cryophoenix
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Oh! And BTW, do you want me to make a new warden model? I can edit a non-hero warden to look a lil more epic but still look similar to the original one Want me to make one? or a new skin?

 

[indomitable1319]

Username: Cryophoenix
WE Skill: Ghostlike (5/10)
WE Weakness: Impatience & Gets bored after continuously working on one project :/
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Oh! And BTW, do you want me to make a new warden model? I can edit a non-hero warden to look a lil more epic but still look similar to the original one Want me to make one? or a new skin?

Alright, I'll add you in.

A new model?! Alright! Go ahead, and I'll see if I like it. A skin, please.
No specifications, be as creative as you can.

 

[Cryophoenix]

Okay, but take heed, I'm not an expert

 

[indomitable1319]

Aaand, do you know anything about animation?
Because if you do, I'll ask you to make Spell animation for Raven.
It's alright if you can't.

 

[Cryophoenix]

Describe the Spell Animation and I'll try

 

[indomitable1319]

That, I can't really say how; I don't know myself. Be creative, I guess. We're in no rush anyway.

 

[Cryophoenix]

Well, spell animation for which spell?

 

[indomitable1319]

Nevermind, I guess since I noticed that she uses the Attack animation when casting her spells, so don't make the animation anymore. Just go with the skin.
Sorry for the trouble.

 

[Cryophoenix]

No problem... but I'm currently in a lust for LoL so I'll work on it tonight

 

[Orcnet]

My Beta-betahan! (

Hey Indomitable! here is my upstart for your map's beta testing..

in your prologue map or mini-cinematic for the campaign. I viewed it and I want to help yah out with the adjustments of the game.

on the loading screen, you showed this:

Title: A Bad Fate

Description: Shortly before the defeat of the Burning Legion, they had developed a small Night Elven City known as the City of Life. Many of the Survivors were homeless and hopeless, A large band of them had formed up into a small civilization known as the “The Risen”. The civilization was strong and could defend against many attacks.

One of the most lazy and unwise members called Raven Stryker, and her best friend Shea Shadowstep were doing their duties when the enemy had sent something very alerting to their enemies.

The story was kind of straightforward and not much details that described its timeline if you played ROC that is, so I came up of my version and I hope you like it.

Title: Rogue’s Fate

Description: Before the defeat of the Burning Legion, the dark crusaders ravaged a night elven city known as Ferodala, the kingdom of life. crushed with despair, the remaining survivors of the broken kingdom formed a recovering stand and manage to rally its people to construct a new home over there destroyed haven, the fighting-spirited night elves call themselves “The Risen”. in memory of there fallen comrades that fell under the demon’s crippling quake. hurt but with courage, the Risen elves built a towering stronghold that can withstand invaders and demons alike for the future of their race.

On the list of the nigh elves’ resistance, the infamous Raven Stryker, and her Majordomo Shea Shadowstep were occupied in the defense of the city until one fatal day, its reminiscent lifeline returns.

I renamed the city of life into "Ferodala". to show a little fantasy-based city instead of those sample villages without names that sounds so unclear to me.

[WARNING!: SPOILER]
On the Storyboard, I observed that our two lead protagonists, Raven and Shea were on the lookout when they discovered a huge demon army going straight at there defenses, cowardice of there actual status, they run away and never looked back at there dying allies in combat.

and again. its kinda fast for me to see the cinematic, it would be nice if you can define a 2-5 minute fight scene where a clash between the ancients would be cool. to entertain and camp the player's time. for there scripts, it will be great if they actually speak like real tribal babes instead of our present day slangs and mumbos for the game to be like a real fantasy game.

I was thinking if you could find a member that is good at medieval speaking languages that is both good at english and fantasy like accent-making for the game to be better. don't you think?, but to my process right now. its so hard to find one. or less. an entry of them.

 

[indomitable1319]

Aiiight. Good point on the prologue thing. I'll consider your version and edit it a bit.

About the accents and stuff and how they speak, yeah; maybe I should. I'll change their lines a bit, then.

 

[Cryophoenix]

1% into the skin
And btw can I make a template for a new race?

 

[Orcnet]

Still on the view of the prologue, I notice the gate is kinda small for an epic battle don't you think, while Raven and Shea were talking, I realize the NE units are just wandering in to the fight because some of them can't go through to it anymore.

 

[indomitable1319]

@Cryophoenix
What kind of template do you mean by that? Models for the units?

@Orcnet
Meh... Too lazy.
But I'll see.

 

[Orcnet]

lmao! that's okay, I'm now on your chapter 1, but first I'll logout, play neopets for a while

 

[Arcisal]

Username: Arcisal. Pretty Obvious isn't it?

WE Skill: Team Management, 2D Art, Flash Animation, C++ and (Totally Irrelevant Though). I'm a hardcore Ideologist and I'm a Nazi when it comes to Grammar and Vocabulary. (A hypocrite too!). I'll say Just below Average.

WE Weakness: Commitment, Memory (I forget), Sloppiness and Time

What I can provide as a member of the team: Laughter and a Storyline. Maybe even a loading screen or a Map Preview.

Other Projects: Currently helping out Grand Kaiser on his map, Real Life [For Morons] to revamp the entire thing. I helped Diaster with some GUI triggers and Terraining on his map Fantasy Life. Still looking for the rest of my RPG's which I lost for my ORPG map pack.

Icon Wanted as part of team: Does it have to be an icon? Can you use my Scout Trooper picture on my profile? It's sorta like my

Username Color: Olive. Fits my name.

Username Font: Bloody Hell. Does this matter? I'll just go with what you have.

 

[Orcnet]

Team Management? Isn't Indomitable the one who manages us already?

 

[indomitable1319]

Username: Arcisal. Pretty Obvious isn't it?

WE Skill: Team Management, 2D Art, Flash Animation, C++ and (Totally Irrelevant Though). I'm a hardcore Ideologist and I'm a Nazi when it comes to Grammar and Vocabulary. (A hypocrite too!). I'll say Just below Average.

WE Weakness: Commitment, Memory (I forget), Sloppiness and Time

What I can provide as a member of the team: Laughter and a Storyline. Maybe even a loading screen or a Map Preview.

Other Projects: Currently helping out Grand Kaiser on his map, Real Life [For Morons] to revamp the entire thing. I helped Diaster with some GUI triggers and Terraining on his map Fantasy Life. Still looking for the rest of my RPG's which I lost for my ORPG map pack.

Icon Wanted as part of team: Does it have to be an icon? Can you use my Scout Trooper picture on my profile? It's sorta like my

Username Color: Olive. Fits my name.

Username Font: Bloody Hell. Does this matter? I'll just go with what you have.

You're working on Real Life [For Morons]?! HOLY FU-
And you worked on Fantasy Life?! OMFG
You're so in. I'll go add you in the team soon.

Team Management? Isn't Indomitable the one who manages us already?

He will when I'm unable to I guess.

 

[Arcisal]

You're working on Real Life [For Morons]?! HOLY FU-

Working with and under the supervision of Grand Kaiser to revive the map.

And you worked on Fantasy Life?! OMFG
You're so in. I'll go add you in the team soon.

Only a bit though. Just a couple of Terrain remakes and some boss stats fixes. But that's all.


No problemo amigo. But I must tell you, I forget things easily.

 

[Arcisal]

I can probably create a custom loading screen and maybe even a map preview.
A banner? It depends on my schedule.

PS. Do you still need a storyline?

 

[indomitable1319]

Loading screen, perfect.
Map preview? Cool!

Storyline, no. I've got it all planned.

 

[Orcnet]

And let me extend the descriptions for it, if its okay?

 

[indomitable1319]

Descriptions for?

 

[Orcnet]

Loading Screens, and any description that you want me to extend it a little

 

[indomitable1319]

Oh, sure.
But I want each loading screen to have a short loading screen description, not too long. All except the first one.

 

[Arcisal]

When you means short loading screen description, do you mean a summary of the map?

Can I make the first loading screen as epic as I possibly can? Pretty please?

 

[indomitable1319]

No. I mean like, the loading screen text like:
'After hours of running, Raven and Shea feel very tired and decide to stop in a nearby meadow...'

Like that.

First loading screen? Well... The loading screen style I want is like the loading screen in Rexxar's campaign. A map with an X mark surrounded by other landmarks and trees.
Check the Prologue's loading screen and check out what I mean.

 

[Arcisal]

I see, I see. So for each loading screen, you want their progression from the previous map?

I understand. But what kind of theme would you like?

PS. Why are you online all the time? Get out and get some exercise.

 

[Orcnet]

PS. Why are you online all the time? Get out and get some exercise.

I LOLD! you are kinda funny to be a part of the team, I like it

 

[indomitable1319]

@Arcisal
Yes, for each map.
I'll actually start today on the exercise thing.

 

[Orcnet]

Samurai_Gal666's project member icon is kinda large, can I twitch it a little? (hahaa! kahit ung simpleng bagay eh noh, tska si Ghost at si fan wala pa)

 

[indomitable1319]

Meh. Just leave it.
It's about time I edit the first post...

 

[Arcisal]

Holy Crap. My picture looks terrible!
Change it to the Firelord Icon! Quick!

 

[rcshaggy]

A night elf styled campaign sounds interesting and I have some names if you need them for any characters for quests or even the other quest givers helping you out in it.
Well just tell me and I'll provide you with them.

 

[indomitable1319]

Awesome!
Would you like to apply for the team?

 

[rcshaggy]

Well I wish I could, but I have my own projects to worry about and still I might still give you some help if you need it.