The Chosen 1.1

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19:33, 28th Jun 2013
Orcnet:

 

[WolfFarkas]

i will not review complete this one, prefer to leave it to someone more experienced

a little of feedback, the terrain and the enviroment, i dont see it.
I mean you mixed the Lordaeron tile set with a dungeon theme
it will be really better with the Dalaran, Ruins of Dalaran, Underground, Black citadel and Dungeon tile set.
and i tell you why
in the sets i already metioned, flat terrain is not bad, but here in the lordaeron set is not good.
The idea is good, but i think the basic concept between a wild terrain and a dungeon is confused in this map and the mix dont work, if you use wild terrain in the external part of a dungeon is okay, but here is a really bad mix.

edit(the Lordaeron cliff as wall, mixed with forest and jungles inside and the white marmol in the floor it look really unnatural)

Im telling this not to be bad, im doing to improve yours skills.
and the problem here is the bad mix between a dungeon and a wild terrain.

if this map were mine, i will do it again with a proper dungeon tile set and only use wild terrain in the exterior of the dungeon

edit2: the problem wasnt time, the problem was at the very begining, the definition of the map.

a bad enviroment can kill an entire map... im sorry,
with all respect, im not voting for approval.

 

[Kingmuri]

i will not review complete this one, prefer to leave it to someone more experienced

a little of feedback, the terrain and the enviroment, i dont see it.
I mean you mixed the Lordaeron tile set with a dungeon theme
it will be really better with the Dalaran, Ruins of Dalaran, Underground, Black citadel and Dungeon tile set.
and i tell you why
in the sets i already metioned, flat terrain is not bad, but here in the lordaeron set is not good.
The idea is good, but i think the basic concept between a wild terrain and a dungeon is confused in this map and the mix dont work, if you use wild terrain in the external part of a dungeon is okay, but here is a really bad mix.

edit(the Lordaeron cliff as wall, mixed with forest and jungles inside and the white marmol in the floor it look really unnatural)

Im telling this not to be bad, im doing to improve yours skills.
and the problem here is the bad mix between a dungeon and a wild terrain.

if this map were mine, i will do it again with a proper dungeon tile set and only use wild terrain in the exterior of the dungeon

a bad enviroment can kill an entire map... im sorry,
with all respect, im not voting for approval.

Yes,really a wild terrain bad for dungeon type map,when ı started to do this map ı select wild terrrain for rpg then map turn ınto dungeon ,ı thınk ı remake ıt with good tileset,thanks

 

[Daffa]

One note, the Hive description is annoying to read, don't put Capital letter in every beginning of words >.>

 

[Kingmuri]

im glad you understanded my point of view

I updated the map with new map and map previem but the old previem and the screenshot of the map wasn't changed

 

[Kingmuri]

I updated the map with new map and map previem but the old previem and the screenshot of the map wasn't changed

Ok Changed

 

[Kingmuri]

you worked fast

i think now the dungeon theme has a good meaning
but you shure will recive more feedback to improve terrain enviroment and stuff

but at least now you have a good basic concept, the other map was a real bad mix.

Thanks For Your İdea It's Realy Helped Me

 

[Orcnet]

Map is in RoC version :/

Game play is a bit repetitive and dull once you reach the Dark Lord, although you rely on basic stats while your enemy reaches you from ten to one, in other words its going imba a bad move, another is the terrain, there all the same so you don't what is level 1 to level 3 so you just dive in the game and finish it, some heroes has bad spell build like Sylvannas Windrunner for example, she has two auto cast skills.

Do please practice more in building up a boss fight themed map, give it some puzzles, mazes and encounters that has enough quality to be replayed.