Tfk

[Moderator]

22:44, 24th Jun 2011
-Kobas-:
Status: Approved
Comment


StoPCampinGn00b: Rejected for map being "deleted" by author and spam on the front page.

 

[pizzaDoXx]

great job, i find it interesting. And i play the map you created before this and looks nice, the systems etc.
I love this game, 85%

 

[Great Chief Aeon]

You could do better... but still good work...
3/5 for this one

 

[jxtranghero]

@Great Chief Aeon
Thanks for rating sir!

too tired here I think I need a rest...

 

[light bolt30]

Here's a list of BB Codes to help you. Put those images under hidden tags please. You can tell us more about the map, heroes, items, gameplay, etc.

 

[jxtranghero]

Improving game play now loading...

 

[Great Chief Aeon]

Here's a list of BB Codes to help you. Put those images under hidden tags please. You can tell us more about the map, heroes, items, gameplay, etc.

Hey sir light bolt30, do you have a list of the ingame letter color changer? something to change for exemple, of white letter to blue??

 

[light bolt30]

This is OT, you should PM me instead next time.

Hey sir light bolt30, do you have a list of the ingame letter color changer? something to change for exemple, of white letter to blue??

Custom Coloured Text by Mind; hope this is what you're looking for.

 

[supertoinkz]

Ai! Expect a proper feedback.

EDIT:

Too laggy.

 

[jxtranghero]

@supertoinkz
fixing

EDIT: Lag fixed
-found cause of lag
-removed cause of lag

 

[Orcnet]

hey kabayan! I see you made an awesome map. I might try this and make a map review, well happy gaming!

 

[jxtranghero]

thx bro, lets try our best...

 

[Magnet199]

give proper credits :S
downloading and testing now, will give full feedback (game play, terrain, NOT TRIGGERS)

EDIT: OK, tested here is what i got:

The bad stuff:
- the kodo something like that his name, he has a move with hot-key "Q", its good, but why when i use it im in the their base??? its like he flies to there.....??? huh
- items shops whatever they are :S, i cant buy from them what the? i go near them, they say Requires Nearby Unit. Well i am there :S
- some of the enemy units terrain is kind of walk-through
- the skills wont lvl up :O..............

The good stuff:
- idea nice
- terrain i liked it
- the heroes are nice i guess
- the town spawn yes/no great idea

Suggestions:
- new heroes
- new "working" items
- lvl-up skills :S

Map is nice with full house, keep working on it, will turn out great
(i might didn't get some stuff, but that doesn't mean its a bad map)
Map is great:
Rate:3/5
Rep: 1+

Keep up the good work

 

[jxtranghero]

@Magnet199
Thanks for the rating and Rep+ sir Magnet199

Note: Only "Kodo[Wanderer]" a unique class doesn't improve it's skills level and not allow to use/buy items or potions rather than ordinary heroes.

Rep+ sir Magnet199 in return... ^_^

 

[Magnet199]

ahaaaa, i see thanks for explaining, or it was in the description and i didn't read -_-
map is still great
keep it up

 

[Orcnet]

Map Review

dude! sorry for the late reply, here it goes

Map Review

DER1.5dAI

Grading System

General:

Originality-[5]
Difficulty-[5]
Gameplay-[5]
Triggering-[5]

Game Cosmetics:

Terraining-[5]
Synergy-[5]

Bugs-see information from below

Map Score Overall-[30]

[+] signs means there is something good within your work, this won't be part of the grading since this is just a good comment saying you made a good job
[-] signs means you must make something better or maybe an improvement of that part of your work
[bugs] won't deduct your score, however, will only show you some mishaps and low managing of some triggers,terrains,units etc.

General

Originality [5/5]
Note:
[+] your originality impress me because I found no copycats or any taken concepts in your map, a good boon to start for my review
Difficulty [3/5]
Note:
[-] The game's difficulty is not that bad, although I find something that is really hard in the game, the Druid of the Talon and the Banshee (Mangkukulam translated as Witch) had those w3 annoying debuffs during my observing, before the duration seconds of the first wave is already gone, the next wave will do it again and a loop will take over, try removing the wave's range units abilities so that players can have an easy time earning money and gaining level.
[-] The Bosses of the game are great, no bugs found for now but I found something that looks awkward, the enemy bosses has items? I mean that's a good originality for it but I could make a suggestion, simply just make those items inside of the hero into passive ones so it will look cooler than sporting them with those awesome core items.
Gameplay [5/5]
Note:
[+] I like your game so much that I approved this to be perfect! cool styles, impressive details, its really good. and I hope you can make more better changes for your next updates.
Triggering [4.5/5]
Note:
[+] Your triggering is great, kinda advance to me but still its outrageously cool! although I found some bugs during my observations, which I will explain it to the "Bugs" corner.

Game Cosmetics

Terraining [4/5]
Note:
[+] Your terrain is brilliant! I like the dark landscape like theme for warcraft's new design, although I see some really wierd fixings inside the game, here are some of it:

the red fog like effect for your map looks strange, its looks like blood rather than lava or the earth's fiery core, try making it better for a good change

Synergy [4/5]
Note:
[+] The heroes are outstanding!, Item Ideas are great and the quests! man! that makes your map boredom-free and challenging in both ways, and all in all I like what you made, especially the Wanderer that I adored so much, here are some cool flicks:

add more abilities for this brute since he still lacks more abilities but I like that concept you made for that guy, just keep up your good work

Bug/s

Some bugs I found during my in-game reviews:

when my hero dies in combat, you made a dialog that indicates where you want to respawn, its either inside the shop room, or near the ressurection stones, but there is a bug, when I choose "No" for an answer, I return back to the shop room, try fixing it dude, I've experienced it maybe 5 times. but since your map is still ongoing, you can do some good triggering for this.

another bug I found, when I activate the Wanderer's only active skill, he jumps for the kill right? but when I did it many times, he suddenly appears in the north-eastern side of the map, what went wrong? try checking him for a while, if you do see its bug, make a good change for it pronto! because I'm totally digging this hero!

Score Statistics

Total Score [25.5/30]

that's all dude, hope you like my review, all I can say is your map is explendid! I'll wait for the next changes of your map, and tell me for the releases so I can play it again LOL! then again, good work you made for the map

happy map-making!

 

[jxtranghero]

@Orcnet
thx bro! for the review, believe me I will consider all of above.
Rep+1 sir,

 

[Orcnet]

apologies with the imageshack upload dude, there is something wrong with there website, damit! I'll just use photobucket next time, oh well thanks

 

[jxtranghero]

That's fine with me...

 

[Drunken_Jackal]

This map, judging from the screenshots, looks nice. Testing it.

 

[jxtranghero]

It was only a joke!!!

 

[HOooDy]

screenshots looks nice !!! ...

okkkkk ...... NICE AND GGGGGOOOOddddd ...... ... 5/5 ...........

 

[jxtranghero]

Don't post twice that's illegal possession of fire arms. "Article 1123 of No jaywalking law"

 

[-Bloody Hound-]

I will just comment on your terraining skills ........
Its IMBA :OOOOOO

 

[jxtranghero]

@Burke
thanks, its my talent...
how about the gameplay?

 

[x3GlikE]

Epic testing now,...

 

[jxtranghero]

Edit :
OMG!! I lost my usb today whatta bad day...

 

[jxtranghero]

EDIT:
Now I know... very thanks!!!

 

[Drunken_Jackal]

Dont double post

 

[jxtranghero]

yow!

 

[Drunken_Jackal]

Dont offtopic too much too.

 

[jxtranghero]

What do you mean sir Blindman?

 

[Drunken_Jackal]

Edit :
OMG!! I lost my usb today whatta bad day...

This posting things not so related to the topic.

 

[jxtranghero]

It's related because the very newest updated maps of DERai and others is in that usb.

 

[Drunken_Jackal]

Oh then the yow! And you also did a double post.

 

[jxtranghero]

yow! means you are owsome, fantastic you know?

EDIT:
Improving game difficulty

 

[Ironside]

Review by Ironside
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Positive features:

- Interesting gameplay
- Good terrain
- Has a quest menu
- Displays various game information

Negative features:

- Lacks more heroes
- This type of map could also use better spells

Additional Information / Conclusion:

The map is doing good progress, it could though have more heroes and better spells. Good Luck.

Rating: 4/5
Vote for: Approved

 

[jxtranghero]

Thanks for approving

Edit:

My map is not being protected... Feel free to use all resource of this map.

 

[zarkenpachi]

The thing about the end boss the drakera, at 1 point he spawn hellhounds and become invulnerable and when we kill the hellhounds they just respawning and the boss remains invulnerable is this intentional or a bug?

 

[eubz]

Hey... what a genius map... Nice 1...

 

[jxtranghero]

EDIT:
Still on learning process, I want to change all creeps and building if possible base on the theme of weird model textures ^_^

 

[DPL]

Keep up the good work, man.

 

[jxtranghero]

I'll try

 

[Tesh]

Pretty good. not the best i have seen though. 3/5

 

[jxtranghero]

@Tesh
Thanks a lot
EDIT:
!

 

[NeedNotoknow]

This game are nice.But i think a little bit hard to earn money and what the function of upgrade your element?

 

[jxtranghero]

This game are nice.But i think a little bit hard to earn money and what the function of upgrade your element?

That is why I put a repeatable quest inside the barracks.
Elements <use ESC>upgrade to improve character skills. each character has own elements properties I mention that in <f9>

 

[DG.DETORAK]

GG from the dread lord LOL dont know what im sayin

5/5

 

[Shen]

i tried this map in single player using the avenger hero (yea sorry i had to use cheats 2 check it better).its really great map.i killed the skeleton boss and figured out i should destroy these towers next to him inorder to reach the boss.i liked the attack animation of the skeleton boss and the idea of the avenger where he gets mana by attacking and the charge skill however its hard to control where to charge to so i hope u can make the skill abit easier 2 use(making it same as flame strike skill style for example).The terrain is awesome and the variety of creeps and bosses makes game more fun as u put many creeps of various races(nightelves orcs undead demons).All in all its great map.i will try 2 play it with some friends later.i rate it 5/5 +1 rep.keep the good work