Second terrain

[siegaeditor]

My second terrain could not resist making another waterfalls tell me if I made any mistakes

 

[YourNameHere]

It doesn't look bad in general, but a few suggestions:

• Some trees are placed on stone textures, please avoid that
• The water itself looks quite empty, add some stuff or make is smaller. Even better, use the custom water model which can be found in the Ultimate Terrain Map.
• You could add some more variations of trees and plants in general, i.e. making different versions of the trees with other tinting.

Keep it going.

 

[RaijinSpark]

1st, Avoid putting trees/grasses on stone tilesets.

2nd, the brown hammer guy seems to lack doodads or anything in his surrounding. it cannot be left alone, since it's visible in the pic.

3rd, You can atleast add grass, fish, stones or something in the water (It's quite empty)

As for the other they look very nice and good, I like it but still need to practice to make even better terrains.

Rating:

4/5 - Good

Best Regards,
DarkHorse08

 

[siegaeditor]

Thanks for the comments

 

[RaijinSpark]

no problem, looking forward for more of your terrains.

+REP for having a rating above 3/5.

 

[PROXY]

well, the paladin doesn't fit, the water is empty and the enviroment around the water is even emptier :/ but keep it going, you're going better and better! =) +rep