Scene WIP

[ragingspeedhorn]

So for a project in school we have to make a scene according to this picture.

Early preview of the scene.

The level of detail won't be as high as in the original picture, the primary focus will be on getting geometry right and making it appear cleaner than in the original.

 

[TDR]

well...yeah, looks good so far...not much to critique at this stage. Keep going.

 

[ragingspeedhorn]

A little update.

 

[Linaze]

It looks like a good beginning, and I think you have succeeded well on the part where you wanted to make it cleaner. You have copied the details well in the eastern-most window, and that looks good. My suggestions'd be to keep it up, as it looks as though it is coming along rather well. The stair might be too thin, and that is my only critic for now. Good work so long!

 

[brad.dude03]

Looking good so far Rage

 

[ragingspeedhorn]

Thanks for the comments. This is the third version of the stair, I had a lot of problems with that. The first 2 versions of it was too big so I had to reduce it.

A lot of work has been done since the last update, I'll post a new screenshot tomorow.

 

[ragingspeedhorn]

New WIP, gotten a lot further now.

 

[donut3.5]

I'd make the roof more uneven and less patterned, so that it looks.. messier, in general.
Everything else looks good for now.
--donut3.5--

 

[TDR]

here's my 2 cents now:
1)the elements on the roof look too repetitive, add some variation;
2)remove the smoothing groups from the polygons around and on the damaged areas.

edit: ah shit, donut wtf?

 

[brad.dude03]

Still looking good. For the untrained eye (mine), everything looks good except the roof, which, as TDR stated, is a touch too repetitive. Add some variation up there!

 

[CombatTheWombat]

I love it, looks rlly realistic. The windows are awesome. I think the sheet metal roof looks sweet but I agree that it is a bit patterned.

 

[ragingspeedhorn]

Thanks for the comments everyone. I hadn't payed much attention to the roof so far, thanks for pointing it out, I'll roughen it up a bit.

TDR: I know there is a few problems with the ruined part next to the stairs, it became like that from the results of a somewhat freak-accident. I've tried to fix it but I'd need to entirely redo the area to correct the flaws, which currently is at the bottom of my to-do-list. Also it should cause no problems once textured, or so the teacher answered me when I brought my concerns about this to his attention. But I'm probably still going to fix it, at some point.

A new shot will be up next week once I return to the mainland.

 

[Hawkwing]

The window needs to be farther away from the wall. Also, the top of the wall on the left is much higher than the structure on the right.

Looking really good so far.

 

[ragingspeedhorn]

Those are finishing touches, for now I focus on creating the scenery itself, later on I'll adjust the proportions. However I do appreciate your attention to detail, thanks for your observations.

 

[TDR]

actually, getting the proportions right is the foremost thing you must do.

 

[LiOneSS]

looks nice by now be sure to find some pretty textures :3

 

[TDR]

by the way, I made this brick wall texture a while ago, maybe it'll be of some use. You can always make it tile more horizontally than vertically to make the bricks flatter. It's 100% tileable, seamless and I also made normal and specular maps for it, I'll give it to you if you'll decide to use it.
If you have to do everything yourself, no problem then.

 

[ragingspeedhorn]

@TDR - Proportion/placement wise of various walls' lenght/height is not that big a problem, I could in a few minutes move and extent the various objects. I'll do it right now so it isn't an issue in the further versions.

Regarding the texture, thanks, but I am not sure if it is needed, yet. We're supposed to texture the scene next week and I am unsure if we are going to do it all from scratch or not.

 

[ragingspeedhorn]

Never got to finish the house sadly, however I did texture it + used TDR's awesome brick texture, thanks!