Safe Youre Kingdom V2.1

[Remixer]

Same here - you need to add corresponding description for the map.

 

[BlueFire]

1) - Save* and Your* 2) - Make an actuall description, if you're too lazy just check out a template or something 3) - The preview of the map is just yours to pick, but I recommend to change it to either the minimap or a self-made thumbnail-like picture.

 

[hypsandar]

Hey, i'm just a random member like everyone else giving you tips. How weird, we're not really getting paid 0-0

So, as Remixer said, add a deeper description, perhaps a lore?
Also try fixing your grammar, it seems off. Some might judge your map by its grammar and not content :/

Use google to correct your words, if a word you wrote (In any text box) has red lines below it, its not spelled correctly. Try right clicking it and see what happens

I haven't downloaded the map or played it therefore i will not rate it.
I want to know what i'm downloading first

 

[deepstrasz]

Most descriptions are just dots and comas...

 

[Remixer]

Most descriptions are just dots and comas...

Shouldn't be.

 

[BlueFire]

Shouldn't be.

They are

 

[Remixer]

They are

Well I don't know that for sure, I checked all the maps on the first page, and could not find a map with poor description.

 

[BlueFire]

Well I don't know that for sure, I checked all the maps on the first page, and could not find a map with poor description.

The in-game descriptions, not the ones on Hive ._.

 

[Remixer]

The in-game descriptions, not the ones on Hive ._.

We were discussing the hive descriptions:

"So, as Remixer said, add a deeper description, perhaps a lore?"

Sorry I got mixed up by deepstrasz's comment.

 

[Paillan]

5 - 4 - 2017 Moderation

No changes were made in more than 3 months which means that no changes are inteded to be made. Acording to rules, this implies that your map will now be classified as substandard. If you wish to revert this decision you can PM a map reviewer once you have updated the map.

Set to Substandard.

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