Rise of the Necro Knight v1.3.

[Spiros kall]

i am i think on chapter eight i have the DK ON circle but how i can answer the riddle? to open the door on cave?

 

[Momowarlord]

i am i think on chapter eight i have the DK ON circle but how i can answer the riddle? to open the door on cave?

Enter in chat simply

 

[conde]

nice campaign but the begin of some chapters dont respect the end of the last one... for example... you killed keagan and next chapter you kill him again in cinematic. thats non sense

4/5

 

[Atreus]

Very Good

 

[ZiBitheWand3r3r]

Nice terrain, I really like it (maybe last, final chapter needs a little work on terrain)
Good concept with gathering army from the corpses,
campaign not very hard, maybe final boss little to easy, I used banish+W spell (corpse blast or smth) and get that demon easy.
Good job overall

 

[VanAndro]

Momowarlord I thank you for making this campaign It's a bit short, but that's exactly what it's for. What touched me in your game are the dialogues - short and clear showing how great the desire for revenge is. With appropriate music, the spirit and atmosphere of the action + the dialogues could be conveyed. Music is great magic. Do not underestimate its power

 

[lichao001486]

Hello Mr. Momowarlord, my friend and I like your campaigns very much,but my friend can't register the hive. My friend have translated this campaigns into Chinese. My friend request me to transmit this message to you, and my friend hope he can get your permission.

 

[Momowarlord]

Hello Mr. Momowarlord, my friend and I like your campaigns very much,but my friend can't register the hive. My friend have translated this campaigns into Chinese. My friend request me to transmit this message to you, and my friend hope he can get your permission.

You have my permission

 

[lichao001486]

You have my permission

Thank you, my brother. I promise he will credit you on the translated map.

 

[LovG]

Hi Momowarlord.

I played this campaign and I enjoyed it. Here are some things I've encountered on the road and some feedback.

Spoiler: Review

Script: The plot is alright, but could use some improvement on the character's develepment as the missions progreses. Some dialogues could use some work (I'm not talking about the spelling mistakes, which there are but you can still understand and enjoy the game).

For example, in the prologue, the part where they scort the Necromancer's body to the crypt, that whole scene could have been with no dialogues and would be fine and the player will still understand what's going on.

Cinematics:
When you "play XX animation" on any unit, remember to put "queue stand animation". That way the character is not frozen in time after played said animation. This happened on prologue and first chapter if remember correctly.

I think it was chapt 2's endding that ended abruptly, a nice fade out would be nice.

Gameplay experience:
I like this mechanic were you get to pick your own army by using Second change. I think it's fun and new (at least for me).
Suggestion: I like the idea that you can reanimate neutral animals too! I thought this can be exploit and make secrets path were only small units can fit in to unlock them, just a thought.

It would be nice if the Main Character himself can raise the "legendary warriors". Because the first one I reanimated him with a Raccoon and the second one, with the Black Dragon (which I found out actually cool but a bit overpowered lol), without even destroying the trees.
Suggestion: since these are powerful warriors, a nice dialogue or something special would be nice, so the player can also understand that unit is a special one and a secret that there will be in most maps further on. It doesn't have to pause the game for this, maybe some small silly line will suffice.

Edit: Forgot to mention that I love you imported specific unit models when they go undead, also, they having same or sliglhy modified spells as when they lived is a big plus to the gameplay. yay!

Chap 1
I failed the second side quest when I killed one of the family peasent that came attacking me while destroying the barracks. I even didn't know he was part of a side-quests till I destroyed the barracks and tower and procceeded on.
Suggestion: If you wanna fix this I can suggest you 1) Pause the peasents till the cinematic starts, or 2) change the ownership of the family and make them treat player 2 as neutral.

Escenary:
I like what you did while creating your world. the terrain, doads, and so on looks nice. I like how, overall, you tried to keep it W3 style, kudos for that.

Sound:
You can add some sounds files when the player interacts with the ambience or when they are on the correct path. For example, 2º chapter when finding out the scepter for the side quests. It's not necessary but gives flavour to it.

As I mentioned before, I did enjoy the campaign and looks really good for it to be your first one. I'd love to see more of this story.

Please have in mind some of these suggestions are small fixes that will bring QOL but they are not necesarry needed.

 

[Momowarlord]

Hi Momowarlord.

I played this campaign and I enjoyed it. Here are some things I've encountered on the road and some feedback.

Spoiler: Review

Script: The plot is alright, but could use some improvement on the character's develepment as the missions progreses. Some dialogues could use some work (I'm not talking about the spelling mistakes, which there are but you can still understand and enjoy the game).

For example, in the prologue, the part where they scort the Necromancer's body to the crypt, that whole scene could have been with no dialogues and would be fine and the player will still understand what's going on.

Cinematics:
When you "play XX animation" on any unit, remember to put "queue stand animation". That way the character is not frozen in time after played said animation. This happened on prologue and first chapter if remember correctly.

I think it was chapt 2's endding that ended abruptly, a nice fade out would be nice.

Gameplay experience:
I like this mechanic were you get to pick your own army by using Second change. I think it's fun and new (at least for me).
Suggestion: I like the idea that you can reanimate neutral animals too! I thought this can be exploit and make secrets path were only small units can fit in to unlock them, just a thought.

It would be nice if the Main Character himself can raise the "legendary warriors". Because the first one I reanimated him with a Raccoon and the second one, with the Black Dragon (which I found out actually cool but a bit overpowered lol), without even destroying the trees.
Suggestion: since these are powerful warriors, a nice dialogue or something special would be nice, so the player can also understand that unit is a special one and a secret that there will be in most maps further on. It doesn't have to pause the game for this, maybe some small silly line will suffice.

Edit: Forgot to mention that I love you imported specific unit models when they go undead, also, they having same or sliglhy modified spells as when they lived is a big plus to the gameplay. yay!

Chap 1
I failed the second side quest when I killed one of the family peasent that came attacking me while destroying the barracks. I even didn't know he was part of a side-quests till I destroyed the barracks and tower and procceeded on.
Suggestion: If you wanna fix this I can suggest you 1) Pause the peasents till the cinematic starts, or 2) change the ownership of the family and make them treat player 2 as neutral.

Escenary:
I like what you did while creating your world. the terrain, doads, and so on looks nice. I like how, overall, you tried to keep it W3 style, kudos for that.

Sound:
You can add some sounds files when the player interacts with the ambience or when they are on the correct path. For example, 2º chapter when finding out the scepter for the side quests. It's not necessary but gives flavour to it.

As I mentioned before, I did enjoy the campaign and looks really good for it to be your first one. I'd love to see more of this story.

Please have in mind some of these suggestions are small fixes that will bring QOL but they are not necesarry needed.

Thank you for your feedback. I am selfaware about most of those bugs and missed opportunities to improve the gameplay. I had some plans to make a sequal but I dont have much time to do so. If I decide to make a new campaign I will use your advices.