Revenge of The Blademaster

[Moderator]

16:10, 31st Jul 2010
ap0calypse: Approved
Update: Re-moderating with review and rating!

Date: 2011/Oct/16 14:46:41 Vengeancekael: VM // PM: Rep Received: 0

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[Septimus]

I was wondering if you already fix the timing. Hope I won't be seeing the repeated scene of blademaster cast mirror image after the bullet goes through him.

 

[millzy]

nah that doesent happen any more

 

[Septimus]

nah that doesent happen any more

so you are using precision timing?

 

[millzy]

yes i did

 

[Arisato]

seems interesting

 

[Jaret]

Hmm... The cinematic looks promising...
But, It's more of a "telling of the whole story" than a Trailer.

 

[RoytjeScheerman3]

It's OK but it needs more. Some things are a bit long, for example: if Garnis and his army walk through the city. You see many units walking and that takes to long for me. And you may could show the training of Nikoro. What Septimus says, timing of that bullet could have been better. 3/5

 

[Vengeancekael]

As a member of the Group Map Reviewers, I will be reviewing campaigns/cinematics :

Review - Revenge of The Blademaster A cinematic by millzy Camera : The camera work is great, we can see everything. Expect sometimes it went through objects, try to avoid that. Terrain : The environment is excellent, nothing to say here, however, there are some flat spots, heighten those. Story : The story is ok I guess, yet nothing special so far, just a son trying to have revenge for his father. The custom music is a plus. Animations : The fight scenes are good, you've used several animations. Other : There are several typos in the cinematic. There are a few grammar mistakes in the cinematic. Hiveworkshop : You are not breaking any rules. Overall : I guess this is a nice cinematic, with an excellent terrain, but I guess it needs just a few improvements. Final Rating : 3/5

 

[Vengeancekael]

As a member of the group Map Reviewers, I will be checking approved cinematics again:


(This is not counted as a double post)

Compatible - X

Permission - X

Map already uploaded - X

Rules - X

Bugs - X

Genre - X

Section - X

Category - X

[X = Passed]
[X = Failed]

 

[dragos98]

A good cinematic but....is less 4/5 sry....maybe next time 5/5.