Revenge of the Blademaster - Part 1

[Moderator]

12:45, 8th Aug 2010
ap0calypse: Approved

 

[Darkzealot_128]

Will check. Also, please tell us more about the cinematic in description. Also, you have to give credit to the people who made the models and skins (unelss you made them yourself.)

Edit: Ok many spelling and grammar mistakes but other than that I liked the terrain and the cinematic story.

Edit: Kk, atleast fix all those grammar and spelling mistakes.

 

[millzy]

credits are in the cinematic at the end

i dont want to give away to much of what happends....its telling you that the humands are atacking the town where the blademaster lives nothing els to add realy

 

[Vengeancekael]

You have to post the credits here in the description as well, it's a rule.
Anyway, I'll check it now.

Edit:

As a member of the group Map Reviewers, I will be reviewing Campaigns/Cinematics:

[+] Terrain
[+] Battle Scene
[+] Story
[-] Flat Terrain
[-] Grammar mistakes
[-] Typos
[-] Missing words

Rating: 2/5
Status: Approval

 

[Chewii]

I think its pretty good. but some wrong typos.

 

[Creed345]

Huge file size geez
i like it alot but you should totally fix all the typos.
and maybe fix up some of the script some parts r kinda cheesy.
also one thing is when the Soildier says to Grannis
(you goin to be ok sir (or w.e)) change the "ok" to "okay" : ).
but yeah sweet idea cant wait 4 that next one.


Edit: you Fixed Pretty much all the Grammar and spelling mistakes good job : )

 

[millzy]

ok guyz thanks for the reviews i noticed use are all talking about my typos and grammar well im pritty bad with grammar and stuff like that.

 

[Vengeancekael]

You could pass me the map so that I remove the typos etc.
If you don't trust me then fine.

 

[WindowsVistaSucks]

Hey I am willing to help with all the typos as well.

p.s.: I am good at terrain (wink wink) want sexy map? I might help you

 

[Vengeancekael]

As a member of the group Map Reviewers, I will be checking approved cinematics again:


(This is not counted as double post)

Compatible - X

Permission - X

Map already uploaded - X

Rules - X

Bugs - X

Genre - X

Section - X

[X = Passed]
[X = Failed]

 

[SexYFrostWyrM]

This is a great cinematic, as we don't often enough watch.
The bad thing is you should really do something for the typo and ponctuation because it's somehow quite annoying. Be some more perfectionnist.
I also think you should use your imagination to find custom names for your characters instead of just taking old warcraft ones (granis, kigami, rokan, etc.).
Nice cinematic overall, i'm impatient to watch the following ones.

 

[foxx.assassin]

great cinematigcs; but at the begining the soldiers were banging each others.that was funny

 

[deepstrasz]

This should have been one film, one story.
2.5/5.
Pressing ESC more than one time will start the countdown multiple times.

 

[CampScouter]

Nicceee