The Adventures of Rikudo - [Part 1]

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Vengeancekael
Date: 2012/Dec/15 18:07:07

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Rejected.
View comment: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/2259347-post9.html​

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Orcnet
[22:48, Dec/15/2012]

"Approved"

 

[sonofjay]

Haven't try it yet, but the terrain can benefit for a lot of improvement.

 

[UndeadImmortal]

What's that Ogre doing in a Gnoll Camp

Offtopic: Where did you get the idea of the Troll Bridge? Dora?

 

[G A T E]

What's that Ogre doing in a Gnoll Camp

Offtopic: Where did you get the idea of the Troll Bridge? Dora?

Maybe

 

[kingston45]

nice

 

[Vengeancekael]

Thread cleaned, please only talk about the actual map, don't derail everything.

 

[G A T E]

Thread cleaned, please only talk about the actual map, don't derail everything.

Ok,sir! And thank you for commenting my map.
By the way,when you wants to review my map?

 

[Orcnet]

I actually played and finish the game, it is very simple in my observation but to see its been in good use with some story related quests, unique characters and some unusual areas I guess this is good to go

 

[Vengeancekael]

Sorry Orcnet, but you have way too low standards. :V I simply cannot let this map pass as an acceptable map and definitely not with a 3/5 rating.

The terrain is completely monotone: There's not enough tile variation, the trees are placed squarely (Yes, you used the square shape), making their placement completely unnatural.
There are no other environment doodads other than trees, add flowers, shrubs, anything you can find that could make it more realistic and beautiful. (Check the ultimate terraining map if you want)

And next, the triggers are bad: You are not removing any memory leak.

Finally, the gameplay needs work: The normal creeps should have some special moves/spells, the Holy Knight should have more custom spells that actually go together, Fury Fire is a start, now just replace his 3 other spells.

Other:

• Pan the camera to the player's character after the intro
• Fade out the screen (cinematic action) in the beginning and then fade in, to make it start smoothly
• Holy Knight doesn't play an animation when casting Fury Fire
• Fury Fire's icon placement is wrong (Help)
• Why are enemy units affected by Fury Fire hidden for a second?
• Create a quest for objectives (+ another one for credits)
• Remove spell immunity from mud golems, it's boring to just hit them constantly until they die (Having critical strike isn't really quite the solution)
• Hide selection circles during cinematics

Rejected with a 1/5 rating. Sorry Orcnet, I really don't mean to be offensive, but this just degrades the hive's standards too much.
And don't get me wrong G A T E, I know you have potential, you just don't have the modding skills yet.

 

[best_player_88]

Ok I seryesly don't care about that fire make enemies disapear, i actually like this effect since it make me feel imba!!! make enemies disapear from existance by my WILL U NOOBS
But I really hate how the fire damages myself and alllies, is this intended? then why? its so unfair that my own skill damage me, I mean, I AM THE CASTER shouldn't the power I controll unharm me? that sux! you gotta make this fire spell not effect allies, just select the spells target to "enemy" instead of "ally" Over thing, need fix so that I can see the cooldown of the spells I'm ownning, its not something the player seppouse to ghess and asume from trying, fun map though I havent seen it all.
5/5

 

[G A T E]

thank you!

 

[best_player_88]

thank you!

dude why didnt u read my private massage

Try: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=120665&stc=1&d=1355765578

 

[G A T E]

i read it but I don't reply it

 

[Vengeancekael]

The new spell doesn't deal damage.
And please be more original and don't just copy a dota spell.
You also have not removed the memory leaks as I had told you and the terrain is still horrendous. I really cannot go into detail for it does not meet any level of acceptable terraining, so please check out some tutorials or get inspired by some approved maps.
The things I suggested in my first review would definitely take longer than a day to do, especially for you whose modding skills are still very lacking.

 

[best_player_88]

i read it but I don't reply it

TEAM RPG
What can be more fun than that?
No replay at all?!

Edit: ok i go away and log in tommorow, I go play team RPG, see ya!.

 

[G A T E]

The new spell doesn't deal damage.
And please be more original and don't just copy a dota spell.
You also have not removed the memory leaks as I had told you and the terrain is still horrendous. I really cannot go into detail for it does not meet any level of acceptable terraining, so please check out some tutorials or get inspired by some approved maps.
The things I suggested in my first review would definitely take longer than a day to do, especially for you whose modding skills are still very lacking.

Actually I make the DotA spell,not copy it.
By the way,I actually wants to re-update my map.I know the spell doesn't deal damage.So,I make a new one.

I will do something with the terraining.

 

[best_player_88]

Actually I make the DotA spell,not copy it.
By the way,I actually wants to re-update my map.I know the spell doesn't deal damage.So,I make a new one.

I will do something with the terraining.

The Barrens War ? this is urs or the other? by the way I upgraded your map even further! dude ! don't give up on that map I have eyes for such things! u put planty of units which drop items and made floating bridge, HOW?!
I'm sure you have planty more to show, by the way I really like the terrain you should't change it, I am making fun of ur map changing it into hero rpg xD for fun so I have something to play, want me to post it?

 

[G A T E]

The Barrens War ? this is urs or the other? by the way I upgraded your map even further! dude ! don't give up on that map I have eyes for such things! u put planty of units which drop items and made floating bridge, HOW?!
I'm sure you have planty more to show, by the way I really like the terrain you should't change it, I am making fun of ur map changing it into hero rpg xD for fun so I have something to play, want me to post it?

Lol
Post where?
In the Maps Section?

If you want to post it,then post it.I wanna see it.

 

[best_player_88]

I wanna see it.

Ok but keep in mind its not 100% prepered.
You are good with putting in decoration, maybe you want to help me decorate it? I also need ur trigger for imba raising bridge
***Attached alpha version of the upcoming map of ours
PLZ add the bridge upon troll death to "STYLR version 0.01"
Edit: and if u read this, come bnet

 

[best_player_88]

I wanna see it.

wrong map, fixed

 

[G A T E]

where can I find Bnet community websitE?