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Uhh... well, actually, I don't care of paying attention of the personality of rats because... Come on, they're just rats! :P


Ok, I'll try:

That rat you made seems to be very curious, naive and... soft!


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PS:I forgot the say that it's eyes are very well-made!

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The neck and legs seem wrong in the sketch.
Yes LiOneSS already told me about the neck. :/

What's wrong with the legs though?

As for your other dragon image, I think it is nearly done.
Any suggestions for what to do with the sky, especially on the right side?

I'll be blurring the sky a lot more as right now it looks much more unfinished compared to Scorch.
 
Well, the lightning that the stormy background suggests doesn't match with the lightning used at the dragon.

Yes, I should have said that before, but I couldn't :/

I'll suggest a sunset background or something with an orange/yellow fog.

Well, I really don't want to redo the sky, but would tinting it so it's more orangey instead of that grayish green work better?

Varsaigen said:
Sorry. Upon closer inspection, it's logical. I was just saying that from a distance the shadow from her right arm (holding the fire) really stood out. :P Otherwise, it's great.

But... what is with the weird swirls in the back?
Uhh... the clouds?
 
Well, I really don't want to redo the sky, but would tinting it so it's more orangey instead of that grayish green work better?

Uhh... the clouds?

its not that. Its the wierd swirls you have in the sky. I have circled it for you. Also, I like the rain detail you have. I saw many small details when I was circling the swirls. Hope this helps! :thumbs_up:
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