First of all, the description is not looking good at all. For now, the description is informative, but it lacks of creativity. I suggest, click this to know more about description. And you should add more details about the melee map, such as how many gold mines, tavern and so on. If don't know how, click this. Screenshots would be nice too, it makes the description more appealing, if you want to know how, click this.
Then, the placements of the starting location is not good. The purple has the disadvantage and can get easily defeated, since its in the center of the others. The teal has the advantage, its almost at the big camp, which it has 2 gold mines. Plus, there are only 2 extra gold mine, which would be not good benefits to a 4 players. The trees is not that few and not that many, nothing much to say. While the neutrals needs a lot of work. The placement of each neutrals is like a campaign map, there are neutrals on the way. Additionally, there's a lot of neutrals. Another thing is the neutrals don't drop items. Lastly, the terrain is not good at all. Its just full of trees and dirt tiles. I can barely see a doodads. Try improving it more. Well, I think you should really take a look at this, to know more about making a melee map. |