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Yes, well, I had been scouting out ahead of the group... And was slowly searching towards the left...

*Having just gotten in sight of the camp, he turns a hard right, keeping low to the ground, and quietly searching for the enemy positions, and their identity.*
 
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"You seem to know your way around this place, based on the fact that you have survived here alone. Maybe when this is over you could join us on our journey." Says chaos.

"Hmm i wonder whats taking those two so long, they were supposed to warn the scouts then come back." Says Cygor kind of softly.

Chaos, just now noticing that the two that he had sent out to get the scouts, didn't come back with Blade and Shal'mak, turns to Blade and says, "Did you see two black skinned naga on your way here by any chance?"
 
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At the medicine tent.

Dothyos opens his eyes
Misosja looks at him, then she noticed his eyes were all red and there bleeding.

What's going on? ahrg my eyes, I can't see. he shouts.

Misosja is going to the back of the tent searching for some cures for his eyes. Misosja says while she turns. Here I have some... Where is he! as she goes outside she sees him. Dothyos stop, your hurt.

Dothyos: but I have to tell the others about the Broken ells they wont stand a chance.
Misosja: but you're blind!
But I have to. As he shouts chaos come here fast.

(better) ?
 
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"I hope their alri...." Hearing Dythos he rushes over to him. "What is it?"

Btw Lore-Wolf, please use quotation marks to seperate dialogue from other text. Also whenever a different person starts talking, start a new paragraph. It just makes it easier for us to read.
 
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Chaos, I maybe know who is behind this, there called "the Broken" there naga just like us, or they used to be, they have chanced, rage took over there minds.
There once were brethren of us, a long time ago.
Please do not try to engage them in close combat while there are 2 of them.
Can you promise me that?
 
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They were once part of the city Gra'nasill just like us. but my older sister (the broken leader) got infected by some kind of curse and her hart filled with rage.
She had plans to be the only tribe naga in this sea.
Of course we disagreed but she still had some followers that try to kill every other Naga, Starting with our own family. she killed our own father and mother. I had enough time to ran away as I heard here laugh. I tried to hide behind the reef next to the city. then I saw some big explosions. then i saw other come my way and we were the survivors and then we started this tribe.
I think she picked up my trail and followed us.
 
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"Why didn't you tell me this earlier?"

By the way Lore-Wolf, I'm waiting for you to call their attack. Also for every one else, remember that this isn't Elders. You can't just go kill 20 of them with no difficulty at all. Don't overpower your chars. Maybe take out 1 or 2 on your own, but if you just try to attack them all alone you will be defeated. So Var, make sure that you stay semi hidden and don't just pop out in the middle of their army. lol
 
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Not the way I play. I don't pop into their armies. I like keeping things more realistic. Even if Shal'mak is a magic-wielding tank of sorts :p

Though... he doesn't respond too nicely to injuries. He avoids them when he can, but he has no problem dishing it out.
 
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Dothyos sounds angered:

"because is was afraid, that you wouldn't except our tribe, you see more than the half of my tribe is to young to face a warrior of that class. if we waited for them we certainly be finished."

Shout in the distance up the reef "HE LITTLE BROTHER!" Join me now brother or face your death!
Tell me what was in that dart!
Zunaza: "oh you like it? its my own brew to make your anger drive you, and it will change you a little." she laughs.
"So do you join me brother?"
"Arhg I don't know my eyes they burn!"
"Then all your friends will die!"
"Go slay as many naga as you want but leave the leaders alive" she shouts. "after its over i will search for you Dothoys." she laughs.

Dothoys Roars in pain he feels angered it looks like he hates every one around him.
"I dont know what to do" he shouts.

He wants to crush something.
Misosja, give my weapon!
No, you cant fight in this state your blind you will kill yourself!
Roars again

THE BATTLE STARTS
 
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*drifting along the bottom of the reef, Shal'mak hears the roaring in the distance. Knowing something was wrong, he continued along, until he saw on of the attackers. It was a naga female, and she was launching stranger red spines towards the tribes. Sinking lower, he holds himself carefully above the sand, watching, gathering information. She hadn't seen him yet, as he was behind some seaweed. He would learn about the enemy, before engaging them personally. He kept his body quiet, not letting his tail cause any disturbance, as he moved behind her at a distance, working his way past so he could find another one. Keeping out of sight, he left no noticable disturbance for the naga to feel as he snuck away.*

Misha, you'd be better iff with an abyss. Really :p No manner of being can tell you of the number of dead are at the bottom of trenches :p It's LITTERED with the bones of dead creatures. But... in a reef? not really.
 
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"Obviously they under estimate us. Their overconfidence will be the death of them. Move our troops to the left flank. Naz'jak, send your slave to attack from the front."
The Shadowfin naga move to the left of the enemies, hiding behind some obstacles. They set up 5 bolt throwers with 12 soldiers guarding them in front. "Wait for my command."

(Misha, well, let the battle go on for a little while before you show us your power. Then, when we are about to pull back, you can come in to save the day.)
 
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lol let him destroy the reef. XD He can carve a path through :p though it'd never work :p He COULD start smashing things around him if you keep him restrained :p

Well, I will keep recon, but I need to know... exactly what are the myrmidon-like units like? In image, personality, pretty much everything so I can describe them accurately. Otherwise, i'm just gonna run into the females who are launching spines. Besides, the males would be going mellee any time now. :/
 
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"FIRE!!!" yells Chaos. All bolt throwers release arrows. Killing 3 and injuring 2. "Reload!!! FIRE!!!" This time only killing 2. Then a fraction of the enemy starts charging towards the shadowfin. "Shields up boys. Bolts, move back" Bolt throwers move back a bit and grab bows and arrows for ranged support.
 
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Lets try to stay on topic, please.

The enemy naga reach the Shadowfin. The naga are standing there with their shields up waiting for the hit. 5 naga smash into their shield. The shadowfin warriors push them back then move down a bit so that the archers can get a clear shot.
 
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still need to know what the male naga look like... (enemy)

*Shal'mak carefully slithers through the reef, searching carefully for the enemy by moving his using his eyes and not his head to examine his surroundings (instead of lookng around normally, he doesn't want to give the message that there is movement in his area)*
 
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(they looks just like mine (we are the same ..) silver like a bit taller)

"Now Dothyos isn't able to lead is I will do it." Lorhos shouts.
Ok listen up, every one able to fight pick up a weapon and help chaos!

Chaos i leave you in command off the battle i will evacuate the wounded and the old. Dothyos also will come with me.

(Don't follow Lorhos or with only 1 hero or so)
 
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Just then another wave advances towards Chaos. "There's too many, fall back a bit." Melee move back and ranged finish off that wave. Another wave comes up.
 
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While chaos holds the line, Lorhos takes the evacuated to a far reef.
a Child: where are we going?
Lorhos to a better place, to better people.
suddenly the were serounded by naga, they were hiding behind the reef.
Then Zunaza apears, "good work Lorhos you praised."she says.
My pleasure my queen (bows)
"Where is Dothoys" she asks.
Snozas, Bring Dothoys.
Dothoys: whats going on?
Zunaza: you're comming with me brother.
Dothoys: no we are not, Man draw your weapons!
Lorhos: witch men? hahaha!
Dothoys: How do you mean? Where are the men?
Zunaza: There fighting for theirs lives. But for what?!
Dothoys: Lorhos why you?!
Lorhos: because you always picked Gormas! no matter what i do you always look at Gormas he was the first to lead his own army he was the second in command why him?
 
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Dothoys: because he will always stay loyal.
Zunaza: Lorhos come here.
Lorhos goes to Zunaza.
Zunaza: Give me your weapon.
Lorhos starts to doubt.
Then he says: I'll show you what loyal is Dothoys!
Dothoys: No you dont have to! stop it!
Zunaza: I dont need you any more, chops his head off.
Zunaza: Ok men take them!

Some on see it doesn't matter who
 
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I'm confused by all the names and actions blurring together as they flicker between targets, chatting, and actions... It became shades of gray D:>

*Coming upon a waiting naga female, waiting for further orders, he comes up behind her adnquickly breaks he neck, hiding her body amongst the coral. Making sure not to puncture the body and releash a trail of blood, he move on to find other enemy naga to break, thus ending the ranged support the mellee naga would have against the tribes*
 
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Two of my melee and 1 range are dead. "Fall back, there is too many. we must..." just then Chaos notices the decapitated body of Lorhos. "Noooo!!!!" he yells violently as he charges towards Zunaze.
Meanwhile the rest of our army are slowly moving backwards. "This fight is lost," yells Cygor.

By the way Misha, you can use your power any time now.
 
*Blade Impales another naga attacker with his runeblade, stealing his life force, then throws his lifeless body away* Alright, That's it! *he lifts his runeblade up*

Souls of the fallen enemies, I call thee, Bow down to the will of deathknight! To my will! *the runeblade starts to glow faintly green*

Now.. *chuckles Blade* Arise my minions. Arise and fight in the name of thou Lord!

*one by one, to the shock to the attackers, their fallen brethren rise up and charge into the rest of the enemy force*
 
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*Noticing the advancement in the battle, Shal'mak decides to use his abilities. With a sweep of his arms, he forces the water against the sand, causing the sand to mix with the water, leaving the reef in an aquatic sandstorm as the waters churn. Now rushing through with great speed, he navigates towards his foes and impales them one by one. So thick is the sand that not even he can see well, yet he uses the sand and pulsations to detect other objects that pose a threat to his navigation*

He uses the sand as an extension of his senses. When the sand grinds up against an object like a rock or coral, he can sense it. It is, essentially, a null area of which there is no sand, and thus he can detect it. As far as naga go, their null area moves frequently and in different areas, allowing him to know his targets in the reef :p)
 
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Chaos reaches Zunaze. The two clash in an epic battle. Zunaze gets a lucky hit on Chaos' shoulder. Then Chaos, hearing the shouts of victory coming from the main battle, looks over to see the enemies falling back a little. Then he sees the massive sand storm on the other side of the enemies and screams of pain coming from inside it. Chaos looks back at Zunaze just in time to block her sword. Chaos pushes her back then spins, dodging her blade and stabbing her in the lower chest injuring her but not killing her. Both injured they back away from each other to catch their breath.
 
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Varsaigen - sorry, let's just say that our range units fired inside the sand storm and thats where the screams came from.

Misha- Not exactly. I dont have the crystals or brown skin (that's for my elders char), but my char is the blade master. He does have those dread lock things. But he has a blackish skin.
btw I like what you do Misha, with the purple text seperating RP from other talk. I think we should all do that to keep it organized.


Almost out of breath Chaos stands there for a few moments.
 
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(well she kinde gets away with the children and the old and dothoys)
Chaos i did use the purp all the time :p)
(as for the battle did you win? cus if its ended erm may be recouver from wounds and then go to Zae'ko?)


if we like do purp for discuson and green for time and place like:
""then at the Bannana Reef they set up camp""

and the dark teal like for spells and stuff what misha did
""Rise unded ... things like that""
 
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No need, just use one color for RP (white) and a different color for chat stuff. For example, to explain what is going on atm to someone else.

"My father did." answers Chaos as he jumps up and hits the sword of one of the guards. Chaos slides his sword down the guard's and slices off his hands. Then cuts off his head with great rage.

(Misha you can finish off the other guard. Then after that we will have to follow Zunaze to her city to rescue Dothoys)
 

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I'll join! My guy's gonna be called Razzerrender, And the tribe, Deathsea.
IC: Razzerrender was bored, I mean they were based in deep sea, seriously who's gonna come here? The best they got was boats but now this area was marked "Unexplored, Dangerous sea" so he didn't get much so what the heck? An Invasion will do nicely!
 
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The battle was over. Now we had to find Zunaze's city and rescue the captive naga. "We won't take our whole army. We will sneak into their city at night and find Dothoys and his naga. Blade, Shal'mak, can you two come with me? The rest will stay here and guard the camp. Naz'jak I'm leaving you in charge of my tribe and the camp."

Veljkom, if you want something to do then just say that a hydralisk attacked the camp and you have to fight it, or something like that. or if you actually wanted to come with us then I will edit my post and leave Cygor in charge.
 
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As Dothoys wakes he feels pain, then he looks around
"Where am i?"
the he realises: I can see. why cant i move and why does every thing look so weird?
then he feels his other eye still is closed. He cant move! he is chained. The room looks dark. Then Zunaza comes.
"So said to see you like this why did you pick the wrong side? it doesn't matter you will join us any moment now." she laughs.
"What do you mean TELL ME NOW!"
"your anger your rage it grows every moment, soon enough you will be able to join me."
"ARG! let me go!" He becomes aggressive and he cant think clear any more, he tries to break free.
Then she laughs and she goes away.
Dothyos shouts: "what is all this? why do I feel so angry, and why didn't the other tribes save us! Its their fault! they did this! They betraid me! They must pay!
As Zunaza goes away she hears his shout.
Zunaza: Welcome home brother, Welcome home!
 
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Shal'mak is the best scout we have. He will be able to track them down with ease. Are you coming Shal'mak?
 
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