My Terrain ! Pls give comments.

[Lancer1111]

I'm really new in Wc3 and so i tried WE first (loaded a meele map). My first impression was : This would be many work to make an own map. A few weeks later I made one map for my friends LAN-Party, but this was really shit, cause everything was bad and i knew. Now I tried to make a new map and so I first tried to make Terrain better. Here are two screens (please give comments):
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EDIT: Sorry for the bad Qualitiy, my graphic-card is very old.

 

[Handycombinder]

I think you spammed waterfalls too much... Its hurting my eyes

 

[Lancer1111]

Lesser is more, thats right. Thanks

 

[bounty hunter2]

For first you require some better fog then just dark.
The waterfalls are spammed as said before.
Ashenvale trees are way to ugly, download UTM rather.
The blizzard cliff on the top looks ugly as well.
And the blizzard cliff around the lake or whatever is ugly, rather lower/raise terrain.

 

[Lancer1111]

UTM ? Not heard about it yet.

 

[Handycombinder]

Ultimate Terraining Map. You can download it at the top of the terrain section

 

[Lancer1111]

Yeah, but i can't use the models, they're only green-black cubes.

 

[Grave_Digger_]

Yeah, but i can't use the models, they're only green-black cubes.

If you test the map, they will go wierd and be like you said (Has happened to me).

 

[TheBlooddancer]

Mah.

Its pretty bad.
Also, you need tile variation, and height variation, and some kind of fog.

 

[~Void~]

Where the hell does all that water come from anyways? An underground spring of that force would exceed the power of a volcanic explosion, not only would it not trickle down the sides like you portrayed it to do in the picture, it would probably erupt in a shock wave the size of a small nuclear warhead.

Fix pl0x.

 

[thegreatsmite]

Where the hell does all that water come from anyways? An underground spring of that force would exceed the power of a volcanic explosion, not only would it not trickle down the sides like you portrayed it to do in the picture, it would probably erupt in a shock wave the size of a small nuclear warhead.

Fix pl0x.

lolz

were all going to die no! look what you did lazer!!!

 

[White-Lion]

1. Instead of making cliff just raise terrain and place some pathing blockers.
2. More enviroment
3. Make some hills and lower the terrain some where
4. and yeah some UTM trees would be good