Very first terrain ~ Please comment!!

[lotta65]

Please comment, this was my very first terrain, and done at 5:00 AM on a school morning. F***. I need to go to bed

 

[Cool Joe Smith]

from what i see it is very nice, but you could use some more doodads in the front, and lower the trees so taht they are not hovering above the ground
(use Ctrl+Page Up/Down)

 

[Bob27]

Ok well it looks nice for a first try. Maybe a few more environmental doodads though, and perhaps you should use the dirt and rough dirt tilesets for a road going though the river and up the hill, because it just seams to me like there just should be a road there.

Also some animals would add to the terrain, so just a couple of random animals somewhere in the terrain I think would make it look better. Also the middle of the screenshot looks a bit blank, try adding some rocks and other things to it.

 

[lotta65]

Thanks for the tips, when I get home I'm gonna fix the trees. Well maybe, I have to cook for like ten people first. *sigh*

 

[Craka_J]

The fog and sky don't blend with each other. I think that either the sky should be changed or the fog should be applied to the sky. Those are the two major things to fix that issue.

I think there should be more shrubbery and rocks around the forest and river as well.
~Craka_J

 

[ragingspeedhorn]

For a first try this is okay, but as Craka and Bob stated this lacks a lot. Especially shrubbery and rocks, there are almost just trees.

Good tile variation though.

 

[~Void~]

It's great, in fact. You just need to put shrubs/bushes/logs/rocks in between the ashenvale trees and use more tile variation

 

[Gilles]

I think you have pretty good tile variation. I would add more to the river, and as Void said add doodads around the trees, and in the front of the screen.

 

[Craka_J]

Agreed. The tile variation is very good. But... I think the leaves tiles should be more places where trees are placed rather than in the open. Although it looks good in the open here and there; as long as you don't place a lot of it bundled together in open areas, it's fine.
~Craka_J

 

[TheDivineBoss]

Looks rather nice for a beginner, my compliments, maybe add some tiny details, lower some parts etc etc. It looks nice.