My "First" Terrain

[gloryindeath]

Ok, this is the first time I actually sat down and tried terraining. What do you think of this?

Anything I could improve on?

Sorry, but I don't know how to resize the image in the forums. If you could tell me, that would be great.

 

[Pip L]

I like it.

 

[SuPa-]

It's OK, but the sky doesn't match the fog and the scenery

 

[gloryindeath]

^Yea, that's what I though too. Anything else I could improve on?

 

[operator]

Looks like lightning struck down in the back there. Perhaps adding some thunder effects would make it look cool ?

 

[Deep Sea Kraken]

Can you use thumbnails?

@The terrain I like it, but can you post more screenies? and the area by the trees is a little barren.

 

[Terek]

In my opinion the terrain is nice, but I think i'd add a 'stronger' fog ( maybe blue or gray to match the rain, play arround with 200 / 5000 / whatever / ur color values, i'm sorry but I don't know the exact names of the proprieties, if you don't get this just ignore it I guess , not that good at explaining ) ? Or just get it to look all sunny and stuff..

Try using darker grass close to the tree's (there's only green one I think) and some mud here and there.

Try to use better tree's , they kinda have almost no leafs in my opinion ^^

Still, it isn't bad overall, above average i'd say.

Alltho i'm not an expert terrainer, just giving my opinion

 

[gloryindeath]

thanks guys. Yea, I didn't even save that file. It was just my first terrain. I'll try something better later.

 

[RedBlade]

it is very good. and since its the 1st time u make one, its much more good