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Mechanized Abomination

Submitted by Pvt.Toma
This bundle is marked as approved. It works and satisfies the submission rules.
One of the models I wanted to submit for a colossus but changed idea.
It's like lich king revived a gnome and had him built him an abomination with a dash of gnome-tinkering. Use it for whatever.

Keywords:
Golem, Bob Marley, Undead, Mechanical
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Mechanized Abomination (Model)

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11:19, 29th Oct 2015 Misha: Okay, this needs 'decay flesh' and 'decay bone' or 'dissipate' anim, so it fits well enough with war3. I like the sound timing on death animation, but i feel the 'thunderclap' is not really suiting it.. change to 'catapult...
  1. 11:19, 29th Oct 2015
    Misha: Okay, this needs 'decay flesh' and 'decay bone' or 'dissipate' anim, so it fits well enough with war3. I like the sound timing on death animation, but i feel the 'thunderclap' is not really suiting it.. change to 'catapult missile' hitting sound perhaps? also, why not adding an abomination death sound on the very start of the death anim as well? for even more effect? Second thing.. this unit is missing attachment points, like 'hand right' and 'weapon'.

    nicely made, approved
     
  2. Hayate

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    Fanceh, Cyborg Abomination
     
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    This is... disturbing, but also kinda cool! I'm just wondering how he keeps his balance in the attack animations. Also, i see some weird twitching in his muscles and skull, but that might just be the viewer screwing up.
     
  4. Pvt.Toma

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    The twitching is intended cause it seems cooler. More undeadly feeling.

    Edit 2: Actually it's not, I see what you meant. I thought you meant the contract and release part. Fixing it soon.

    Edit 3: Well it should be fine now. In game at least.
     
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    Holy mackerel I'm sure this poor guy wishes he was dead right now!

    Neat concept, he could totally fit in the construct quarter in Naxxramas.
     
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    and that's the most horror model i've ever seen...
     
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    Another hideous creature model hehehe, I like to see this one battles with Misha's Mr. Scary!
     
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    Well,this is without a doubt creative and well made. 5/5
     
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    terminator has some competition
     
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    What kind of horrible will would allow such a creature to live?
     
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    Wow! This is awesome, great work, God Bless!
     
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    There's a little clipping within its right arm, but meh, I doubt it be noticable-much,
    Great work, and somehow ---fleshy---, 4/5
     
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    Would love to see what you guys gonna do with it :D
     
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    Wow, this is awesome and gruesome. And such a tiny file size compared to the level of quality.

    5/5.
     
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    I don't think I'll be able to sleep in night. It's so... nightmarish :D. 5/5 and rep.
     
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    What has been seen cannot be unseen xD
     
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    this idea is not worst but the abomination is like a robot he can move with that batten.
     
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    This is seriously grotesque. :<

    Which is to say, "you accomplished your goal". However, I fail to see how he could attack with the arm which is holding himself up.
     
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    Okay, here' are a few things i'm miffed with on this guy;
    first: there's too much TC (i guess?) so this poor guy's head is totally lost within the torso area.. I'd suggest loosing some on the torso, so the head is easy to see..
    second: why does he have to flip his gun arm like that to shoot? really too flimsy if you're making a big construct that has more mechanical support than my construct
    third: there's z-fighting on the gun arm..
    fourth: some better/scarier teeth and actual insides of his mouth could be good, for more creepiness

    :xxd: maybe? but this one needs a few tweaks
    Lich King :p