Mechanized Abomination

This bundle is marked as approved. It works and satisfies the submission rules.
One of the models I wanted to submit for a colossus but changed idea.
It's like lich king revived a gnome and had him built him an abomination with a dash of gnome-tinkering. Use it for whatever.

Keywords:
Golem, Bob Marley, Undead, Mechanical
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Mechanized Abomination (Model)

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11:19, 29th Oct 2015 Misha: Okay, this needs 'decay flesh' and 'decay bone' or 'dissipate' anim, so it fits well enough with war3. I like the sound timing on death animation, but i feel the 'thunderclap' is not really suiting it.. change to 'catapult...

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11:19, 29th Oct 2015
Misha: Okay, this needs 'decay flesh' and 'decay bone' or 'dissipate' anim, so it fits well enough with war3. I like the sound timing on death animation, but i feel the 'thunderclap' is not really suiting it.. change to 'catapult missile' hitting sound perhaps? also, why not adding an abomination death sound on the very start of the death anim as well? for even more effect? Second thing.. this unit is missing attachment points, like 'hand right' and 'weapon'.

nicely made, approved
 
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Another hideous creature model hehehe, I like to see this one battles with Misha's Mr. Scary!
 
Okay, here' are a few things i'm miffed with on this guy;
first: there's too much TC (i guess?) so this poor guy's head is totally lost within the torso area.. I'd suggest loosing some on the torso, so the head is easy to see..
second: why does he have to flip his gun arm like that to shoot? really too flimsy if you're making a big construct that has more mechanical support than my construct
third: there's z-fighting on the gun arm..
fourth: some better/scarier teeth and actual insides of his mouth could be good, for more creepiness

Another hideous creature model hehehe, I like to see this one battles with Misha's Mr. Scary!
:xxd: maybe? but this one needs a few tweaks
What kind of horrible will would allow such a creature to live?
Lich King :p
 
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Okay, here' are a few things i'm miffed with on this guy;
first: there's too much TC (i guess?) so this poor guy's head is totally lost within the torso area.. I'd suggest loosing some on the torso, so the head is easy to see..
second: why does he have to flip his gun arm like that to shoot? really too flimsy if you're making a big construct that has more mechanical support than my construct
third: there's z-fighting on the gun arm..
fourth: some better/scarier teeth and actual insides of his mouth could be good, for more creepiness


:xxd: maybe? but this one needs a few tweaks

Lich King :p

Not sure what you meant by the 3rd one, rest should be ok.
 
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