madman9800-home in the wilderness

[madman9800]

Here is a terrain i made of some persons home in the winderness
Things to notice:
-the grave
-the 2 watefalls
-the home in the tree
-the little farm
-the table
-the puddle

Please give feedback, thanks.

 

[Mor)L(unE]

Looks pretty good! but i think you should use some rocks for the cliffs

 

[Naze]

Yes, Mor)L(une is right. You need rocks. But it is awesome! I like the way you used the fog. Nice!

 

[ragingspeedhorn]

Looks really good, but the garden seems too neat for a "home in the wilderness".

 

[<Offspring>]

Looks pretty nice imo. looks like a hobbit home

 

[Oziris]

yea a hobbit home.It's good i love it but add some rocks for the cliffs

 

[Craka_J]

Hobbits live under hills, not in trees. But yeah, the exterior decorations definitely look hobbit/elvish to me.

The terrain is nice overall, but here are some flaws:

• The "puddle" is more of a pond, and far too small to be fed by all of that water by the waterfalls for it to end as a small shallow puddle or pond. Make it much larger!
• The farm looks like a poorly made garden. Make more corn doodads and maybe add a "Village_Crops" tile along the path of the corn to make it more obvious that it is a farm.
• The treehouse is sticking out too much. It has no support under it, so in reality it wouldn't last very long, especially through storms and especially hurricanes.

The environmental usage seems to be pretty good. Could still use more work around the waterfall and in the background and maybe even by the little picnic area as well. The fog and sky blend very well with the terrain, and that is certainly a plus.
The terrain looks very tidy and well cared for. Since it is an elven area, this all fits well. So good job!

I gave you +Rep since this was actually a pretty nice piece. Can still use some more improvements though.
~Craka_J

 

[Naze]

Oh, and I forgot to tell u a thing. Add trees at the horizon, bcause I can see the end of the map and this is terrible. Nice use of the fog (I know I'm telling this again, but liked!)

 

[Belgarath]

Cut out the edges of the cliffs by using grass, it's a little too tidy otherwise and the house looks very unnatural.

 

[Gilles]

You need to work on your background, and your waterfall looks nice, but it looks man made. It's too clean-cut. It goes straight down, then follows a straight path, turn a perfect 90* angle, then falls into a much too small pond.

 

[Naze]

I thinik madman9800 isn't paying attention anymore to this thread... But if he still, I am saying that I agree that the house is strange... There is no support and it is too tiny to the guy who lives in it.

 

[madman9800]

im really sorry for the super late responce, but i havnt logged onto this site in like forever (we went to CIF in football and iv been really busy, practice was extened by 2 hours!!) and i dont think ill really be doing any kind of modification for warcraft or any other game, i dont think ill play games more then 1 hour a week, im just way too busy and it sucks...i really wish i could make an rpg with wc3, but oh well, it wont happen...