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Ralle: April 16
Set to "Pending".
Lacking Description: Description Generator (Easy) /Template (Hard) > No longer recommended
Poor and lacking Terrain: Terrain Tutorial
Poor Gameplay, not a lot of originality or fun: General Mapping Tutorials
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Moderated Version: 1.8a
Date: 05/Apr/2013 00:52:09
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Set to "Pending".
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| » Vengeancekael:[c] 「Profile :: Hive Staff」 |
| » Reasons: |
Lacking Description: Description Generator (Easy) /
Poor and lacking Terrain: Terrain Tutorial
Poor Gameplay, not a lot of originality or fun: General Mapping Tutorials
| » Comment: |
Do not place green trees on red stone >_>
Horrible camera work, in the beginning you literally just pan to the ending boss of the map which is 5 steps away from the wisp. (Also hurts the story)
Wrong spell icon placement. (The learned skill is at a different position than when learning it) - How to
Bad question naming. (Searching the wife of someone with the quest title 'The Woman' >_> <_<)
Pan the camera to the player when you enter a teleporter.
You can burn trees down with Flame Strike. (Probably not a good idea to allow that)
No custom spells.
Boring character model.
Ya know what, I don't even have to play for longer than 5 minutes to reject this:
Overall, your skills are very lacking and you shouldn't make such a big map when you're still a starter.
Improve your writing skills, try creating something original (not some generic quests!), better triggering skills so that you may add more complicated events to your map and also custom spells and definitely improve your terraining.
Terraining-wise, you place doodads where they don't match with the rest of the environment and the terrain itself is quite flat and looks rather unnatural.
Finally, description-wise, list the map's features (Though I guess you didn't cuz it doesn't have anything special) and write more about the gameplay.
Horrible camera work, in the beginning you literally just pan to the ending boss of the map which is 5 steps away from the wisp. (Also hurts the story)
Wrong spell icon placement. (The learned skill is at a different position than when learning it) - How to
Bad question naming. (Searching the wife of someone with the quest title 'The Woman' >_> <_<)
Pan the camera to the player when you enter a teleporter.
You can burn trees down with Flame Strike. (Probably not a good idea to allow that)
No custom spells.
Boring character model.
Ya know what, I don't even have to play for longer than 5 minutes to reject this:
Overall, your skills are very lacking and you shouldn't make such a big map when you're still a starter.
Improve your writing skills, try creating something original (not some generic quests!), better triggering skills so that you may add more complicated events to your map and also custom spells and definitely improve your terraining.
Terraining-wise, you place doodads where they don't match with the rest of the environment and the terrain itself is quite flat and looks rather unnatural.
Finally, description-wise, list the map's features (Though I guess you didn't cuz it doesn't have anything special) and write more about the gameplay.
| » Rules: [c] 「Map Submission」 |
| » Contact: [c] 「Staff Contact」 |
| Verdict + - |
| Not Rated |
Suggestions:
Moderated Version: 1.8a
Date: 05/Apr/2013 00:52:09
[EDIT]
Orcnet: VM or PM us once you have made revisions of VengeanceKael
