Left in Memory

[Celaquil]

I suddenly got inspiration to do some terrain, hope you all like it ^^

"Draenor... So long have we raided these lands of Azeroth, that we have forgotten the world of which we came from The only thing that is left now; is only the memory of how we left it..."

 

[Masiah]

Nearly no tile variation, barely no doodads, randomly shaped terrain. I fear it's not very good.

 

[thedeathunterxx]

interesting...

it needs help though.

The weather is disgusting... the wind is just ugly :/ sry
and it needs a better atmoshpere, like use different fog... and instead of using that blusish sky with that red fog, you should use a brown or orange fog with a fogged sky.

the dodads are fine , because the scarceness is what makez it mystical

 

[NinjasDontFight]

Ewwww... Red foggg...

 

[~Void~]

Not your best, but I do like the rocks. It could use some rubble and destroyed catapults or something, though, and that fog is not a good choice. You should put a background in.

 

[Gilles]

Not enough, but it's a good start. I like the banner and the rocks.

 

[Oziris]

I like the banner and ther rocks xD could use some destroyed catapults would be sexy and the fog is bad, better add a background!

 

[Celaquil]

Riight, since everyone is so mean today (joke) I will work on it when I get home from school

And for he who said something about the shy, it IS fogged sky, and i dont know why its comming up bluish in that particulare corner... <.<

 

[Cham[p]ion]

Like deez peeps have already said, it lacks the technicals, but it has a good atmosphere. It really puts forth the whole wasteland concept. ('-'d)

 

[Belgarath]

That corner kills it... good atmosphere though, I think you should keep it empty TBH.

 

[thedeathunterxx]

o ya i notice

well instead of using fogged sky, try Blizzard sky.

 

[Celaquil]

Right, I've done some improvements, and will most likely let this be the final... Since I got much homework to do today.. <.<

(P.S: 10 points to the one who can find the ghost! )

 

[Duke]

It's nice, and u mean normal ghost ud units from wc3?

 

[NinjasDontFight]

I dont particually like the left hill so high, and that Orc Guard Tower looks kinda random. Something about the weather + Gate bothers me, the contrast of the weather intensity I guess.

 

[X.e.r.e.X]

That's the ghost? :O:O:O:O:O:O:O

 

[Celaquil]

nope xerex, and well, the wather is Outland wind! ... and i like it so it will stay where it is, and the ghost is formed by the fog, its a face in the fog, if you use a lower or higher contrast tool or something it might be easier to see it also, how can a orc tower be random seeing whats the theme of the terrain...? <.<

 

[Duke]

Did I find hiM?

 

[Gilles]

Downloaded the wrong image. Oh well.

 

[Celaquil]

Duke found the one I were thinking of But hey, there is one where Gilles pointed as well! So your both winners

 

[Gilles]

Yeah that's right, I abused my powers.

 

[Celaquil]

Didnt take me long to prevent that anyone saw it... <.<

 

[Gilles]

Dang. I can't lock posts or anything.

 

[Duke]

Downloaded the wrong image. Oh well.

THis is tower. -.-'

 

[Celaquil]

Well, it might be that Gilles pointed out the tower believing that was the ghost, but if you look closely there is a ghost in the fog inside the circle that gilles made... so... <.<

 

[Duke]

Well, it might be that Gilles pointed out the tower believing that was the ghost, but if you look closely there is a ghost in the fog inside the circle that gilles made... so... <.<

Okay *thumbs up*

 

[Craka_J]

About the first terrain you posted:

Although its very plain as many have already stated, it still looks pretty good. Just add some more large and small spires and rocks on the left in the background popping from the fog and it'll look much better. Right now it looks more like a desert rather than the Outlands.

~Craka_J

 

[TheToastedChicken]

Make a harder ghost to find next time. That one was easy^^ found it in 5 secs.

 

[Celaquil]

Lol, problem is I didnt "make" the ghost, it was made due to the look of the outland wind effect

 

[TheToastedChicken]

haha ok^^

 

[Linaze]

So much red, still a good terrain imo. Could use a few more doodads here and there, though.