Last Crusade!

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This map had been examined by Alexis Septimus.
If you think this map review is not accurate or require another review, feel free to contact Alexis Septimus. But, map would only be review again for second time and also for the last time unless under certain circumstances. It would be selfish to request constantly a mod/admin to keep review your map as there is many other maps waiting for approval as well.

However, if you still insist of another review after it had been review for second time. Feel free to contact other admin.

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1) Terrain - Horrible (1)
2) Ingenuity - Horrible (1)
3) Minor Error - Horrible (1)
4) Replay Value - Horrible (1)
5) Fun factor/gameplay - Horrible (1)
6) Use of imported material - Horrible (1)
7) Single player -
8) AI support -
9) Camera -
10) Originality -
11) File Size - Bad (2)
12) Balancing -
13) Packaging - Horrible (1)
14) Credits - Horrible (1)
15) Storyline - Bad (2)
16) Theme -
17) Protection - Excellent (5)
18) Quality - Horrible (1)
19) Description/Information - Horrible (1)
20) Hiveworkshop rules & regulation - Horrible (1)

Total Accumulation Point : 20/70 + (-50) (Review) = -30

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[-] - Lot's of typo error.
[-] - Trigger have lot's of leak.
[-] - Poorly develop trigger, with several part could possibly cause lag.
[-] - Poor terrain/destructible.
[-] - Map violate rules of hiveworkshop. (Did not fully translate everything into English.)

Review : Ok, you just mention this is your first map. But, you did not provide more information about your map although your map might had all those necessary information.

In addition, lot's of your trigger have leak and improper function. This could eventually cause a serious lag if been play for a long duration.

Plus, you did not give credit when you use somebody else resources and did not fully translate everything into english.

Do not give me the excuse "Oh, this is my first map" cause that excuse is totally unacceptable, I have seen some newbie that did a great job to their first map and it took him 3 months to complete his map. Creating a map require hardwork, determination and patience. Lack of this and you would never ever able to create a good map.

Score - -30/100
Rating - 0/100
Condition - Very Poor
Status - Rejected
Review - 1

The map might not be fully tested, if any user of the map found bug/error or anything else.
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[Gath_Stormer]

what is it? more information?