Knights' Temple

[Vuormalainen]

Started a new project yesterday and I noticed making the terrain was a lot of fun and turned out pretty good. But "good" is not enough, what can I do to improve it even more? Thanks.

PS: Sorry for having a doodad selected on the screenshots, lol.

NIGHT

MORNING

 

[M0rbid]

In my opinion in both of your screenshots the fog (darkness) is way to intense...
It's pretty hard to see anything of the terraining...
I know what you're aming for, but it's a bit to much of it!

 

[Vuormalainen]

In my opinion in both of your screenshots the fog (darkness) is way to intense...
It's pretty hard to see anything of the terraining...
I know what you're aming for, but it's a bit to much of it!

Alright, lemme upload another screenshot soon.

 

[Solaris]

Quite Good, I like the idea with the temple.
The night-picture definetly need a few more light sources.
In both pictures the wooden door looks a bit awkward, as if it is too big or in an incorrect angle.
Also irritating is the tree growing on stone, it use another tile there.
And you could add some Fishes, Birds and maybe a bit more grass and/or plants.
Add the fog indivdually (in the Utm) and do not use the region based fog.
Would love to see an updated version of it...

 

[Vuormalainen]

Quite Good, I like the idea with the temple.
The night-picture definetly need a few more light sources.
In both pictures the wooden door looks a bit awkward, as if it is too big or in an incorrect angle.
Also irritating is the tree growing on stone, it use another tile there.
And you could add some Fishes, Birds and maybe a bit more grass and/or plants.
Add the fog indivdually (in the Utm) and do not use the region based fog.
Would love to see an updated version of it...

Damn, noticed I didn't get the light sources into the pics, theres actually a lot of em

I'll try add more vegetation, thanks!

btw, i don't use Utm, do you know where I can find the fog model or what is its name in the map?

 

[M0rbid]

I think it's not in the normal WE, you can easily export it from UTM and import it into the normal map though!

 

[Vuormalainen]

Can't find the fog model in The Ultimate Terraining Map v4x :/

edit: gonna search version 3

 

[M0rbid]

It's called glow.mdx if I remember correctly!

 

[Vuormalainen]

Found it, tho I don't seem to have use for it

 

[M0rbid]

it can alyways be used to underline the glow of a street light or to create atmosphere.

I barely made any terrain without it...

 

[Mantis_Style]

Quite Good, I like the idea with the temple.
The night-picture definetly need a few more light sources.
[...]
Also irritating is the tree growing on stone, it use another tile there.
And you could add some Fishes, Birds and maybe a bit more grass and/or plants.
[...]
Would love to see an updated version of it...

I agree.

In my opinion there is missing something on the left side, there's only water and it appears a bit empty.

 

[Dr. House]

You need to work on that fog but besides that i kinda like it just needs a little bit of inprovement. +Cookie for you by DR.House himself (beware these cookies can contain pills or any other form of inappropriated items that shouldnt be in cookies)

 

[Belgarath]

seems a bit too sinister for a knights temple
the fog is a bit too strong, you should put some blue or pink in the day one yo

 

[-SoulBurn]

I like it =D
You really should reduce the fog in the morning. Try, also, making it just slightly yellow.

 

[~Void~]

Fog is good, but not like that. Fog should have depth; with this, it just looks like you put a semitransparent layer of white over the image

 

[-SoulBurn]

Fog is good, but not like that. Fog should have depth; with this, it just looks like you put a semitransparent layer of white over the image

Listen to the guy, he knows what he says ;D

ALso, you could try adding some lights