Knight of the Silver Hand

[Moderator]

13:55, 25th Jul 2015
Misha: Imho, this really feels too simple for me, it being only a captain with a human mage head and a neat cape.. try reworking it much more.. and since silver hand is paladins, i suggest more paladin textures added

 

[Vinz]

Pretty nice, I suggest custom shoulderpads.

 

[Radagast]

Pretty good for first model, I would Suggest like mythic said Some different shoulderpads, Try to animate the Cape, then maybe change the head a bit more. Also try to make the sword and shield more unique.

 

[firevlad711]

For a first model,is preatty good.

 

[WhiteDeath]

Remodel the head so that the hair is short, this way you won't have to animate it, remove the cape, you wont be able to animate it. Animating hair and cloaks is very hard, avoid having to do it for now. His neck has a hair texture change it to some skin texture, try to add in changes to the model, maybe make the shield better, change the sword, the gloves and the boots, those will be easy to change. About the portrait, the texture of the inside of the mouth is brown, change it to a mouthy texture; the filter mode of the second layer of the material of the shoulder pads is transparent, it should be blend.

 

[Maximum_Evil]

head and body looks kinda seperate, but it looks pretty good

 

[Cazeoj276]

It feels really basic while not really bringing anything new to the table to be honest.

 

[Jaina Proudless]

Looks like you stuck a squashed priest's head on a captain and added a cape.

 

[Bain_Rebirth]

Pretty great for a new model, but the hair clips through his back and his neck bobs out of the torso.

 

[Dat Ansin Doe]

Pretty nice, I suggest custom shoulderpads.

I was about to say that too.

Other than that it looks like the priest head doesn't fit IMO. I think an alternative version of a captain's head would be good.

Very well done for your first model!

 

[Misha]

the neck texture is far too bright.. you gotta remember that the head creates a shadow on the neck, because it is above it also the neck sticks abruptly from the armor.. some sort of.. something around the neck would do good to separate the two visually and not make it look bad

 

[MatiS]

the neck texture is far too bright

I know... I'll add custom one when I finish shoulder pads