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Jack's Adventure

This bundle is marked as useful / simple. Simplicity is bliss, low effort and/or may contain minor bugs.
-Jack's Adventure-
A mystery will unfold in this storyline, a storyline that you will unravel with enthusiasm
Let's play.

Jack's Adventure is an RPG created by the folks at
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/threads/lets-make-a-map-forum-game-idea.268663/page-1
It follows the story of a mysterious character named Jack.

Screenshots to be added

Information

As you unravel the story, you may choose from 8 distinct classes.
The story was formed from a group of many people who colluded together in a thread to create one truly unique RPG map.


The cast and crew of http://www.hiveworkshop.com/threads/lets-make-a-map-forum-game-idea.268663/page-1
Special thanks to them for their support!
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Paillan
5 - 4 - 2017 Moderation No changes were made in more than 3 months which means that no changes are inteded to be made. Acording to rules, this implies that your map will now be classified as substandard. If you wish to revert this decision you can PM...

deepstrasz

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-hero selected during goblin cinematic scene (actually it's present in most if not all scenes); some camera angles wouldn't hurt either
-chose the riddle but killed the fighting goblin and the way was cleared
-maybe related to the above: whenever the "think about your life" is used, Jack also gets the message with "maybe thinking about it too much" or "I can't think about any realistic answer"
-why is it named Hive community? It doesn't really have anything to do with the community...
-some of the icons for the heroes are misleading
-there's a sign/buff looking like Healing on the hero that says "tooltip missing"; I chose the totem wielder; then the Inner Fire buff with the same missing tooltip; I guess every totem has its buff cast on the hero; there's also a Divine Shield buff with tooltip missing; it seems that the buffs lose their working description when the totem expires; even Orb of Respite buff's description becomes null...
-losing the Think About Your Life ability cuts from the game's humour
-"Move!" Well, there was space around him
-fighting mercy? Shouldn't mercy have pity on you? Or is it just half-mercy since it suggested "pacifying" the hero's mind?
-a fire zone should also appear on the hero's position to avoid lame tactics like standing still
-the Healing buff with no tooltip also appeared on Mercy
-Tribal Fury does not take mana; is it intended?
-funny, you have to destroy a building to actually get under it :D (catacombs)
-crap.... Mine Sweeper... this part is just boring; the same enemy appearing; it's just a gamble
-ability descriptions could be explicit: how much healing the totem does etc.
-there's a real issues with buffs and their duplicates with the description: tooltip missing; even Tribal Fury has it, even Brilliance Aura
-what's the difference between the Ring of Protection +3 and Shield of the Dead apart from the name, icon and description? They, both, give +3 armour
-the Spider Caverns need more creep variation (a broodmother boss; other ranged-melee, spell casting spiders etc.)
-hahaha... who's even saying that? It seems the author breaks the fourth wall and not the protagonist
-between fights in the Grand Arena, the hero gets Vengeance Aura. What for if it can't be used during the battles? Actually, it also appeared during battle later in the game
-pause the hero or else he's going to talk to the dryad, I mean Truth while somewhere behind her or a tree
-funny thing: Tribal Fury is a strange type of ability in that it's not affected by Silence
-terrain is pretty much unrefined
-the place with teleportation switches is insane; it would really help if teleportation would be instant to avoid time waste
-Echo of Mercy's illusion is compromised the original using Life Drain
-during the last battle with Venar, my hero was teleported somewhere where he said something about a "deadly maze ahead"... and he did not appear

2.5/5 until the impeding bug is fixed.
 
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