Island Jungle

[Koopa124]

Smooth out the river.

And make more choices that just "Good" "Bad".

 

[Deathcom3s]

i posted the new screenies, look at them!

 

[Gilles]

Pretty good. I like your waterfall lot.

Maybe try changing the fog for a better effect. Green or yellow.

I think you could use more variation in plants. I get tiered of shrubs.

 

[Oziris]

Wow looks much bether!

 

[Craka_J]

Very nice work. I really like the first two, however what I didn't like about the third one was that the trees are too horizontal and the background on the right side is very plain and... well, it's barely a background terrain at all! I recommend adding one.

The Fourth one was very plain too. What made this one feel so empty was the empty patch in the bottom of the terrain where the rock tiles are. Replace that with environmental doodads or something to better help the atmosphere.

I didn't like the fifth, sixth, and seventh terrains though because of the very pointy mountain in the island. Try to make mountains look more smooth and bumpy, instead of rocky spikes poking out of the earth.

Overall though, you're pretty good. I think that if you keep at it, you'll eventually be a very good terrainer. I believe this because your first three terrains are more than decent, which is suprising! So good job again and I hope you show us more of your work in the future.

PS: Never rush your terrains! No matter how bad we want to see your terrains, it is best to let us all wait and take your time to make your terrain the best it can be. Rushed terrains always come out looking horrible or not as great as they could be, plus it is very noticable.

~Craka_J

 

[Deathcom3s]

Thnx for the feedback guys, i kinda rushed it because i was working on it but i had to go do something in a couple of minutes so i just replaced the trees, yeah, i'm going to download some new plant models later , so just hang tight.

I'm trying to find another good Jungley looking tree but i can't seem to find one that fits or that i like, any ideas?

Last of all i'm going to add some weather effects today so i'll post those as soon as possible.

 

[seruk]

Get your hands on Nasrudin's treepack and get some more palm variations asap!

 

[~Void~]

You should use much more doodads/trees.Looks good though.

Current doodad count:7367

Should be self-explanatory.

Well I like it