I have a story outline idea for a campaign and would like feedback on it so here it is
Form the begin the Lunaitms have been the wardens of Ulia now there are call on once again for the only entrance for the world the void gate had open once more.
· Void gate opens a party of human come through and a party of Lunaitms watch them form secret
· The king of the Lunaitms order them in prison
· The party confronts the human and in prison them there to fun out why they have entered Ulia.
· The humans try to break out but fail
· The human King Arthur ask for asylum and tell why there are running
· This info is sent to the King who orders them kill and the gate destroy
· They order are ignored and Arthur is sent to the Maiden of Ulia and the Lunar well
· The maiden performs a ritual with the Lunar well to see the if Arthur story is true
· The maiden tells Arthur about her concerns about the king and give him the sword Duskwoe to help her
· The King founds out and order the maiden in prisoned and the sword recovered
· In his “madness” the King try to awaken the bound immortals to free them of the threat the humans were righting
· Arthur and the maiden stop him
· The maiden finds out the King was right and is force to destroy the gate
Form the begin the Lunaitms have been the wardens of Ulia now there are call on once again for the only entrance for the world the void gate had open once more.
· Void gate opens a party of human come through and a party of Lunaitms watch them form secret
· The king of the Lunaitms order them in prison
· The party confronts the human and in prison them there to fun out why they have entered Ulia.
· The humans try to break out but fail
· The human King Arthur ask for asylum and tell why there are running
· This info is sent to the King who orders them kill and the gate destroy
· They order are ignored and Arthur is sent to the Maiden of Ulia and the Lunar well
· The maiden performs a ritual with the Lunar well to see the if Arthur story is true
· The maiden tells Arthur about her concerns about the king and give him the sword Duskwoe to help her
· The King founds out and order the maiden in prisoned and the sword recovered
· In his “madness” the King try to awaken the bound immortals to free them of the threat the humans were righting
· Arthur and the maiden stop him
· The maiden finds out the King was right and is force to destroy the gate