Icecrown Islands

[Shadow Fury]

You don't seem to be familiar with the Map Submission Rules. As stated, you need a longer description and a credits list. Try giving information about creeps, neutral buildings, adoptable strategies and such. Some screenshots would also be great.

PS: Avoid using the word "shit" too much

 

[That_Guy_There]

A GRUNT CAME OUT OF NOWHERE!

Got some links to help ye out!

• ap0calypse's Overall Description Guide
  Spoiler: Link:

  http://www.hiveworkshop.com/threads/hero-craft-function-role-synergy-and-balance.134337/
• Legal_Ease's "How to add a Screenshot to your map"
  Spoiler: Link:

  http://www.hiveworkshop.com/threads/how-to-add-a-screenshot-to-your-map-description.241054/

Explicit and Vulgar words won't help any map. Try to mind your language.
PS. If anyone dislikes/hates What I'm doing. Or if I'm just purely Irritating. I can stop.

GRUNT SLOWLY WALKS AWAY

 

[λcid™]

im new and im not creative :I but thanks doe

 

[Rufus]

It is good that you have tried to improve your description, but it could really use some mroe information to be complete.
The links taht That_Guy_There suggested is really useful. Check them both out, and try to update your description accordingly.

Good luck!

 

[Paillan]

5 - 4 - 2017 Moderation

No changes were made in more than 3 months which means that no changes are inteded to be made. Acording to rules, this implies that your map will now be classified as substandard. If you wish to revert this decision you can PM a map reviewer once you have updated the map.

Set to Substandard.

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These will help make a better description:

Map description threads

Description Guide - Melee Maps
Map Description - Templates
Melee Map Description Generator v1.3
Map Description Generator [1.2]
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