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Human Error v1.0

Submitted by APproject
This bundle is marked as approved. It works and satisfies the submission rules.
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Art by Pharaoh_

v1.0

Introduction


Cinematic Contest #5 : Fantasy Weds Modern entry. Cinematic about calamitious discovery made by archaeologists.

Map is unprotected, feel free to do with it whatever you want.

Development period: 2014-09-23 - 2014-10-24


Story

A group of archaeologists dicovers a hidden ancient tomb entrance beneath the sands of Egypt.

Credits

Voice acting, model editing, sound editing: APproject

Music:

Ancient Egyptian Music - Pharaoh Ramses II
Song of the Pharaohs
Mesektet - Forgotten Tomb
Sjellos - Her Dark Shadow
Otavan Veret - III
Kenji Kawai - Pacific Attack

Sound Effects:

pond5.com

WcUnderground Models:

Vexiant
Sanistra
Henry
F@ll
Daerone
Blackstorm

Hiveworkshop Models:

skrab
Illidan(Evil)X
Fingolfin
Kofi_Banan
spong3bob
Deolrin
xorkatoss
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Chriz.
diosilva16
WILL THE ALMIGHTY
sunwarrior25
Nbah
Tr!KzZ
tobyfat50

XGM Models:

Reinless

Wc3C Models:

Illidan(evil)x

Chaosrealm Skins:

Firstlegacy

Chaosrealm Models:

Sanistra

The Helper Models:

WindexIsBack

Preview


Screenshots (Count: 3)
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Keywords:
Human Error, Human, Error, Cinematic, Fantasy, Magic, Egypt, Mythology, Contest, APproject, Egyptian.
Contents

Human Error v1.0 (Map)

Reviews
Moderator
00:55, 4th Apr 2015 StoPCampinGn00b: Approved based off of SF's review.
  1. APproject

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    Cinematic contest is over, so as planned I am uploading it on the map section. Wish you good film for those who has not seen it yet. :)

    WATCH NOW
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KN3nWyaax9w
     
    Last edited: Nov 15, 2015
  2. WhiteFang

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    Wow...how did you even do this?It looks Amazing!Ill definitely download and tell you what i think
     
  3. Sclammerz

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    How nice you uploaded it. :)
     
  4. A great cinematic, good work :)
     
  5. LordDz

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    Yeah so... Yeah.

    That was good.
     
  6. Shadow Fury

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    TERRAIN

    The terrain was really magnificent! It was impressive to see the research area so well done with all that doodads you've put wisely. The sand and dirt tiles you used really mixed well and give the feeling of a real desert. The tomb then was extraordinary. It really makes you feel of an archaic and insidious tomb with all those ancient statues, walls and other old objects. I guess that the tomb cannot be done better than it is now. Overall the whole terrain was outstanding and I have nothing else to say about it.


    STORY AND CINEMATIC ISSUES

    The cinematic has an intriguing story which makes you ask "What will happen next?" The sound effects and the music were fantastic. The voice acting was definitely an amazing addition to make me know the feelings of the character. Although I felt that the voices did not convey very well the characters' emotions, they were decent enough. I'm astonished how you manipulated the animation of all characters. Seeing the characters moving their lips and arms while talking was unbelievable. Furthermore, when the characters entered the tomb, it was really awesome. It was so dark and louring that the watcher you can feel it's creepy in there. The way the torches enlight the path and the sudden lightening up of braziers were majestic features. The only thing that concerned me was that the cinematic developed slowly. The characters kept moving at a slow pace and that was a bit boring. Why not making them a bit faster? However, other than that, I must admit that the story evolved well and the cinematic proceeded smoothly


    OTHER ISSUES

    Now I'd like to draw your attention to some little details. I was disappointed to see some supernatural events throughout the cinematic. For example, in the very beginning, the car movement was strange and awkward. It seemed like a toy car controlled by an invisible hand. Besides, some of the researchers on the digging site in front of the door were immobile like statues. Then, when the massive boulder fell on Eric, I expected him to be squashed and to see some blood but I just saw that guy playing his death animation as if nothing fell on him. Some of his body was inside the boulder if you look well at that scene. In addition, it was ridiculous to see how the fiery part of the torch held by William touched the hand of Eric. Finally, one of the monsters in the final scene passed from Anubis like a ghost as he managed to pass through his legs by colliding with them.


    OVERALL RESULT


    This cinematic is simply excellent and of high-quality. The issues I pointed out are really minor and ignorable so I am happy to give this cinematic 4.75/5 and vote for APPROVAL!
     
  7. APproject

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    Thanks, guys. :)

    I appreciate your review, Shadow Fury. Truly there were a lot of small things that needs to be polished for even better experience. Oh and a great idea about the boulder, I never thought of that and no one else suggested it. :)
     
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    This was the winning entry in the contest. Must be approved! 5/5
     
  9. Shadow Fury

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    One last thing!
    "Burried" is wrong. It should be "buried"
    Your map is near to perfection so you have to fix those tiny tedious mistakes!
     
  10. Quilnez

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    I enjoyed this a lot. :)
     
  11. purparisien

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    Wonderful map : good lighting, good animation, good models...
    It really deserves a 5/5
    We could only hope it lasts longer
     
  12. APproject

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    Thanks, guys. :) I surely coud have made it longer, sadly contest had a limitation of 10 minutes for an entry and it is already 9:58 without credits.
     
  13. MasterTrainer

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    OH MY GOD another APproject map. *omg omg omg*
    Thanks for the share!
     
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    Hi,APproject,me again.
    Your cinematic is fantastic and full of imagination,even with some tiny flaw,wish to give you 9/5 if I could.
     
  15. Sgt.Pierce

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    So awesome cinematic! 10/5! ahahahaha fascinating environment and those models! :D
     
  16. Fang

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    Yeah! Another APproject map! :)
     
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    My Warcraft 3 is 1.24e, why is there a mistake 0.0?
     
  18. APproject

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    I am not sure. It should work. Try setting video settings to the max, but I doubt if it will be the case. It helps in case of loading error though.