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High elf citadel - first terrain

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Here's my first terrain posted on the internet. Please tell me what you think, and how I can improve it. :smile:
 

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Everything is too spammed, you need more height variation and a better citadel design. Also fix the lights, either take thema away or make them seem like a huge burst of light (aka no gaps and a bit stronger)
 
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lol hawkwing xD he said and i quote on quote

" I'd like to see a more professional camera angle "

lol this is a First terrain...how proffesional can u get ! lmao

but back to the point. Its actually a good piece for a first terrain. The atmosphere is bright and cheery. However there are points you should aim to fix.

The scaling is on check, but i think you should first make the trees a bit scaled smaller in accordance with the castle. It doesn't seem to fit.

add a denser fog, by using 0 Z and 4000 y perhaps ? and consider adding mountains in the background. A new style of mountains is using Steinslord rocks.
 
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It's kind of "in" right now to take a shot looking very slightly down on the terrain from an angle turned a little bit clockwise, that's Raid's fault :p

You could always go for the same kind of thing as I mentioned above except looking up at the castle. I don't see that too often.
 
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