My First Terrain :D

[ike_ike]

After seeing some of the terrain around here, I decided to post my (first!) terrain ever! Still in progress, but the screenshot here shows the hero choosing area.
Please tell me what I've done wrong

 

[Oziris]

Well i dont like the units that u put ther and a fog-rain will be nice and dont put the rise of light in Ashavle forest that is not right!If this is your fist terrine i like it!And remember dont ever! but ever! use Blizzard cliffs!!! It sucks try to use the rise terrine looks much much bether.

 

[Naze]

Well... As Oziris said, Blizzard Cliffs aren't so good, because they look unnatural. Nice start. the problem is that the terrain is so... "Warcrafty". I don't know if you already noticed that the warcraft's trees size, how the trees looks like, and etc, isn't natural. You could add a fog to your map. And remember, do not use blizzard cliffs. Keep trying!!

 

[<Offspring>]

Don't leave blank spots in the corners, fill em up with environment. And switch to Game View settings + what Oziriz said

 

[Gilles]

Not bad at all. But you need height variation and you need to use more plant life. Shrubs, tinted river rushes, and maybe corn or wheat tinted.

 

[ike_ike]

Don't leave blank spots in the corners, fill em up with environment. And switch to Game View settings + what Oziriz said

It's not finished yet, hence the WIP -.-''

You can't actually see the cliffs in game, because I've hidden them with pathing and sight blockers. I only used them for the elevation. But thanks anyway.

@Gilles: More plants? Okay. I though I was overdosing on environment already

 

[Gilles]

@Gilles: More plants? Okay. I though I was overdosing on environment already

Not in the least. No need for more rocks or trees or anything, just plants to put around them. Put plants at the base of trees, in amongst rocks and other doodads.