First Finished Terrain

[elgitar]

This is my first finished terrain
Please tell me what you think about it ( I think it look crappy but . . )

 

[Azurot]

It actually is pretty good, even though you could some clouds in the background and move that "sun" out the left behind the trees and make it a bit smaller. For the foreground i think it needs some flowers here and there in little bunches. And for the fallen tree try and lift it up some more and put a type of rock slide on that hill. You could also go for a log or two and some hollow stumps. Overall it needs more life and realistic presence! But i think its a good start and hope to see more terrain from you!

 

[M0rbid]

Just look at Azurots post, it's exactly the same post, as I would do.
I just want to underline as a tipp: use more different doodads as nature in foreground!!
Nice start!

 

[Celaquil]

Why is there those brown river rush things when there is no river or water close by? (and those models look horrible in general) Not to mention that it seems unrealistic, given how cloudy and misty it is, that the sun would shine that bright, or even be there at all. I would reccomend just removing it completely and add something else as a center of focus, like for instance a ruin or something.

 

[Craka_J]

Not too bad for a newbie. Good sky, good fog, decent variation of trees, and you even used custom grass models. However, your sun is very unnecessary for this terrain due to the dark sky/fog. The sun makes no sense in such a dark atmosphere. As far as tiles go, your road looks very jagged. Be patient and straighten-out your road by selecting the smallest tile placement square and fix it up. You lack tile variation as well. Throw in some Dirt and Grassy Dirt to help make it looks less plain! The use of only two tiles is noticeable - in a bad way.

For hills, you did a pretty nice job. But keep in mind that there is a Smooth tool for hills to help make pointy/sharp hills look more well-rounded and... smooth. Smooth hills are good! Pointy hills are bad in nearly all cases except for when you're making mountains or cliffs.

And since you're new, just a head's up, NEVER USE TERRAIN CLIFFS! They're ugly and no one likes them.

 

[elgitar]

Im glad you guys liked some of it
Now im gonna make a new terrain, hopefully with some improvements

 

[Piwlady]

Im glad you guys liked some of it
Now im gonna make a new terrain, hopefully with some improvements

I'm sure you will imporve Good luck.

 

[madman9800]

This is FAR from crappy, its actually a very nice terrain. I like the little dirt path.